Please tell me your opinions. This is my first time writing a poem. It is not finished yet.
It's half past ten at night and you are on my mind
As I lay alone in my full size...
I like this poem..
Dire moments, last goodbyes
Your kisses dance like fireflies
I’m gone tonight to a dark unseen
A wish to take your light with me
You were my first, but it won...
You called me a mistake
You said it to my face
I wont let you see these tears
That i cry everyday
You destroy my confidence
You shout at me
You tell me you don't...