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SkippingTheGoldenYears - 18-21 years old - female

Posted by SkippingTheGoldenYears
on March 14th, 2012 at 4:46 PM


    Morning sand between my toes
       throwing  all the stars back
            into a different sky 
 

       
       Handfuls from the lotus pond
              My simple goldfish
                     Is content 


     
            Young Summer afternoon
          Breathing  in the sweetness
                Of our paper flowers
  
     
           
             Beneath the grassy grave
                      My butterfly
                    Lost  her wings
   
                
                
               Among the dusty corner
                 The aged globe lingers
                    A foreign language

                   
                
                  After Summer Rain
                     Baby dandelions
                  Turn my mouth bitter.   

              
                
              Unpleasant winter waking
                      My gentle covers
                     Create false night  
      
              
             
              Watching mountain leopards
                  In their new snow shoes
                    An unspoken privilege 
    

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  1. Sarah619 - 22-25 years old - female

    Posted by Sarah619 on March 14th, 2012 at 4:54 PM

    Beautiful! Just beautiful.

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  2. SkippingTheGoldenYears - 18-21 years old - female

    Reply by SkippingTheGoldenYears Mar 14th, 2012 at 5:00PM

    Thank you love!

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  3. Posted by An EP User on March 14th, 2012 at 4:55 PM

    I really like the Beneath the grassy grave

    My butterfly

    Lost her wings

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  4. SkippingTheGoldenYears - 18-21 years old - female

    Reply by SkippingTheGoldenYears Mar 14th, 2012 at 5:00PM

    That was the first one I came up with actually and Ty! Ur so kind!

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  5. peza - 46-50 years old - male

    Posted by peza on March 14th, 2012 at 4:57 PM

    That was rather nice but i still don't understand haiku......is it supposed to be like a sonnet or syllabic or something or another ?

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  6. SkippingTheGoldenYears - 18-21 years old - female

    Reply by SkippingTheGoldenYears Mar 14th, 2012 at 5:01PM

    Yea it's hard to explain, there's many different ways to write them, and you have to read them a certain way. These were from my poem book when I had my haiku class so I don't remember tht much about them

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  7. deadant7 - 31-35 years old - female

    Posted by deadant7 on March 14th, 2012 at 5:03 PM

    I like these :)

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  8. SkippingTheGoldenYears - 18-21 years old - female

    Reply by SkippingTheGoldenYears Mar 14th, 2012 at 5:03PM

    Thank ya!

    Reply

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