I Want People to Share Their Poetry Stories of Experiences

A smile on your face I hope this will bring
In your eyes I see something
I speak to you from my heart
It's been this way from the start
We haven't known each other that long
but my feelings are true and strong
You are very special to me...

There once was a road,
Long and less travelled;
There once was a road,
A mystery unraveled.

There once was a bird,
Who flew through the moonlight;
There once was bird,
Who left his mark on the night.

There once was a rose,
That...

Drunk again,
keep it in,
try your hardest,
but don't let them in.

Here I stay,
where they can't hide,
lock myself away,
but now show me their lies...

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hopeless is the dreamer that keeps dreaming
eyes hollowed by the shadows that plagues the mind
it breaks, it crumbles, it turns to ash
everything that once provoked has turned numb and cold
lifeless...
the drum, the screech, the scream...

deadly beats of a deadly heart
cutting edge of a partial start
wanders the wonderful flowers
why in dark, still shines the stars

from the dooms day of heart
the buds of stars arose
from the shield breaking apart
out of the closet...

(I thought this was me near my low point, but it seems more like my path now that I'm looking back at it...)

"Give in" it says
Let go of my being completely
"Embrace it" it suggests
Don't let the others deter
"Take my hand" it...

I was patiently waiting
For someone like you to come along
Hoping for an answer to my prayer
Or the words to be written for my song

Sometimes great things do happen
At that one special place and time
That will change our lives forever...

Surrounded by the unseen
My head fictions have become reality
To keep me sane
I trap my self
In a web
I wrap My self

Entangled in deep ominous thoughts
My mind attempts Escape
Learned through the weary
i Hold onto the tape

the tape of...

People chatting and making fun seeing who is their special one.
Are you in my land of dreams where all is not quite what it seems.
People chatting and making fun saying I am not their special one.
Are you in your land of dreams where...

Knowing that someone is there
Listening to what I say
Someone that might actually care
Well, that just makes my day.

Someone that doesn't judge
But will give me a little nudge

When you contact me
I wish you could see
My face lights up...

The bar is full at the moment,
Everyone drinking their sake,
Looking for a seat that fits them
This isn't a normal sake bar...

All seats are different,
some are uncomfortable to you,
But soft and squishy for others.
It's a odd sake...

I posted this last month and removed it and am reposting it here. ~JOne Year With You Just one year with you has brought me so much;

Your love ways are now a part of my life. Our love transcends my human imperfections And has...

Why do we ignore people hurting in pain?
In wards they are locked ,and what do they gain?
Does locking away in cages heal hearts?
Stigma attached wounds us like darts
We are still human whether wounded or scarred
We need love and care...

Sometimes the troubles in life overwhelm
It's just like a ship without any helm.
The course is uncertain
A path cannot find
We could have sworn we were out of our mind.
But even if compass should fail us by night
And the stars should...

Through woven words of much discerning
Requires much more than simple learning
For wisdom hides in treasured dens
Where springs gush forth and Light defends.
More precious than the best of gems
And woven into flowers stems
“For all...

Void

I loved until the oil ran dry
I wept and washed his feet
I shuddered and tossed
As the oceans waves do
I walked until my legs were limp
Prayed;
Until my lips closed like tomb
And then after long opened,
Life bursting through...

I'm just writing random things so I can get money lol ^^ ^_^ -_- <3

Today is your day, today is Mother`s day
You all brought a new life into this world
Each and every baby is another miracle
To all the mothers out there
HAPPY MOTHERS DAY.

I love to daydream, to think what if
A hundred, a thousand what if`s.