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    My Broken Heart

    WHY DID YOU HATE ME WHAT CAUSES DID I GIVE YOU I NEVER THOUGHT YOU WOULD DO IT YOU BROKE MY HEART IN TWO   DID YOU EVER LOVE ME? OR WAS IT JUST A THING YOUR NOW ASHAMED BY THIS ISSUE  I WAS  TO YOU A FLING   SO NOW MY HEART IS BROKEN IT WAS ALL YOURS...
    lillysummers lillysummers 26-30, F Feb 5, 2010

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    If Someone

    If someone plucks Your last nerve Just smile and Say have a nice day If they hurt you Dont feel bad The same will come to them Then they will know how you feel Keep those in mind Dont let others bring you down You wont let the same Happen to you If you are made to cry Remember...
    2012angellove4u 2012angellove4u 46-50, F Sep 14, 2012

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    I Am

    I am your sun you are my ray I will help you to be All that you can You will shine I am your thorn, you are my rose I will protect you I will not cling Like a vine I am your lake, you are my water My hope for the future you will be To care for me and watch over me That is what...
    2012angellove4u 2012angellove4u 46-50, F Sep 13, 2012

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    Demon

     Monster -Evil, beautiful monsterHow do you have possession of me againI thought I was strongerI thought I had left youafter you left me so long agoNow you are back in a more entrancing formI long for your embraceMy lips ache for your caressMy eyes beg for your entrapping...
    deleted deleted 26-30 Feb 2, 2010

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    Play the song,listen

    as you read my verse,enjoy!What Number Are You?Are you one of the many?Are you one of the few?Are you happy and healthy?What Number Are You?Has life passed you by?Has life made you blue?Has life been a struggle?What Number Are You?Is there truth in redemption?Is there more for...
    bignatbreastluver bignatbreastluver 46-50, M May 4

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    Uncontroled Blue velvet as i sense this

    feeling that delivers me as your eyes goes deep where i lose my self in redembed from passion naked from desire. Thirsty for love... Who knows.... How much i miss it.... What storm and which suspence brings me and you together in my relentless track of time? Once and once more...
    blackweirdcat blackweirdcat 46-50, F Dec 11, 2013

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    My heart is truly touched by how many people support and love me I call them all family, and it's enough to bring tears to my eyes Which I both love and hate, I both love and hate...
    SquirrellyGal2493 SquirrellyGal2493 18-21 4 days ago

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    The Levant is a Leviathan's Song (poem by Sean Rice) January 6, 2013 at 8:30am The Levant is a leviathan’s song By Sean Rice The Levant is a leviathan’s song siren, not...
    RasaDesign RasaDesign 41-45, M Jun 22

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    "tidal basin" in the wilderness i sketch in the thick air with my words painting grand towers and epic people riding against the forever setting sun grand lives with natural loves...
    mudmen mudmen 46-50 Jul 6

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    I'm so thankful, that they always have a place in my heart But I'm so ashamed, that I start losing sight of their faces, their names Don't look at me, please don't look at me Is it...
    SquirrellyGal2493 SquirrellyGal2493 18-21 6 days ago

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    You ripped out my heart so I cut open my skin to see if I was still alive. Now there's blood everywhere and I don't feel a thing. I still don't know the answer.
    wallfloher wallfloher 18-21, F Jun 28

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    In response to Nic00l's prompt. Thousands of invisible waves from a heart to a heart whisper: love is love. Nights filled with endless clicking of keyboards, reflecting the...
    LipstickShield LipstickShield 18-21, F 4 Responses Jul 13

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    In response to mohawkmom's prompt. First: iron and water and fire. Hands of a man who touches me as if he knows he can't keep me. Then: darkness and velvet and no air. A young...
    LipstickShield LipstickShield 18-21, F Jul 13

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    The Fear of Standing Still By Sean Rice Shell shocked eyes stare back at me I shudder still at the memory The obvious map, the road that you’ve taken The running after crowds...
    RasaDesign RasaDesign 41-45, M 1 Response Jun 22

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    Yay fun, it's for some persons mother.
    CatWithScars CatWithScars 13-15, F 3 days ago

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    This summer, I am going on a guided study trip with some friends. I happen to like one of my friends (I fall for every guy taller than me), but something is hinting to me that he...
    RadicallyGreen RadicallyGreen 16-17, F Jul 7

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    I'm writing a poem for th girl I love in hopes of one day getting her back. I wrote a love letter for her and was thinking of giving her Noth the letter and the poem. But I do t...
    ywilliam31 ywilliam31 16-17, M 3 days ago

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    This summer, I am going on a guided study trip with some friends. I happen to like one of my friends (I fall for every guy taller than me), but something is hinting to me that he...
    RadicallyGreen RadicallyGreen 16-17, F 1 Response Jul 7

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    Would love to hear thoughts/ comments about my poem (: feel free to write what you think. >>> In the dark These feelings wrapped around my throat No hope No motivation What is...
    letthedreamsbegin letthedreamsbegin 18-21, F 3 hrs ago

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    I am officially published, for those of you who are interested! You can get my stuff here: http://etsy.com/shop/PoemsandJunk
    lalalapolkadotsmmbop lalalapolkadotsmmbop 18-21, F 4 hrs ago

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    This is from my old profile: So we had to pick different lines from Transcendentalist poets to write in English. All of mine are from Whitman: A few light kisses, My own breath in...
    BigBlittleb123 BigBlittleb123 16-17, M 11 hrs ago

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    Aroma Smoke trails in the air - music drifts across the room Sex lingers in the throwaway strokes of strangers And the alcohol drips ceaselessly from my soul Empty glasses...
    Atromitos Atromitos 31-35 11 hrs ago

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    I wrote most of my poetry between the ages of fourteen and twenty-two with a spurt in my late thirties. Every now and then a new poem emerges. As I've mentioned elsewhere I've...
    jazm60 jazm60 61-65, M 1 Response Jul 12

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    Feeling really alone today...questioning where I'm going in life.
    elissamay33 elissamay33 22-25, F 2 Responses 6 hrs ago

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    Blank . To be lost , Can you imagine not knowing your left from your right like a baby ? To be lost , Can you imagine not knowing up from down ? To be lost , So many damn...
    Princeofthesky Princeofthesky 18-21, M 14 hrs ago

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    Actually these lines are from a song, so, I fixed them into a poem. Don't hesitate another moment, Please take away my heart. Yes, the sharper the better. The night that even the...
    TheKDoomsday TheKDoomsday 13-15, F Jun 28

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    My poems are your hidden letters. Another delusion I created I knew you so well. The way you breathed, the way you smelled. And I missed you so bad, when you first asked me not...
    YouShouldHaveKilledMe YouShouldHaveKilledMe 18-21, F Jul 3

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    This poem reflects how I once felt. You see the boy standing and talking laughing like his life is perfect. Little did you know he felt so alone he tried to end it nobody to...
    immyn123 immyn123 18-21, M Jul 7

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    The Music/Born To Be Victorious 10:29p.m. 7-21-12 Those Hazel-brown eyes were born to be opened A defined structure such as yours was...
    QueenofdaJungle QueenofdaJungle 18-21, F Jul 9

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    Ahhhh, that sweet smell of… rejection. It’s not something I’ve had any personal experience with – yet – but I don’t for a moment suppose I...
    Steffi97 Steffi97 18-21, F 2 Responses Jul 10

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    I've written one good poem. Sometimes I think that I poured so much of my soul into writing it, that I will never express myself completely again. I spent so much effort molding...
    Brianabear Brianabear 18-21, F 6 Responses Jun 25

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    Yeah. basically thats all I want in life at the moment. and I have a shitload of ideas but I cant pick myself up and write the f***ing story.. I write poems all the time though...
    Mathiiisen93 Mathiiisen93 18-21, F Jul 14

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    Words spilled on a page, Head full of rage, writer's block is a **** off, especially at my age? Words flow free like a stream of honey, this poem is worth how much money? None you...
    aleiyavonvanitysixx aleiyavonvanitysixx 13-15, F Jun 24

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    You don't know me the way you should So don't expect me to be anything good At peace with myself when I'm alone anything beyond that Out of my comfort zone I'm on my own, I'm like...
    Rainatmidnight97 Rainatmidnight97 16-17, F 1 Response Jun 28

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    I often write poems, and somehow it became my outlet since I don't usually share my feelings to just anyone. Here's one of the tons of poems I've done about someone I know, who...
    deathgrunty deathgrunty 18-21, F Jun 26

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    This is the first poem that I ever did! Haha. Poem What do you do with a heart you can't feel Who do you give it to? Somehow, someway I want to surrender Surrender my heart to...
    BoundlessThoughts BoundlessThoughts 18-21, F 1 Response Jun 28

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    So I started yesterday, I thought it was going pretty well until I got seven pages in. I stopped to read it and it was so badly organised lol
    needtojog needtojog 16-17, M 1 Response 15 hrs ago

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    No this is not a story from no personal experience whatsoever ^w^ Hector: You lying- Me: Whatsoever ^w^' Non-sarcastically speaking sarcasm is great X{3 Hector: Good your having...
    SquirrellyGal2493 SquirrellyGal2493 18-21 1 Response 5 days ago

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    I like to write lots of stuff. I am working on a novel, I write poems, I write articles, I have a diary, I have a great little blog that I want to share with the world because it...
    ivankay ivankay 22-25, F Jun 23

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    I won't be posting it, but I'm writing a poem for and about my father. It's been about since I've been able to write. I read the first draft on Father's Day and he was choked up...
    enigmatickoala enigmatickoala 22-25, M Jun 28

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    A Poem of Unrequited Love cause you're such a comfortable liar as the moon goes up i wanna feel your heart beating crazy like damn, can you forgive yourself another time i'll...
    CynicalSinner CynicalSinner 16-17, F Jul 5

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    ...a poem I wrote a while ago.... found it... thought I would share with you fine people. Life isn't fair, nor Is it just, but I need to keep my head up. The water is slowly...
    gottofindabalance gottofindabalance 26-30, M Jul 8

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    Your life…my hands Please my love stay still don't squirm You'll just make it worse You ******* worm! Oh my darling I'm so sorry Please don't mind my snarling I only want to...
    Wynnieskye Wynnieskye 16-17, F 1 Response Jul 11

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    An empty room no where to run or hide only depression there to greet you The voices whisper as anxiety taunts you they never really liked you One slash another scar is this really...
    Hope6800 Hope6800 13-15, F 1 Response a week ago

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    Here's a poem i wrote. I named it "Beyond the Rainbow".....'Vibrant hues of gentle tones/Find solace in You alone/Growing brighter as they go/Ascending towards Your brow/Then...
    waterflame waterflame 16-17, F 2 Responses Jun 25

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    So, I wrote a short little inspired poem yesterday. It doesn't have a title, so if anyone has any ideas or suggestions then please share them with me. It's just a short little poem...
    Mindnever Mindnever 16-17, F 5 Responses Jun 25

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    I'm sorry if this poem makes you depressed! :( I'm stuck in this vicious circle Surrounded by darkness Blinded by the emptyness Numb to what goes by I've build my walls so...
    Elienseys Elienseys 16-17, F 1 Response Jun 28

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