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    Im done with all this fighting,

    Just want some uniting, Cutting in my room don't stop me from crying, Blood on the floor, From all this d@mn gore, You ask me if im fine? I say shore! I dont cry anymore, I just sweat from eyes, From the pressure that lies behind the color of my eyes, So you keep on with your...
    Smilz2012 Smilz2012 18-21, F 1 Response Apr 14

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    my freestyle Circle make a square,

    you compared to the average Versace water cabbage, hid your daddy in the attic Ruby Red dragon, my Aladdin station wagon My new ***** looks like Lamborghini in a bikini Rap game ''I Dream of Jeannie'' Versace lasagna, get married at the prom, uh I don't want your gal, she look...
    Chasemanning Chasemanning 13-15, M 1 Response Feb 24

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    GingerSlim It's a Freestyle I'm Free Now I

    ain't gotta rehearse For Freeverse Ever since my birth I was destined To change earth And now that I'm here I aint gonna leave I'm not gonna Disappear I'm not leavin now I'm not skippin town My name is Ginger Slim The rap game is a Ocean And I'm gonna Swim And if I am found...
    GingerSlimSTL GingerSlimSTL 13-15, M Jul 14

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    Freestyle Rap

    Compitition ... me is on a rap battle mission I is gonna kill your rap audition my rhymes will put ya in a submission put ya in a bad condition dis is my freestyle tradition me is been doin dis since day one *****  you rap like a glitch me is gonna be rich your rhymes Will go in...
    EmceeHayes EmceeHayes 18-21, M 3 Responses Dec 28, 2010

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    Have you ever had one those days,

    You just in a daze, Thinkin bout the day, That you started to go wrong? The day your whole world, That seemed so sweet and bright, Like everything was goin right, Then you blink and in a wink of an eye, You just wanna die, Yeah, I'm havin a day like that, When you feel like crap...
    SmilingNightmare SmilingNightmare 16-17, F Feb 23

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    She tried so hard, To fit the part,

    But she could never be who they wanted her to be, She was to nice, To smiley, Laughed to much, And ate to much, She was a GG, Nobody wanted to be, With her, She tried to be tough, She tried to be rough, But she broke other people, And she tore em apart, But she don't understan...
    SmilingNightmare SmilingNightmare 16-17, F Feb 23

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    ( before song hook) Everyone is ditchin me like

    this dam breeze, Faster than you can blink, It's a messed up world dontcha think? ( music starts) I look around me and everythings fine, Dont gotta spin the bottle to see who is mine, Because i had so many homies an so many people that i loved, And they loved me, So then i...
    Smilz2012 Smilz2012 18-21, F 2 Responses Mar 31

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    s0undgarden Diss. THIN SHADOW.

    Creepy?, HAHAHAHA, B!tch your creepy to the max, Where the f uck is axe, So I can end some lives, I know one I really want to end right now, I don't mean to kill no one, I just want to be done, With s0undgarden's fa ggot @ss, So this is the last, Some people b!tch...
    ThinShadow ThinShadow 22-25, M 5 Responses Dec 27, 2013

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    I Love fuckking drugs am the underground thug

    love stuck king evolves big balls rape ******* from the malls running in the hills kill kill your teeth I drill drill watch how I operate when I talk you shake am the doc just a block away burn your finger tips you silly clittt
    KINGDARKNESS1 KINGDARKNESS1 26-30, M 1 Response Jul 9

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    Ever had the feeling?

    We call it confidence An over-dose of it, can lead to consequence That’s what we call arrogance And in extreme cases cockiness, If you can’t see it, see an optometrist It can crush you like a hippopotamus sitting a top the horn of a rhinoceros Can you even describe? Give me...
    addictedtoweightlifting addictedtoweightlifting 18-21, M 2 Responses Mar 25

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    Aint been here in a while,

    Been outta the game, But its time to put this muthafuckin life to shame, Wanna know what i been doin - i been scratchin my arms, No i aint a ****** retard, They told me i wasnt pretty, They told me i wasnt smart, All ill ever mount up to be, Is little toy barb-ie dol, Life aint...
    Smilz2012 Smilz2012 18-21, F 1 Response Aug 20

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    Rap Aids

    I hear in conversation a disease has hit the nation and I read in publications that due to complications there is yet no soution to stop the distribution of this sexual polutiion.
    monkeysintheattic monkeysintheattic 36-40 3 Responses Nov 14, 2011

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    Anonmat Diss By THIN SHADOW.

    Lloyd “Mocker Knocker” Loinks Banks revenge Diss. Want a girl?, Then go ask your sister out, HAHAHAHA. Yo, I’ve gone Crazzy, He talks about having s ex with a girl on Skype, Bet again that the girl on the other end was his sister again, This little B!tch messed...
    ThinShadow ThinShadow 22-25, M Dec 27, 2013

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    “Too damn Pretty.” THINSHADOW T.

    S. Original #10 (Janae’s song) (Beat Starts) I feel like I walk on the battlefield of lies, People spit and shoot slander, Where is the commander? No one to be seen, People talk of this teen, Tell me she is ugly, They lead me to her, When I see I can’t defer, Can’t...
    ThinShadow ThinShadow 22-25, M Dec 31, 2013

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    The beat Dieu Reconnaitra Les Siena by Dj Cam

    is the best to kick a dope chill jazzy 16 to
    MikeWestenberger MikeWestenberger 18-21, M Jun 2

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    “Revenge of the Great.

    ” Thin Shadow Comment section.... Below
    ThinShadow ThinShadow 22-25, M 2 Responses May 21

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    Cemetery Thin Shadow R.

    I.P Thump-Slay, Retro-Fury, and Raze Crit Rap is in the comment box. So look below!
    ThinShadow ThinShadow 22-25, M 1 Response Jan 22

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    We All Wake Up In Time

    This is a rap I did a few minutes ago.. tell me what you think! http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/422975 Heres the lyrics Im gonna go super  spluratic, like a super addict Im nomadic,  Tired of seeing all this sohphistication  In this nation Stuck up babies, crying...
    ShallowDreamers ShallowDreamers 22-25, M 2 Responses May 26, 2011

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    Im done with all this fighting,

    Just want some uniting, Cutting in my room don't stop me from crying, Blood on the floor, From all this d@mn gore, You ask me if im fine? I say shore! I dont cry anymore, I just sweat from eyes, From the pressure that lies behind the color of my eyes, So you keep on with your...
    Smilz2012 Smilz2012 18-21, F 1 Response Apr 14

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    I Write A Lot, Somethin' I Was Writing,

    Jack the ripper, bigger than the dipper not many people can bring what I deliver Sing for the giver, the 1-2 flavor  Tonight's a good night like Ali vs Frazier Rare form, I only put it on occasions  not for the few I'm thinking millions in a nation  it take many just  to...
    SoSwSh SoSwSh 16-17, M Nov 27, 2011

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    She was your whole world,

    Your little baby girl, But then all of a sudden, She was worth nuttin', N' now your treatin like a re-ject, But you dont wanna confess, That you treat every girl, Like their the best, But then you turn in them, Now shes a cryin mess, And i hope you feel ashamed, Playin her like...
    SmilingNightmare SmilingNightmare 16-17, F Feb 21

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    Rememberingyourprincess Diss THIN SHADOW

    You just make me sick, (Sound of throwing up), I hope you get a kick, Out of this, B!tch, What gender are you?, Are you a boy or a girl? The whole world hurls, When they see you, And what you do, A bit complicated ain’t you? Trying to act like a boy aren’t you...
    ThinShadow ThinShadow 22-25, M Dec 30, 2013

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    “PaperyRiver123” Diss Thin Shadow *Laughs*

    Block me! Think he got the bigger d_ck? When Kate Upton’s got a bigger one than you. First off let people know I didn’t start this… But, Thin’s gotta diss, I am the most insane, When I diss and no one’s respond to feel my pain, I’m respected in and outta the...
    ThinShadow ThinShadow 22-25, M Jul 19

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    Beautiful lies - Smilz2012

    and Luner007 Hook: Those Beautiful lies / they Tell me all that i wanted to hear while serenading my mind / I could be doin way batter but i said i was fine / Love is war and i just want to survive / im constantly fighting so that i do not die from These Beautiful...
    Smilz2012 Smilz2012 18-21, F Mar 31

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    “You are.” THIN SHADOW T.

    S. Original #8 “JadedDivinity’s song.” She stood by me through everything, When everyone, Has been telling me I’m not good enough, To rap, To play Pokemon, To do anything, But she told me to I was fine, When she was fine herself, Always being positive, When she...
    ThinShadow ThinShadow 22-25, M 1 Response Jan 2

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    Freestyle....

    askin me, i love rappin wit a passion B./ classically compose flows magically rippin tracks drastrically/ i could be Master Cee but i spit humblely, but i'll rip flows of a foe buzzin' if he wanna play the bumble bee/ my thoughts get sacked, then i fumble Frees/ i spit it true...
    BlueCoated BlueCoated 22-25, M Aug 29, 2012

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    Broken hearted, broken souled,

    A story that i never told, ( aw yeah) SΣx and pθrn, were all the thought that born inside my head, Now dont judge me, Cause u know u done it to, But im tired of keepin this from you, I gotta get this off my mind, Gotta get this off my chest, Heart breakin, mind achin, The...
    Smilz2012 Smilz2012 18-21, F Mar 30

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    She tried to beautiful,

    Yeah they said she was, But she never did believe it cuz, They all sneered and told 'er she looked dorky today, And she tried so hard to be kind, But e'ry body kept on playin tricks on 'er mind, And, She tried to be smart, But their words came in like a dart, In the dark, You...
    SmilingNightmare SmilingNightmare 16-17, F Mar 4

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    Hey boydude, Yeah you lightin my fued,

    And you got me confused, Are you a boy or a girl? Yeah you make me wanna hurl, Actin like princess yet tough enough to stand up, Hey, You think you so incapable, Yeah well thats debatable, But if you werent such an attention craver, I may be able to help ya later, Yeah you...
    Smilz2012 Smilz2012 18-21, F Feb 19

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    yo. pongo. check my flows on soundcloud.

    com/pongo-tha-pirate . im like a firefly lit up on fire i. am versatile with my syllable buildin lyrics. strong from tha foundation&all tha way up. never lost for words. im a wizard wordsmith. word perfect. hurt many battle rappers. take out them&their henchmen. from tha...
    PongoDean PongoDean 31-35, M Jul 30

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    You tell me that you love me,

    N i wanna believe you, But i can't tell who's lyin or if i should think its true, Its breakin my heart to see you think that im smart, And its breakin my soul that you think i have self control, If you knew what i done if you knew who i am, Not the outside figure, But the inside...
    Smilz2012 Smilz2012 18-21, F Mar 26

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    In-poster ---- THIN SHADOW original.

    Ft. Lloyd Loinks Banks! {Thin Shadow} HAHAHA (Let the beat run!) So, Yo what do you call someone who looks just like you but, ain't you?, ({Person}A clone,) Naw that's blown, ({Person} Twin) Nope there is only one THIN!, ({Person}A doppelganger,) B!tch you need a hanger...
    Beastmode2011 Beastmode2011 13-15, M Dec 11, 2013

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    "Merc' With the Mouth Album" Suck my D!

    ck Da Brook Mess with me I am Thin Something Dope FT NexGen We CrAzY FT NexGen East Killaz FT East Side Killaz I am F*cked up FT King Heat I can't die FT Lunar Guilty Mind FT Merc'less Bullet Dark Sh!t Black Triangle
    ThinShadow ThinShadow 22-25, M Jun 4

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    Da Brook LP Thin Shadow In this album it will

    be all about Thin's life in Da Brook. How he got into rap and the hardships he had to face. 1. Welcome to Da Brook 2. You ain't a rapper 3. Who's that girl? 4. Cool with the ACE 5. Freestyle King 6. Dear God 7. Put your hands up (Censored) 8. Put your F*cken Hands Up {FT...
    ThinShadow ThinShadow 22-25, M 1 Response Jul 14

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    I think my brain is kinda dis-abled Cus it

    don't know if I'm nuts or sta-ble I'm a different breed but not a la-bel Because I'm known to turn the ta-ble I take meds for the things I act on And if I don't take it I like to get my smash on (eat) And when I'm like that don't leave me at home alone Because when u come back...
    RebelStar24 RebelStar24 16-17, F Jun 27

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    Yo Yo Yo

    Ayo... Am know as Mist.. i been in the game for almost 2 years and a 1/2 now...  I LOVE RAP.. my biggest influence is  Eminem ... .. am not copyin' his style thou... am just inspired by his lyrical talent..   I actually like to write songs more than...
    Mo08 Mo08 18-21, M Aug 7, 2008

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    This is for my brotha,

    From anotha motha, He's always got my back and ill always have his, And it's an inside joke but im his therapy, I hope u never loose sight of your destiny, I love the way you talk, The way you ryhme, And the way you give your time to talk me, It's make my heart fill with glee...
    Smilz2012 Smilz2012 18-21, F 1 Response Mar 30

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    Ridin Round

    when i was first introduced to the art of freestyle rap, my mind was blown at how creative you could be with it, how quick you had to perform(be real), and how exciting and competitive it was. when i was about 13, i was ridin round with my 2 buds smokin out n on our way to chill...
    kinnertwo kinnertwo 22-25, M Feb 9, 2010

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    Although I'm new to the game I already beat out

    Tupac and lil Wayne Who else came to play? None other than Big J But soon it was over I shut the door, like an MLB closer All the vets are posers There's bozos it's 4th and 1 on the goal coach says it's a no-go I appear ya'll no shows. Yeah, i'm the nest sensation startin' a...
    addictedtoweightlifting addictedtoweightlifting 18-21, M 1 Response Mar 25

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    This goes out to people on here

    and people in my house and anywhere else. Think about the words then think if its you. Your makin my soul ache, Your makin it break, My heart is gonna shatter, Its gonna make a big clatter, Your sayin you care but you dont even listen, You used to make my eyes glisten...
    Smilz2012 Smilz2012 18-21, F 1 Response Jun 10

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    "I guess this is goodbye!

    " THIN SHADOW TS Original. FT, Marshall Venny, Tip-Top Blaze, Lil Spark, Diss-Ike, Floyd Edge, and Tick Tockery.   {At an abandoned building. Sounds of a rocking chair. Sudden slam. (Thin Shadow.[Damn it Lloyd! Where are you?]} (Beat starts) {Thin Shadow} It's been a while since...
    Beastmode2011 Beastmode2011 13-15, M Dec 18, 2013

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    A Freestyle Rap I Made Called Punch A Fish In The Face

    Check it out! tell me what you think! http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/419465
    ShallowDreamers ShallowDreamers 22-25, M 2 Responses May 10, 2011

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    s0undgardens diss THIN SHADOW HAHAHAHA I’m

    insane. I plead insanity, Screw humanity, But, this little B!tch just won’t admit that he is wrong, Because he knows everything I rap and say is true, ({Echo} True) Because he wishes he strong, (In real life.) He wishes he could stand up to people like me in real life, But...
    ThinShadow ThinShadow 22-25, M 5 Responses Dec 30, 2013

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    “s0undgarden 1 remake” Thin Shadow

    “Merc’ With A Mouth” Album #3 Comment Section!
    ThinShadow ThinShadow 22-25, M 1 Response Apr 25

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    “Beautiful” By Thin Shadow.

    T.S. Original. #4 (Rainy’s song) This song is dedicated, To the people who feel… Like they are not beautiful, When they underestimate, Themselves, I feel like I’m walking minefield of broken thoughts, I can see all the streams, The streams of tears, From broken hearts...
    ThinShadow ThinShadow 22-25, M 3 Responses Dec 27, 2013

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    I believe rape is rape. If I left out I was intoxicated, it's rape but if I mention I was under the influence suddenly it isn't rape. That by taking that drink I was signing an...
    Lucile199 Lucile199 18-21, F 1 Response Aug 29

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    Now, should we treat women as independent agents, responsible for themselves? Of course. But being responsible has nothing to do with being raped. Women don’t get raped because...
    rahifsaad rahifsaad 22-25, F 1 Response Sep 5

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    I'm a female studying motor vehicle in college. I was raped in the past and I am still dealing with this. The guys in college all make jokes about rape and I really don't find it...
    HC12345 HC12345 18-21, F Sep 12

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    I. Am. I also want to state right here that not just Woman are victims of Rape. There are men, chidlren of both genders, and yes women. Please don't sterotype this as a thing that...
    Cassadilla1822 Cassadilla1822 18-21, F 2 Responses Aug 24

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    If the punishment for rape was significantly more severe then people might be less likely to commit that heinous effing crime. Today a man rapes a woman he get (realistically ) a...
    OzarksTrucker OzarksTrucker 36-40, M 10 Responses Aug 25

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    I think rape is rape no matter the sex, because I met people that think a girl rapping a guy is ok but if it's the other way around it's wrong,
    dominick6 dominick6 13-15, M 1 Response Aug 29

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    Ok really, rape is bad enough. Blaming it on the victim just makes it worse. I'm tired of people telling others that they just shouldn't of dressed like that and it's their fault...
    SilenceInBlackAndWhite SilenceInBlackAndWhite 13-15, F 5 Responses Sep 3

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