I Want to Review Dwd's Novel

(c) 2008 ~ DWD, All Rights, Domestic and International Reserved....review a novel as it develops and grows... 5 People

    Episode Eight

    Barney was angry.   He was in the line at the unemployment agency and felt low and demeaned.  But telling that debt collector in India off put a smile on his face.   He put the phone back in his pocket and advanced in line.  He’d tell Howard and...
    DancesWithDolphins DancesWithDolphins
    41-45, M
    1 Response Mar 15, 2008

    Coming Soon....

    future episodes coming soon... (I'm on a business trip for a few days)
    DancesWithDolphins DancesWithDolphins
    41-45, M
    1 Response Mar 15, 2008

    Episode Seven

    Jersey stood there, taking him in.  She had brothers, she had spent some quality time in the frat house, and she knew her way around a man’s body. She could have made an “S” sign in the air, reminding Howard to close his robe, but her wicked powerful...
    DancesWithDolphins DancesWithDolphins
    41-45, M
    Mar 15, 2008

    Episode Three

    Jersey grabbed her satchel and pushed the door closed on her hybrid. She walked down the sidewalk, heels tapping the concrete and the sun on her knees.  As she looked around the neighborhood she caught the gentle hum of the windmill on her left and the roofers nailshots...
    DancesWithDolphins DancesWithDolphins
    41-45, M
    1 Response Mar 14, 2008

    Episode Five

    It was dark in Chenai, and the interior of the phone center was dark.  Monitors lit the faces of the operators.  Suzi (her Americanized version of Sakthi), listened to the operator next to her.  There were five operators in this one cube and 400 on the floor, all...
    DancesWithDolphins DancesWithDolphins
    41-45, M
    1 Response Mar 14, 2008

    Preface... and legal stuff...

    On the advice of one of our EP friends, I'm holding the preface until the novel is complete.   Legal stuff:  Mystic Boob, characters, cover art, images, photos, pen name and everything else are  (c)Copyright and (TM)Trademark with all rights reserved, domestic...
    DancesWithDolphins DancesWithDolphins
    41-45, M
    1 Response Mar 14, 2008

    Episode Four

    He rolled over and looked at the wall.  Pinned to it were red shut off notices, phone, rent, water, gas and electric.  Howard could live without the heat, who needed heat these days?   Under the bills, smiling faces of Howard’s children peeked from...
    DancesWithDolphins DancesWithDolphins
    41-45, M
    2 Responses Mar 14, 2008

    Episode Nine

    From the cage, came a scratching sound. “Is that your dog?” “Yes, that’s Romeo, I probably need to take him out.” Jersey lowered the papers back onto the couch and smiled.  “Do you think I could walk him, I need to put something into my...
    DancesWithDolphins DancesWithDolphins
    41-45, M
    1 Response Mar 15, 2008

    Episode One

    Howard Beetle looked around the room.  The smoke clung in the air.  The cigarette box was empty and he looked at the ashtray for a long butt.  His pistol was loaded on the desk.  His TV showed a black and white image of Jimmy Stewart and a soaking white...
    DancesWithDolphins DancesWithDolphins
    41-45, M
    4 Responses Mar 14, 2008

    Episode Two

    Howard dialed his cell phone.  It was the only phone he had. “Ring…….. Ring……..  This is the Allsprintel network… your service has been temporarily disconnected… press one to pay by phone…” He shoved the...
    DancesWithDolphins DancesWithDolphins
    41-45, M
    Mar 14, 2008

    Dying to Know More...

    Mystic Boob...what is it about??? - RDW
    randomdriftwood randomdriftwood
    22-25, F
    Mar 14, 2008

    My Novel...

    I've been throwing this story around in my mind for a few years... Join this group and you can watch it grow.... tell me what you think... PM me with editorial comments and plot line suggestions/questions... and above all help me find an audience for it. ** Please remember this...
    DancesWithDolphins DancesWithDolphins
    41-45, M
    9 Responses Mar 13, 2008

    Synopsis - Story Treatment

    Mystic Boob Is about finding enlightenment, love and a purpose in the universe.   Please remember: this is a rough draft!    Note:  The easiest way to read this is to use those little left/right arrows on the upper right of the screen.  But, I'm sure...
    DancesWithDolphins DancesWithDolphins
    41-45, M
    18 Responses Mar 13, 2008

    Episode Six

    Her hand came back from the door as she watched it open. He obviously had not received the message and was unprepared.  He had obviously just crawled out of bed.  His brown gray curly air going in every direction was pushed down in the side he was sleeping on, he had...
    DancesWithDolphins DancesWithDolphins
    41-45, M
    2 Responses Mar 14, 2008
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