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I Would Like To Know If My Story Idea Is Any Good

This is for people who have a story idea and would like to know what others think about it. That is if this group gets more than like 20 members... 33 People

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    I have an idea for a story. It's about a place were everyone is the same and being different is considered breaking the law (almost representing real life, were people are being picked on and differences are just dividing us). But there is one girl living there who stands out...
    DewDropsontheGrass DewDropsontheGrass 13-15, F Feb 1, 2013

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    I Was Just Amusing Myself

    I was thinking of a Japanese version of "Carrie". Her name is Sen Suri and her dad committed hari-kari out of shame from having a daughter with "evil" powers. Her mother harangues her and tells her "Get in the closet and pray to Buddha!" And she cries "No mama-san!" She received...
    deleted deleted 26-30 7 Responses Apr 21, 2012

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    WHY BEER IS BETTER THAN A WOMAN - 1.

    Beer is always wet. 2. Frigid Beer is good Beer. 3. Beer never gets a headache. 4. Beer always goes down easily. 5. You can share a beer with your friends. 6. You don't have to wine and dine a Beer. 7. You can enjoy Beer everyday of the month. 8. You always know you are the...
    ashulikesyou ashulikesyou 18-21, M Dec 29, 2013

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    I'm having the girls over to mine for a few drinks and a chat.I suggested getting a maid to serve the drinks and clean up they said nobody would do that. I know different I'm sure...
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    (Updated)This a new and updated addition of my “Read this before you add me to your circles, I suppose I wasn’t too satisfied with the other one)Ahem, well to begin...
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    "The twisted tree and the good farmer".... In a forgotten land, a tree grew up lost between hard enviroment and bad resources,, it grew up to be a twisted tree with very bad wood...
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    Hi, my name is Lisa. I have a few good friends, but I would like to meet more from around the world. Tell me about yourself and I will get to know you and be like a penpal friend...
    Christian02 Christian02 22-25, F Aug 19

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    Hi everyone, Right now, it's raining in Sydney... This is a 17 year old sitting at his desk after a pretty bad day. What is the point of me saying this? I don't know...but I...
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    I would like to know if there's someone that could help me learning Polish. I can't afford paid courses now... and I really NEED to learn it. I was going to study by myself but I...
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    i would like to knw if there is anyone born on 22sept
    samarajohn samarajohn 61-65, F 1 Response Aug 31

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    Yes, I would like for you to have your opinion on me. Either if it bad or good opinions, I do accept comments, even criticisms also. I can focus & learn from your feedbacks.
    DiscoNight1970s DiscoNight1970s 46-50, F 1 day ago

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    So in terms of staying sober I mainly mean not smoking weed (at least for a decent amount of time) considering the fact that I don't drink anymore and only smoke. I love smoking...
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    I'm a person who is turned on a lot of the time. If you are too I would like to share photos or video chat with you. Even if your just feeling bored one night, just send me a...
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    Would love to learn Spanish and Japanese if anybody would like to tutor me? :-)
    monstahmash monstahmash 22-25, F 1 Response 2 days ago

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    Yes I am male cross dresser from the UK and I would like to do a model shoot dressed in my lingerie and nude. Also I would be prepared to show my lingerie collection on webcam...
    Joemartin77 Joemartin77 36-40, M 1 Response Aug 23

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    Would love to hear from anyone here :)
    MCDC1990 MCDC1990 22-25, M 4 days ago

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    I always wanted to be an entrepreneur. I never thought that I would fall in love with one, though. And while I would still like to retire young and sell tea for a living, my goal...
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    hey there my name is Callum. i have had a fairly crap time lately and i would love to meet some new people. i would like to make a new female friend without sounding needy or...
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    I would like to get prayed for...
    heathee heathee 46-50, F 2 Responses Aug 31

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    I would like to be friends with a girl for dating on line or off line for girly talk and fun. Add or message me Girls only no men
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    we are a young couple looking for a g.f someone open minded that would like to be part of a successful relationship..
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    A gripe is a griffon and I would like to ride it.
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    Is it strange for me to say that If I were to die today There's not a thing that I would change I've lived well Maybe I have made mistakes and been through my fair share of pain...
    ARestlessSoul ARestlessSoul 26-30 6 days ago

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    I don't believe entirely that sufferment and pain bring teach us much. I believe they do other thing way better: they hurt us, they kill our spirit. They hurt so much that we can...
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    Hello readers my name is Brenda,I am 52 years old and I am disabled . I am in need of a mini van , as of this date I can't leave my home unless someone I know has a van or a truck...
    pooka2 pooka2 46-50, F 5 days ago

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    In the past I used to have a really good set of people/social skills so much so that I was popular in primary school. I had a best friend then after a year at the same school they...
    lilygeorge12 lilygeorge12 22-25, F 2 Responses Sep 6

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    Why every beautiful story or movie ,have to end with someone who they are in love with,dying, as just it sucks but seems like novels and books and movies take whole from life. Just...
    Egyptianguy34 Egyptianguy34 31-35, M Aug 20

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    Not Really..... *grins* Be A Good Neighbor A question was raised about why mothers do not let their children play outside. I replied... but that and another conversation I was...
    SKiesterly SKiesterly 36-40, F 2 Responses Aug 23

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    i always liked the idea of doing this then it actually happened....WOW! it was my birthday and we made a cheeky comment to one of our friends who as it turned out was up for it, we...
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    I was very young at the time, but we use to visit the "Boys Home" quite a bit. And then we became familiar with the unusual happenings that went on. One particular night, my...
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    Right now I listen to Audio Books, various authors mainly filled with crime based writers and want to expand my knowledge base. I am looking for anything else that is worth the...
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    I tried teaching myself once, but that didn't work out well at all. I worked at this McDonald's in Florida, and there was a Filipino girl I had a crush on. I went out and bought a...
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    I always have these flashes of great ideas for stories and song lyrics... And by the time I get the chance to write them down I can't remember exactly where I was going with the...
    ComplexNotComplicated1 ComplexNotComplicated1 26-30, F 1 Response Aug 31

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    I feel such a nice sensation each time a man shares my romantic point of view regarding flirting or story making... makes me think thereĀ“s still hope for human beings...
    Brunette4U Brunette4U 31-35, F 2 Responses Sep 4

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    I love languages, my first language English. I also try to learn the basic words like, hello please thankyou yes no goodbye and two beers please in as many languages as possible...
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    Anything interesting to talk about? I'm a great listener and am also good at giving sensible opinions or suggestions... or so I have been told. I don't judge and am fairly open...
    pretender2687 pretender2687 26-30, M Aug 18

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    Really? So this is like a Classifieds thing? Haha Anyway I'ma Sydney girl. Really quiet and introverted. Deep thinker. Emotional animal. Capable of the kind of friendship that...
    emiveritas emiveritas 18-21, F 1 Response Aug 19

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    I just listened to animal I have become by three days grace pretty good song lyrics wise kinda hurt my ears though
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    I know I've done some stories like this before, but here we go again :) I love to cook, clean, bake, take nice walks, learn new things, meet new people, travel, listen to music...
    innocentflower innocentflower 13-15, F 1 Response Aug 24

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    Why don't you love me - Hot Chelle Rae Wow! This song came up in a good timing :o because it explains the whole situation that I'm at XD
    Misaki7590 Misaki7590 16-17, F Aug 24

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    I'm trying to be a good slave to my Master. However I feel like I'm always failing or doing something wrong :( Any advice? I have a problem fully giving up control
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    July 16th anybody? and anyone can comment on their bday experiences, would love to know ^_^
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    I'm in a really bad place and I don't think I will ever get out of it. I'm unhappily married and very much in love with another man. My husband won't have sex with me. I look very...
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    I would strongly recommend to everyone that you read this message before you add me to your circle. I am already in a relationship with my boyfriend David and if you want to friend...
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