I wrote this some time ago about someone from very long ago. I was going through my old poems and when I came to this one, I kept reading it over and over again. The person I wrote this about doesn't have any place in my life now and I rarely think of her so, the moment has...
poetry, and any advice would be good.
You left me on a Winters night
As many often do
Hand in mine, you passed from life
As I was watching you
I sat with you for hours
Until they said I had to go
What was I supposed to do
Well that I didn’t know
I had to tell...
intended To be the total opposite of what you recommended. With no fancy automobiles plus lack of healthy meals. I should've never took the action depending how one feels. I'm sorry that I never took the time for embracing Stepping up to the plate with...
He is trying to escape his cell, The owners are not happy, He is beat and punished, He is rewarded with a treat for good behavior, He is threatened and beat for "bad behavior", "you are a retarded" they say to him, "I love you" they say but they treat him like hate him, at...
I met myself on the street today,
I was looking rather pale.
My eyes were red, my hair unwashed,
I didn't look too well.
I tried to find the courage,
To ask me what was wrong.
I've known myself for quite some time now,
We used to get along.
He looked at me with anger,
Blessed in pain,
Dying in vain,
Tainted by love,
Protected by hate,
Angels fall first,
Now it's too late,
Hiding scars of blood smeared years,
Saddened faces all around,
Listening to that chilling sound,
Screams of terror fall apart...
I'm surrounded by people having a good time
And I try to have a good time
At least look the part
But I'm Charlie Brown
And everyone’s speaking
And I don't understand or care
What they're saying
Because I'm in my mind somewhere
Under the sky
I sprinkled him with dust
And up he flew
To his heart's content
He flew past mermaids
Past pirate ships
And treasure coves
A lost boy
Looking for a home
But not quite staying
I glittered him with gold
Shimmered him with amber
Hoping and praying
sad, maybe pissed
But this won't take the pain away
Make it through tonight for a brighter day
Please find a new way to cope
And don't you dare think about that rope
You're beautiful with a lot of life left
And don't let the blade be the theft
You know, there's people like...
Sometimes I wished I'd have toys, other years games.
But I don't really remember when, I wished for a woman in my bed.
Maybe when I was ringing groceries, into a laser eyed counter.
Maybe the first time my car got stuck in a snowy patch in winter.
But I remember the boughs of...
I LOVE LOVE
I love, love and it would seem
That not a moment could possibly pass
Without finding me in a wakeful dream,
Of salacious thoughts deep and vast.
I love, love and sense its lure,
Each time she stirs my lust
For the object of my wanting, sweet and pure...
..........It's in the midst of winter.The wind whistles its song.The flowers I loved and cherished,All but their memory is gone.The trees are dressed like crystalAs snowflakes fill the air.Winter has a special beautyThat is beyond compare.But the cold nips at the fingers,Puts a...
a small hospital near Tampa Florida, it was believed that he had nothing left of any value. Later when the nurses were going through his meager possessions, they found this poem. Its quality and content so impressed the staff that copies were made and given to every nurse in the...
I love you more with everyday
A thousand reasons; a thousand ways
A thousand words that I could say
From a thousand miles away.
I love you here; I love you now
I need to love you near somehow.
To close this gap between you and me
This thousand mile eternity.
I love your heart; I...
just reading other stories that relate to me but I really REALLY needed some feedback on poetry so here goes:
**Ramblings of a Muslim Catholic**
---God came to the prophet Mohammed,
His poetry my apostolic creed,
The Qur'an my tabernacle of life,
Upon this rock I will build...
The dawn cues the show to start
As my window curtains part.
To look upon the cast a story
Amidst the purple morning glory.
Seen below the morning star
Sits rows and rows of lavendar.
A yellow dot with white clouds hazy
A color script just for the daisy.
A worm that pays the...
Wool pulled over eyes
Distraction breeds distraction
Keep the citizens blind
Keep them fat and happy
Right up till they die
Ship them off to FEMA camps
Or shot down in their place
Waking up to swat team's
Assault rifle in your face
No empathy for the human...
you are just a memory and I'm forgetting you, Im standing here on this edge trying to jump, but I can't and probably won't, I'm just sad that I will forget about my love for you, life has separated us and now I must pretend to just be happy, *whispers* with out you
there one bad breakup pain is there
Look up at the sky no stars is there to shine bright to remind you why you put your dreams there
Darkroom get darker the days get longer long lasting pain turns into depression a smile you once had turned into an obsession
if people were colors / you would be lilac. once blooming for a short period of time / something i've waited all year to witness. like the tides swirling / as a messy canvass creates art. where the sea meets the setting sun / across the way the beginning of the water, the end of...
.......To see a world in a grain of sand, to hold what falls in your hand. To know the future, but be surprised it takes place as long ago planned. Like an artist takes his tools out to paint. A long lonely walk he takes. Down the path through the holler. Up a hill, pass the...
a rain shower fades away in memory
and the air is thick in aftermath
drenched with memory
as we lay benith the overhang
her lace dress crisp against my cheek
i turn to say something but am
caught up by her distant looking silent revere
the notion of her hand moving along my arm...
You demand for more
Throwing fits as you beat your breast
Spineless swine hiding behind a lady's skirt
The slap of your insults echoes in the halls
She slaps back to shut you up
You only yell over her, punching her down with words
She gave you clothes and a job with money...
a sight that can make a super nova seem no more than turning a light bulb on with your hand. Worlds formed by words, intertwined like forestry, rooted deeply in my soul. Details divide then unfold amongst themselves like trees, punctuation marks grow at the ends of fully...
it's how this song starts but it makes me think who is she and will she love me back? I'm a fool because I would love everyone, or even anyone, love is my torment, Im not good enough for anyone, maybe that's why all the girls I gave my heart to choose to throw it away, I...
writing about you
You aren't worth a single page in the book that is my life
Nor an excerpt, yet I keep writing
Writing about the trail of destruction that was left in your wake
Leading men on and leaving them behind
Sundays you lift your hands to God in praise
The rest of...
I have been treated like trash and used like a toy, do I have feelings? are my dreams to much they surpass the ceilings? I guess I can't change my self for the better, I only have to finish this letter, please forgive me I'm a mess, I am a bad person I am worthless, I...
Walk with me on
The midnight grass
Shadows hide truth
Of our trespass.
The cloudy covered
Moon rides high
Within our arms
We hold the lie.
On the wind
The only sounding
Of our hearts
On my lips
The scarlet beckoning
Come taste the hell
Unleash our reckoning.
to wrap my only baby and then drown him in my pool
to get up off my lazy *** and be the thing i love
jack off to all the pictures of the nakedness i saw
they told me do it bigger then whatever i had dreamed
make my own reality and turn it back on me
the world and still feel like no one cares about you
Do you know how to feel to feel so vulnerable in a situation you have no control over
You feel so lost like life is trapped inside of your body
Like no one hears the thoughts coming from your voice
Everyday feels like...
Within my mind
Point of origin returned
Alcohol may be
The relief I find
Soaking my insides
In a salty brine
But you're still blind
Why am I the one
Always left behind
finger to the trigger
Tooth to the rind
I bite the hand
I kill the...
No mountain is too steep,
to bring you out of the heap.
Just lay your cares on the ground,
and soon after you will be found.
Inside your head used to be a war,
the tears of the past is no more.
Now you can rejoice about life,
and put down that sharp knife.
Love the person you are...
I love the beauty of the sea
Within its depth a part of me
No better where I'd rather be
The only place that I feel free.
To breathe within its briny air
To feel its breath blow back my hair
At the blue horizon stare
That is where you'll find me there.
I hide within its shallow...
as this is a work in progress:
:::quiet your mind:::
He is poise and authority
I arch sinuously, leopardesque
...quietly impatient, a squirm, a twitch runs through my thigh...
His staying hand and hard eyes call me to still, pause for me...
Imagine a thirsty moment
Your parched throat needs relief
Now consider me your water
And splash me against your teeth
Feel my soothing coolness
Dance upon your tongue
As I dribble down your throat
From your palette which I have clung
Now take another drink of me
And swirl me in...
This girl wants to die, I remember when I used to live by a knife, but I told her I really try, she is now gone she won't be a mom or a wife, she told me she was happy but it was a lie, she only wanted to die, I can't help but to think she is alive, if she is really gone...
I want to smile as you notice me noticing you in front of me. I hold the capability for great civility Including a stability that'll be exposed if you chill with me. A collaboration for creation combined With you as my tutor to help me better study your...
A thousand 'likes'. A thousand comments. A thousand tweets of the same breakfast while we marvel at coincidence.
Because I matter.
Following you following me a thousand times for a thousand disciples; the next more important than the last. A favorite book/song/quote/movie...
By: Dannie S.
Throw me a line and I'll sew you new clothes,
send me flowers and I'll make you perfume.
Tell me your fears and I'll hold you so you don't feel alone,
tell me your dreams and I'll do what I can to make them happen.
Kick dirt in my face and I'll grow roses in my...
and i see you. thank you for waking me up. I am only next and so i wait. i hope you pick me but im so sure she'll be your trailer baby. And ill have to nap until twelve, put aside a little weed and a few drinks and shower again
....using my phone for light my tippy toes. my...