Post
Experience Project iOS Android Apps | Download EP for your Mobile Device

I Want to Write a Story

Thank you all for joining this group.... 146 People

    Okay Friends And Members I Need Your Feedback About This Story I'm Writing.

    I know you all read it. Why don't you comment? If you don't want to comment that is fine. At least rate it up or something. Thank you so I know that I'm entertaining you all.
    mother1983 mother1983 26-30, F Mar 29, 2012

    Your Response

    Cancel

    I absolutely cannot start from the beginning.

    I can start from this moment in time, but no further. I am a girl. A lost, confused, scared, but intelligent girl. I've lived long enough to know right from wrong, but not long enough to know how to correct my wrong.  I have so many questions that pile up everyday, to which I'm...
    GettingOverShit GettingOverShit 18-21, F Dec 12, 2013

    Your Response

    Cancel

    Sinking

    I struggle to stay afloat in a sea of depression. My life vest (my wife) is long gone. I cling tightly to a scrap of what is left of my family. The sharks of death and dismay circle around me. I go under once, gasping as I surface. My head slips beneath the water once again, a...
    Mencrytoo Mencrytoo 46-50, M 2 Responses Oct 30, 2012

    Your Response

    Cancel

    Introduction Of One Psyhopath

    You were asking me quite persistently... To open up to you, to the world. The truth is I was never able to truly trust, not even myself. I was afraid what I might discover. But I don't care anymore, I am now going to show you what I am really like on the inside. I was never a...
    Ankhou Ankhou 18-21 1 Response Apr 2, 2013

    Your Response

    Cancel

    First of all, I just want to say I'm glad "to"

    and "a" aren't capitalized in this experience. This must be an old one, before EP used auto-capitals. Second, I want to write a story. I don't know what to write about though, so let's play this little game I saw somewhere here. Take a look at my experience list, and if there's...
    metaphornographic metaphornographic 18-21, F 1 Response 2 days ago

    Your Response

    Cancel

    I Want to Write a Story

    I can talk about this that and the other, but what I really want to do is write the story that pains me deep in side. It wont be today, but in time I will because this pain is killing me, I just shut it deep away hoping by making everything else right in my life...
    Supagloo Supagloo 41-45, F May 15, 2009

    Your Response

    Cancel

    Ode To A Pen

    It is written down on paper with ink, in the numerous books that line the shelves. Of Love and Loss, but no amount of words could ever descibe the feeling of actually living it first hand. The thin black liquid flows from the end of my pen, creating thoughts I would just as...
    Mencrytoo Mencrytoo 46-50, M 2 Responses Oct 28, 2012

    Your Response

    Cancel

    It's a teenage lesbian story,

    and the main character is butch. Please, anyone, EVERYONE, tell me what you think about how I described the main characters short, guy like hair. And more details if you got any. I ran a hand through my short, shaggy dude hairstyle that was copped slightly in the back and...
    DarkOnTheInside13 DarkOnTheInside13 13-15, F 4 days ago

    Your Response

    Cancel

    Death Becomes Her

    there once was a beautiful princess,she had a handsome king for a husband.they lived in a gigantic castle.life was grand.then,one winter,the princess fell ill and died.everyone was so sad.the townspeople cried and cried.and the king,sick with grief,leapt off the top of the castle...
    deleted deleted 26-30 Nov 9, 2012

    Your Response

    Cancel

    Nasima Ke Bb Ko Choda

    Hay dosto main bunty kumar .main aami me rehta hu.main av 9 class ka student hu. Mera dost ka naam nasima hai .uski saadi av 3month pehle hui thi .uski bb bahut hi sundar hai. Wo mujhe sb kuch batata hai .ki kaise main use chodta hu .wo steel factry me ka krta hai . Aur main sirf...
    Buntykumar123 Buntykumar123 18-21, M Mar 6, 2012

    Your Response

    Cancel
    mother1983 mother1983 26-30, F 1 Response Feb 7, 2012

    Your Response

    Cancel

    It was like a stab to my heart

    when I saw Mark and the new girl together. No, not one but multiple stabs to my heart. Each stab brought pain and agony. I cringe and try to suck it all in. But there was this sudden heat that spread outwards from inside me and tears stung my eyes. I tried to blink off the tears...
    fuglygirlonthebench fuglygirlonthebench 18-21, F 1 Response Sep 22

    Your Response

    Cancel

    Gasping Tears are flowing like streams I

    could I would too I'm all ready Holding it steady I set it closer My mind says no My hand can't stop Almost there Who would care? Nothing is ever fair It's silver edge Cold and reflective With a seductive glint It'll leave a long wide print How far would I go? How deep? Is...
    WhenICouldWish97 WhenICouldWish97 16-17, F May 9

    Your Response

    Cancel

    Google Free Online Creative Writing Courses & Big Prize Competitions

    On a Year Training Program, '74/'75, I was helping a charity publisher who ran Educational Book Exhibits worldwide on 2 ships - http://www.om.orgBoss loved my writing style & advised writing letters to editors, doing short magazine articles & entering short story...
    ShyButCreativeSexyGuy ShyButCreativeSexyGuy 46-50, M Aug 17, 2012

    Your Response

    Cancel

    Wanna write a story bout my crossdressing

    fantasy. Heart this or comment if u WANs read one
    tanyaw420 tanyaw420 26-30, M Jan 3

    Your Response

    Cancel

    I wanted to compose a story

    that could everyone will get inspired of it. But I don't know how to do it! Could you pls. give me some tips? If your tips works You'll be in my Great Story :)
    sherahasel712 sherahasel712 13-15, F May 22

    Your Response

    Cancel

    I wan't to write a story,

    But I need some Ideas...If you have any idea's, or if you want some fanfiction from your favorite TV show, or anything else, just message me and let me know what you want to read.. I will write it a dedicate it to you :)
    demetrivann demetrivann 22-25, F 1 Response Feb 23

    Your Response

    Cancel

    Chapter 2 I stepped outside

    and felt the cool air on my face. I went out into our field, long and beautiful. The temperature was perfect for practice and I really needed it. All of a sudden bullets started flying towards me in all directions. I smiled and took out my nunchucks, each bullet left and right...
    xxtheecalamity xxtheecalamity 18-21, F Feb 12

    Your Response

    Cancel

    Ben And Amy

    Ben and Amy are best friends from Childhood. One day Amy admit to Ben that she is in love with him. He said to "How long have you been in love with me?" She said "Oh I think fall in love with you in High School." He said "Why did you tell me?" She said " You have a girlfriend...
    mother1983 mother1983 26-30, F 8 Responses Jul 12, 2011

    Your Response

    Cancel

    I really would. I have a plot worked out (sort

    of) and characters ect.. I enjoy reading and writing. If I did write a story, I'd probably put it on Wattpad. What do you think?
    JustThatNobody JustThatNobody 13-15, F 5 Responses Jun 17

    Your Response

    Cancel

    Related Experiences

    ~1,000 Responses~ *Revised* A never ending sea, of deja vu With 1,000 responses, to come back to A thousand responses, seems like a lot But I assure you friend, that it is not...
    WaterfallDrops WaterfallDrops 22-25, M 2 Responses 6 hrs ago

    Your Response

    Cancel
    he knew what he wanted and he went for it
    throwawaychild throwawaychild 46-50, M 1 Response 4 hrs ago

    Your Response

    Cancel
    1. I'm a Leo 2. I am a book worm 3. My favourite books are Hush Hush and Thrown of glass 4. I am 17 years young 5. I love wolves 6. I am very creative 7. I am an aunty to seven 8...
    ScarM3 ScarM3 16-17, F 8 hrs ago

    Your Response

    Cancel
    she get pen to write a story that always trying to get out from her head.but she can't write it because of the noise.she start to think slowly.she is hearing an unfair argument.she...
    darkblackknight darkblackknight 22-25, F 5 days ago

    Your Response

    Cancel
    I want to write something special. Something that has meaning. A story that matters to someone besides myself. Writing isn't easy, but it isn't hard. The hardest part is sitting...
    dourpenguin dourpenguin 18-21, M 2 Responses Sep 1

    Your Response

    Cancel
    Sometimes my life is so rush, I don't have time to think what I want. Now have more free time to think, know what I want but don't know is it worth and right to do?
    sillygirl1314 sillygirl1314 22-25, F 1 hr ago

    Your Response

    Cancel
    Fate of the world (Remix)Artist:GingerSlimOriginal By:GingerSlim Ft TheDon(Chorus)Music begins and the story unfoldsTellin how the world can be so coldGot to say it now before I...
    GingerSlimSTL GingerSlimSTL 18-21, M 2 days ago

    Your Response

    Cancel
    The first Traitor is the big story I'm working on right now on my word page. It's the story I got about 50 pages into before my computer decided to die and my "friend" tried to fix...
    ImaginaryPrototype ImaginaryPrototype 18-21, F 2 Responses Sep 2

    Your Response

    Cancel
    Hey fellow writers, so I'm currently working on a book. I've been looking for people that have a passion for writing and that are just starting—like me. The goal would be to work...
    BasicWritingInc BasicWritingInc 18-21, M Sep 1

    Your Response

    Cancel
    Where to now? I just tried to post my enthralling three word story, but the "powers that be" at EP requested I make it longer. Erm... it's pretty hard to write a three word...
    ConcreteSleeper ConcreteSleeper 31-35, M 4 Responses 4 days ago

    Your Response

    Cancel
    As The World Rhymes: A True Story of A Man That Rhymes by: Rob Paquin I've been rhyming a real long time. Hell, it goes all the way back to my formative years when I was writing...
    TheHiker TheHiker 41-45, M 3 Responses Sep 12

    Your Response

    Cancel
    I´d like to produce some nice piece of a story ... need to gather the elements, place, time, characters, plot......will make it about some ordinary, every day people... I guess...
    Brunette4U Brunette4U 31-35, F 2 Responses Sep 14

    Your Response

    Cancel
    Well not really.. Im planing to write a story for my friends can read it :p hope they'll love it maybe idk lol But here how it goes (mini part of the story but tell me if i should...
    SkilletFan01 SkilletFan01 13-15, F 6 days ago

    Your Response

    Cancel
    Match point part 3 Here's the next part of the story sorry for how long it's taking me I'll try and speed it up with the next one. Also their are parts missing but nothing...
    darkwolf19 darkwolf19 18-21, M 10 hrs ago

    Your Response

    Cancel
    Hey fellow writers, so I'm currently working on a book. I've been looking for people that have a passion for writing and that are just starting—like me. The goal would be to work...
    BasicWritingInc BasicWritingInc 18-21, M 2 Responses Sep 1

    Your Response

    Cancel
    Hey fellow writers, so I'm currently working on a book. I've been looking for people that have a passion for writing and that are just starting—like me. The goal would be to work...
    BasicWritingInc BasicWritingInc 18-21, M Sep 1

    Your Response

    Cancel
    Hey fellow writers, so I'm currently working on a book. I've been looking for people that have a passion for writing and that are just starting—like me. The goal would be to work...
    BasicWritingInc BasicWritingInc 18-21, M 1 Response Sep 2

    Your Response

    Cancel
    Mines isn't "writing proper" like short stories or anything. I mean, I write poetry, opinion blogs and essays and that's it. However, I write because it's my form of expression...
    Lov3intheasylum Lov3intheasylum 31-35, F Sep 3

    Your Response

    Cancel
    Hey fellow writers, so I'm currently working on a book. I've been looking for people that have a passion for writing and that are just starting—like me. The goal would be to work...
    BasicWritingInc BasicWritingInc 18-21, M Sep 1

    Your Response

    Cancel
    Hey fellow writers, so I'm currently working on a book. I've been looking for people that have a passion for writing and that are just starting—like me. The goal would be to work...
    BasicWritingInc BasicWritingInc 18-21, M Sep 1

    Your Response

    Cancel
    Hey fellow writers, so I'm currently working on a book. I've been looking for people that have a passion for writing and that are just starting—like me. The goal would be to work...
    BasicWritingInc BasicWritingInc 18-21, M 1 Response Sep 1

    Your Response

    Cancel
    Hey fellow writers, so I'm currently working on a book. I've been looking for people that have a passion for writing and that are just starting—like me. The goal would be to work...
    BasicWritingInc BasicWritingInc 18-21, M Sep 1

    Your Response

    Cancel
    Long time ago there were two friends in a village. Among one of them was rich but he hated his father because of his ruthless profession of earning tax for his land from his...
    ExUser007 ExUser007 18-21 Sep 2

    Your Response

    Cancel
    I try. It get's so frustrating to continue to try to do things that you know you are going to fail at. I was diagnosed with Adult Onset ADD when I returned to college at 25. I...
    piprimate piprimate 26-30, F Sep 8

    Your Response

    Cancel
    I can't stop writing. Its an absolute necessity for me, an addiction even. I look for new forums to express myself. Though I realize EP is not likely a place where my work will be...
    adianoeta adianoeta 26-30, F 3 Responses Sep 14

    Your Response

    Cancel
    The general rule for writing is write what you know. This way you will find it much easier to write a story with a beginning. A middle and an end. But I look at my life experiences...
    picklebobble picklebobble 46-50, M Sep 14

    Your Response

    Cancel
    I do lol. Me and my brother have played a make believe story for soooooo long now its got quite complex as we got older, all about different empires colliding, lots of back...
    surfdas surfdas 22-25, M 1 Response Sep 16

    Your Response

    Cancel
    I began to write a ten-word story, and then...
    KatieTreat KatieTreat 51-55, T 1 Response Sep 23

    Your Response

    Cancel
    I started writing when I was 9 years old. I found myself hidden in a far corner, with pieces of paper and little tiny nubby pencils. Writing has always been my outlet and way of...
    TooUnbearable TooUnbearable 36-40, F 2 Responses Sep 7

    Your Response

    Cancel