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joe0ner - 18-21 years old - male

Posted by joe0ner
on April 9th, 2011 at 10:23 PM


what you feel, nobody believes the words you say


and day by day you feel enraged, feeling like you need to be saved


with all the days exploding your life like a hand grenade


"yeah mother not today, i'm trying to finish planning my suicidal dreams"


to afraid to tell her in real life, its just something that'll be such a relief


but do you really believe? a bullet to the head


will you give you eternal happiness for you to recieve


dont you want to someday have a child, someone you can prevent having these suicidal tendecies


don't you want to live to the fullest? cause you know


we live by the gun but die the bullet





we feel bad when we watch tv, or read the newspaper


what the person has done, but for who he was?


nobody gave that person any love, just for the suicide they have done


nobody would feel if there was no suicide


and newspaper just want another topic line


without suicide the news wouldn't broadcast five minutes of their time


and trust me that five minutes could have made a difference


just say no suicide





gunshot, gunshot you can already see the picture in your head


suicide note is all that's left, with blood stains on the bed


is your life really a threat?


you don't have to feel bad, when people beat you down


saying that you aint a person, cause clowns don't get respect


but how do they know, some clowns just try to get out of debt


and we try to impress, but sometimes you don't get respect none of the less


are you that courageous to pull that trigger on that gun


and if you are why couldn't you just used that courage


towards your father, when he told you wasn't his son


you aren't the only one, cause we all feel like this


what you would peoplel say about you when they try to reminisce


"he was just a person cursed with ignorance"


and right now you're like "let them say whatever they want, i dont care who they was"


but the community will spread the news like april showers


how your inner demons corrupted you with so much power


don't blow this, cause i know you're beautiful on the inside


let them say what they, all i want you to say is no suicide

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  1. Posted by An EP User on April 9th, 2011 at 10:31 PM

    well written hun............really well written

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  2. joe0ner - 18-21 years old - male

    Posted by joe0ner on April 9th, 2011 at 10:33 PM

    thank you so much, please try to get the message across i cant stand people taking their life away

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  3. Posted by An EP User on April 9th, 2011 at 10:36 PM

    =( i sobered up for a bit too................



    i hate it too Joe but, some people dont listen. And some people leave with no warning....

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