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joe0ner - 18-21 years old - male

Posted by joe0ner
on March 17th, 2010 at 10:43 PM

in this world i'm in too deep

gave most of what is me

whats its like to have integrity

i'm not sure cause i live blind

in this world i cannot see

who is there to believe?

losing all my sanity

whose there to find?

created this mess

or did it make me?

am i blessed

or do i act differently?

spoiled myself

i'm not descrete

goals, and purposes

is what makes me bleed


what have i done?

this desired hate

has made me the unwanted son

i did not mean

to become what you have seen

the money, and hunger

made me the monster you see

do i live a lie

or do i speak the truth

to better our future

or to ruin our youth

to believe in our dreams

or to stay awake

believing its not true

how can we have peace

when theres competition

our place of opportunity

has no recognition


this monster you see

is my release

and when you sleep

i cry

it's the real me.


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  1. theredlady - 41-45 years old - female

    Posted by theredlady on March 17th, 2010 at 10:46 PM

    It's really good.... sad... hurtful... but not... regretful. It's an emotional piece that seems to indicate.. someone "on the fence" about what's wrong or right...good and bad. No regrets except for what one person sees

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  2. Shaylon - 26-30 years old - female

    Posted by Shaylon on March 17th, 2010 at 10:49 PM

    I am not sure what it means. Care to explain?

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  3. joe0ner - 18-21 years old - male

    Posted by joe0ner on March 17th, 2010 at 10:52 PM

    basically a person living in his youth not understanding life if his bad deeds are right or wrong, and he's ruining his mothers life for his deeds, and basically questioning his life.

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  4. joe0ner - 18-21 years old - male

    Posted by joe0ner on March 17th, 2010 at 11:03 PM

    thanks for reading i appreciate, i hope i get luck becoming a writer.

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  5. saarah79 - 26-30 years old - female

    Posted by saarah79 on March 25th, 2010 at 1:52 PM

    yes..u have it in u ....its beautfullll

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