I Freestyle Rap

This is a rap I did a few minutes ago.. tell me what you think!
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/422975
Heres the lyrics
Im gonna go super 
spluratic, like a super addict
Im nomadic, 
Tired of seeing all this sohphistication...

askin me, i love rappin wit a passion B./
classically compose flows magically rippin tracks drastrically/
i could be Master Cee but i spit humblely, but i'll rip flows of a foe buzzin' if he wanna play the bumble bee/
my thoughts get...

Check it out! tell me what you think!
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/419465

Ayo... Am know as Mist.. i been in the game for almost 2 years and a 1/2 now...  I LOVE RAP.. my biggest influence is  Eminem ... .. am not copyin' his style thou... am just inspired by his lyrical talent..   I...

Jack the ripper, bigger than the dipper
not many people can bring what I deliver
Sing for the giver, the 1-2 flavor 
Tonight's a good night like Ali vs Frazier
Rare form, I only put it on occasions 
not for the few I'm thinking...

I hear in conversation a disease has hit the nation
and I read in publications that due to complications there is yet no soution to stop the distribution of this sexual polutiion.

As I mentioned in a couple other stories, I rap and write songs, and record them as a hobby. originally I sucked at freestyling/keystyling, but I think im getting better at it with practice. I think i might use this group for fun. Here...

when i was first introduced to the art of freestyle rap, my mind was blown at how creative you could be with it, how quick you had to perform(be real), and how exciting and competitive it was. when i was about 13, i was ridin round...

Compitition ... me is on a rap battle mission I is gonna kill your rap audition my rhymes will put ya in a submission put ya in a bad condition dis is my freestyle tradition me is been doin dis since day one bitch  you rap like a...

I can express how I feel without being criticized.I freestyle about what goes on in my life and things that I struggle with.I feel free and happier,I have problems with enunciation and speaking clearly,but when I rap I can focus and...