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She found a warm place

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Homelesspedestrian - 31-35 years old - male

Posted by Homelesspedestrian
on February 4th, 2013 at 6:35 PM


She found a warm place in my heart and played it cool. I aborted one million unborn tears when I told her goodbye. Armed only with my love, and this knife I pulled out of my back I would do it all again.

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  1. marijuanasmokexo - 18-21 years old - female

    Posted by marijuanasmokexo on February 4th, 2013 at 6:37 PM

    You're a good writer

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  2. marijuanasmokexo - 18-21 years old - female

    Reply by marijuanasmokexo Feb 4th, 2013 at 6:47PM

    Awww :) very goooood.

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  3. Homelesspedestrian - 31-35 years old - male

    Reply by Homelesspedestrian Feb 4th, 2013 at 7:59PM

    Just thinking about somebody I used to know.

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  4. Earthen - 36-40 years old - female

    Posted by Earthen on February 4th, 2013 at 7:39 PM

    Why would you do it all over again?

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  5. Homelesspedestrian - 31-35 years old - male

    Reply by Homelesspedestrian Feb 4th, 2013 at 7:58PM

    Because it was worth every minute

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  6. Posted by An EP User on February 5th, 2013 at 10:04 AM

    I like how you dig into the raw...

    Love will come to you (soon) better and grander,

    that's just the path you had to go through.

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  7. Homelesspedestrian - 31-35 years old - male

    Reply by Homelesspedestrian Feb 5th, 2013 at 10:24AM

    There is no longer a warm place in my heart and the illusion of love has no place there either. My whole being is in the raw, but I have found happiness in it.

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  8. marmelade - 51-55 years old - female

    Reply by marmelade Feb 5th, 2013 at 1:31PM

    I know... love has never worked for me long term.... I vowed never to fall in love again... Using this pain to explore yourself is all you can do. In fact the best art is produced when in such a state. Talking about which - Your poems are very good. You can exist just fine w/o love, but when it DOES find you, just when you thought you had it all figured out, tucked away, minding your own business, quite content, you will again remember what the fuss is all about, and how, if you even get so lucky to love and be loved - you grab it, as this is the magic in this life.... it really is, you wouldn't be writing your poems if not for your broken heart. Sorry to be such a diehard romantic.

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