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joe0ner - 18-21 years old - male

Posted by joe0ner
on March 17th, 2010 at 10:43 PM




in this world i'm in too deep



gave most of what is me



whats its like to have integrity



i'm not sure cause i live blind



in this world i cannot see



who is there to believe?



losing all my sanity



whose there to find?



created this mess



or did it make me?



am i blessed



or do i act differently?



spoiled myself



i'm not descrete



goals, and purposes



is what makes me bleed



mother



what have i done?



this desired hate



has made me the unwanted son



i did not mean



to become what you have seen



the money, and hunger



made me the monster you see



do i live a lie



or do i speak the truth



to better our future



or to ruin our youth



to believe in our dreams



or to stay awake



believing its not true



how can we have peace



when theres competition



our place of opportunity



has no recognition



mother



this monster you see



is my release



and when you sleep



i cry



it's the real me.



 

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  1. theredlady - 41-45 years old - female

    Posted by theredlady on March 17th, 2010 at 10:46 PM

    It's really good.... sad... hurtful... but not... regretful. It's an emotional piece that seems to indicate.. someone "on the fence" about what's wrong or right...good and bad. No regrets except for what one person sees

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  2. Anonymous

    Reply by An EP User Dec 22nd, 2014 at 11:14PM

  3. Shaylon - 26-30 years old - female

    Posted by Shaylon on March 17th, 2010 at 10:49 PM

    I am not sure what it means. Care to explain?

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  4. Anonymous

    Reply by An EP User Dec 22nd, 2014 at 11:14PM

  5. joe0ner - 18-21 years old - male

    Posted by joe0ner on March 17th, 2010 at 10:52 PM

    basically a person living in his youth not understanding life if his bad deeds are right or wrong, and he's ruining his mothers life for his deeds, and basically questioning his life.

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  6. Anonymous

    Reply by An EP User Dec 22nd, 2014 at 11:14PM

  7. joe0ner - 18-21 years old - male

    Posted by joe0ner on March 17th, 2010 at 11:03 PM

    thanks for reading i appreciate, i hope i get luck becoming a writer.

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  8. Anonymous

    Reply by An EP User Dec 22nd, 2014 at 11:14PM

  9. saarah79 - 26-30 years old - female

    Posted by saarah79 on March 25th, 2010 at 1:52 PM

    yes..u have it in u ....its beautfullll

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  10. Anonymous

    Reply by An EP User Dec 22nd, 2014 at 11:14PM

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