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    Through My Eyes

    VERSE 1I take a step left,I take a step right,trying to find the will to fight.trying to fill the wounds of my broken soul,but i just cannot let it go.VERSE 2Deep in my thoughts i am trying to find an answer,fighting this war with myself,the blood that is pumping in my veins,is...
    thisaccountisgone thisaccountisgone 18-21, F 3 Responses Nov 4, 2012

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    Alone

    I just wrote this so I know it probably needs work, but I figured I'd get some constructive criticism from other song writers. Tell me what you think, and be honest. If you don't like it though, please don't be rude about it and at least give me help on how to make it better. I...
    ad1411 ad1411 18-21, F 4 Responses Aug 28, 2013

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    You Do Not Know

    VERSE 1 Deep inside I am burying my fears, I hide the pain with my sleeves, Did you never know I cry when I sleep, This feeling is just bitter emptiness, So do not try to pretend that you understand. VERSE 2 Tangling fates as my soul intertwines with the blade, Lost and never to...
    CrimsonSnow CrimsonSnow 16-17, F 1 Response Mar 21, 2013

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    "i Miss You" Original Song By: Szoeg

    Here is my very first song that i wrote, its about my best friend, whom i fell in love with, only to tell him, and find out he was in love with someone else. "I miss you"  I miss you, i miss your smile, i even shed a tear every once in awhile, We used to be best friends, and i...
    szoeg szoeg 13-15, F 1 Response Mar 13, 2012

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    We Are Dead

    You’re falling and fading No way of escaping The darkness below the light You’re losing, you’re dying The truth you’re denying Haunts your dreams in the night I’m sick of the feeling That my mind is still reeling From the pain and the hurt inside I won’t be told I’m...
    Catcher94 Catcher94 18-21, M Sep 9, 2013

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    You could have said that you were listening,

    but I know you're not I know you're not You could've said you'd never let me down, but i know it happened anyway You could've told me everything To make me feel okay, but you threw me away You could've told me the truth Cause now all I believe are the lies you put me through
    Thefraygirl Thefraygirl 13-15, F Jan 12

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    Sweet Anna A Song From A Dream

    A few years ago I had a dream about being a civil war soldier.  I woke up and wrote this song about it. Sweet Anna O h my sweet Anna pray for me Don't want to kill my brother There's smoke and mud and rage and blood One cannot see the other Oh my sweet Anna pray for me I cannot...
    puck61 puck61 51-55, M 2 Responses Feb 10, 2011

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    Tarantulas Lost my manners,

    Tarantulas Lost my name, games played for fun And now, I’m done With….. Tarantulas Too many questions, not enough lessons Holes in my arguments and garments Stubborn and starving Condensed confusion, Confusion Falling for false feelings Laughing and squealing, kneeling...
    Bothor Bothor 31-35, M 1 Response Dec 26, 2013

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    I Wrote A New Song Tell Me What U Think

    verse 1: you been stuck shadows where there isn't any light you been sitting down watching everybody fight you have opinions that  need to be heard so  chorus: break out of this shell  thats been keeping you because you fell once come on find your voice break into the open...
    fearisaliar fearisaliar 18-21, F 1 Response Jul 10, 2013

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    For You

    Verse 1: you may be gone, been gone a long time since before I started writing this song, through it all when you were here you told me stay strong. Everything I do the thoughts on my mind all of it is for you, just know your not here but your never gone, I wish you could hear...
    deleted deleted 26-30 19 Responses Mar 24, 2013

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    Exile For Nothing

    This was never intended. My freedom has ended. Exile is the hardest thing to face. Especially when It's your fate. I did my best, but that was not enough For all of my kind and for us. And I regret every trying Because now I'm emotionally crying (CHORUS) I never expected it to go...
    LongtailZ LongtailZ 18-21, M Nov 17, 2013

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    Awake For The First Time

    Verse 1I open my eyes to a painful dream,Nothing is good just black burdens,I am falling down a endless hole,No light will shine on me again.Verse 2Nightmares linger in my mind even when I wake,Too many tears have fell from these eyes,Too many scars on my wrists,Where is the...
    CrimsonSnow CrimsonSnow 16-17, F Mar 5, 2013

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    Angel

    I see you laugh I see you cry But you throw it all away Wish there was something I could say But you can't see me I wish you could But you can still see me in everything good (chorus) Just look for your angel That's who we are Just look for you angel follow your north start...
    MaddieJayJay MaddieJayJay 13-15, F 1 Response Sep 25, 2013

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    "Away with you" Sanity is overrated I live

    for that look you give me, for your touch, your smell.. your heart. I live for the softest, honey combed whispers that touch my soul The kindness that wraps me away with you. Take me into your arms again and again and again I won't leave you, I will never leave you Hold me...
    Rosesanddiamonds Rosesanddiamonds 22-25, F 2 Responses Feb 9

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    Power Trip

    Thoughts running through my head They never ever seem to stop It’s a carousel of broken dreams It’s a non-stop ticking clock This blood running through my veins It’s black and cold as ice It’s a poison infect’n all it touches Killing with a roll of the dice I’m...
    Catcher94 Catcher94 18-21, M Sep 11, 2013

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    Labeled

    VERSE 1 Where does this path go, Will I always be so alone, All I feel is emptiness filling my broken soul, I clench my fists from anger and sadness, Just let me fall into this black hole. VERSE 2 I have scars, each one telling a different tale, I am not the smartest person in...
    CrimsonSnow CrimsonSnow 16-17, F Apr 12, 2013

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    Bedtime Lullaby Dedicated To My Grandma

    V1: I wish that I could see you now Free of pain and sorrow Walking down heavenly streets Not worried 'bout tomorrow PC1: And when I finally see you again I'll praise The Lord on high And I'll join you in your happiness As you light up...
    AJoy94 AJoy94 18-21, F Nov 21, 2013

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    Carry My Heart Back Home.

    In the morning, bright sunlight And my picture was hung up high With a little difference to my smile And the little crooked frame jut fell down Broken pieces glass releases And a tear of the echo A blind sun ignores what needs! Help me carry my heart home! A smile I wear...
    Frozenfires Frozenfires 18-21 1 Response Mar 16, 2013

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    Lesson Learned

    I'm here waiting for your return. Come here, tell me you'll always be there. Show me all the things I shouldn't know. I want to see that ugly, passionate glare. I am evil, for wanting you. Oh, but I just can't get enough of those psychotic lapses. Take me with you as your...
    EmoryR EmoryR 18-21, F Jul 26, 2013

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    Everybody's Devil

    I’m the one that’s in control I’m the one that’s in your head The one that has your soul And filling it with dread This place is mine forevermore They can’t lead you astray now Can’t protect yourself anymore I’m the one you obey now I am the doubt plaguing your...
    Catcher94 Catcher94 18-21, M Sep 9, 2013

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    L.o.v.e. Y.o.u. E.d.i.t.h!! <3

    L.O.V.E. Y.O.U. E.D.I.T.H!! <3 Every time i lie awake, after all this s**t i take, i'll talk to you..yet... My heart beats but i feel deceased, i love you baby, your mine and im yours I feel torn inside, i feel like i wannabe gone but.. God i love you, you own my heart and...
    KaisonWolf KaisonWolf 16-17, M 4 Responses Dec 28, 2012

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    Just Dance

    You dance in the music ........................... You dance in the music And lose yourself in the crowd ......................... You dance to the music And let it all out Yeah Let it all ouuuuuuuuuuuuuut ............................. Dance to the music x5 Let it all out yeah...
    NightwolfBlackheart NightwolfBlackheart 26-30, M 2 Responses Nov 29, 2013

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    This is a story of just a story Abt kid like

    you and me He was happy and healthy And lived in harmony Until one day Halloween night There was the phone call changed his life They said I'm sorry I don't know what to say But your son has cancer in his brain He didn't think much of it at the time Till his mom went to...
    Tyler1995 Tyler1995 18-21, M 1 Response Dec 27, 2013

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    In My Stars

    Verse1 History repeats itself and I fall in love again A new day a new breath, so let’s begin Pre Hook You’re not free But you’re right for me And I’m willing, so willing To see, how far we, can go Hook Days and nights and moments in time Something sweet, something...
    Bothor Bothor 31-35, M 1 Response Oct 3, 2013

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    this is a song I wrote about 3 friends of mine,

    they were great people that were misunderstood by everyone who chose not to know them. 3 hot messians My 3 hot messians people not of the norm ladies of the fast lane misunderstood by the world My friends of the rebel held by no bound the ones people envy for their freedom...
    Airman2300 Airman2300 22-25, M Feb 11

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    Broken Apart

    It came today, his friends told him it came back, He was speechless, He wasn't ready for it to come that day. She was left high and dry, for it made her weep on the inside, And It didn't even try, because it was created that way. (CHORUS) It comes when it wants to, it brings...
    LongtailZ LongtailZ 18-21, M 2 Responses Nov 17, 2013

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    Summon The Black Rose

    i am not a enemy nor am i a friend, shadows of the darkness are voices in my head... wings pale of black..... fire that will come when she sets the moon alight... she is the black rose... thorns bleeding blood... she is the snowflake.... that will never melt away..... She...
    CrimsonSnow CrimsonSnow 16-17, F Mar 4, 2013

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    Haven'T Met You Yet

    I. I’ve never really been in love Or I never really want to be in love I’ve learned a lot from what I see When hearts are broken, and friends are crying I call myself wise for knowing when it’s not the time But I guess not wise enough to say if it’s real or not Refrain...
    starskies starskies 18-21, F 2 Responses Jun 24, 2013

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    Together We Stand- Original Song

    On December 6, 2011, a tragedy had struck my school. A senior guy named Kyle had commited suicide due to bullying. He was bi-sexual and a couple of guys wouldn't get off his back about it. It got to him and he took his life. The next day at school, you could feel the tension...
    AllAmericanGurl AllAmericanGurl 16-17, F 1 Response Jul 24, 2012

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    Silly Chili I'm cooking up some chili Trying

    always to be silly Grill the tofu with the sesame You'll see how happy we will be. Put the onions in the pan They'll be sizzling soon my man Add some chili and garlic Stir it around so it don't stick I'm cooking up some chili Trying always to be silly Grill the tofu with the...
    pcflvly pcflvly 46-50, M Dec 17, 2013

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    Wait

    i said i cant do it anymore what are we still fighting for? if not for love , what is left? youve taken your toll on me and i got nothing left to figure out ive faced it everyday and everyday its never been so clear you were never here i cant wait no more for things to fall...
    IOpenedMyEyeSs IOpenedMyEyeSs 18-21, F 2 Responses Jan 23, 2012

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    Can you hold your heart in your hands,

    Or is it just a saying that you have bent? Hope is a damed, But without it's pump, There's no grasping reality from where you have been. Close your eyes now and imagine this, a painting of a sun that you still can't see, It's far to bright to grasp. Far to hard to feel How...
    ApocTheComet ApocTheComet 18-21, M 1 Response Jan 15

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    Make things right (Verse 1) Who am I play to

    the joker All did was play the fool You bet your heart as if it were a game of poker You lost it all dont ya know the rules (Verse 2) I was blind by your second chances I couldn't see for the life of me You drew me in and played the Romance Now u roam for eternity (Pre...
    Tyler1995 Tyler1995 18-21, M Jan 21

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    Colorless World (soft beat).

    .......... (intro to bass) Yeah she comes around with those teary eyes, All those smiles oh they were cold lies, She cries out to the closed windows and doors, Save me from myself, (pick up drum beat), - shout- I can't take this anymore Her hearts cold, she builds up her walls...
    CursedEmo CursedEmo 16-17, M 1 Response Dec 19, 2013

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    You know life is like loaded gun One slip up

    is like a trigger Fck up and your done Bang! That's how we all wanna go out But nobody even cares to hear our shouts People push and nudge for what they love But how will the act When push comes to shove It's help what they are thinking of So we are stuck with nowhere to...
    Tyler1995 Tyler1995 18-21, M 1 Response Jan 16

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    Rage

    She is filled with rage. Sick of feeling this way. Waiting for the day, that she can get away. From this world as we know it- and its demands. Set off to find her happy place, holding her own hand. This world is filled with hate, but one day she'll get away. At peace with her...
    xobroken xobroken 13-15, F Nov 3, 2013

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    This is the first time i ever shared a song

    with anyone... Wich makes me quite nervous since I don't know if people like it, or if it's just a hobby I should keep to myself.. Here it is, anyway... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RYuB2lhKK48
    ImMira ImMira 16-17, F 3 Responses Jan 19

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    I Am A Songwriter And Lyricist.

    I think that I realized that I was a songwriter when the chorus to a christian song became a "sing-a-long". We were performing MY SONG live. What a joy to hear others lifting their voices to the words and melody that sprung forth out of me. I birthed that song into existence...
    Missalaineyeus Missalaineyeus 46-50, F 3 Responses Apr 5, 2012

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    Usually in my sleep. It's the weirdest thing.

    Take last night for example; I was dreaming about going to see the Pixies again and while I was walking back to my car in the dream out of nowhere this song starts playing really low at first and I know it's one I've never heard before. Then the dream sort of faded out and all I...
    explainit2me explainit2me 22-25, F Dec 18, 2013

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    Missed Call

    By my bedside I lay staring out the window feeling that noise , hearing it loud in my head All day ringing , a melody on replay listening to my heart beating , ( Oh oh ) Tears just roll off my cheeks remembering you . Cuz everytime I say your name , I'm getting ur missed...
    AlexAngel AlexAngel 18-21, T 3 Responses Nov 11, 2012

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    Untitiled Song

    He wakes up in there room, hoping her face is the first thing he see's, But instead he wakes up to find her eyes : cold, dead, and lifeless He body chalk white and breathless as she lay so still. Why, how could you leave us this way oh why, did you seek out that knife oh why...
    Jwolf1342 Jwolf1342 18-21, M 1 Response Jan 31, 2013

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    chorus of a song I wrote: > Nothing can save

    my burning heart from the pain that you have caused and the flame that you have start nothing can save me from this burning heart <
    MissMilan MissMilan 13-15, F Dec 28, 2013

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    "Waiting"

    Here's a song I wrote recently about my lack of boyfriend troubles. I haven't written one in quite some time, hope you like it! "Waiting" Somebody to hold you Somebody to share your secrets with Someone that will love you for all that you are Someone who came for...
    Silencio Silencio 18-21, F 4 Responses Aug 8, 2008

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    This is my song ( unfinished) called

    "once" When I had my innocence I heard a lady say 'soon you'll go and leave this town' and long ago you left me alone in the darkness of my heart Why did I leave alone Why did you leave me here Why is everyone so cruel? Where are you my friend who said 'I will never leave...
    Sassykid9 Sassykid9 13-15, F Feb 15

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    Listen closer to my whispers,

    Can't you notice that you are in my heart, Don't get too cold let me warm you, You are my life, my own virtue, Darlin' don't run it will be okay, Please stop crying, you are too beautiful, (slow drum beat) Do not listen to those voices, You are stronger than before, Those...
    CursedEmo CursedEmo 16-17, M Jan 9

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    My Guitar Still Sleeps

    When I was a child, I was influenced by a number of Hawaiian musicians. One of my neighbors knew Cecilo & Kapono, and they encouraged me to learn the guitar and play. The guitar and ukulele were a big part of my life. We'd sit around the weekend fires, playing, singing, watching...
    silentwriter180 silentwriter180 41-45, F 4 Responses Jan 27, 2012

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    The Eyes

    I've been looking deep into your eyes, everyday now It comes to me as some surprise what they say now Stone palaces all turn to grey The empty feelings, they won't get away from me now       Some brag of sin, some try to change the world around You...
    IamIam IamIam 46-50, M 10 Responses Dec 13, 2007

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    As I Fall

    As I Fall By Lucifer     Little boy runs and hides While daddy screams and shouts Holding back his tears As dad and mom have a fallout Oh no, there goes daddy hitting mommy yet again The things he has to fear! As silently he cries! And often...
    JollyDevittaRoger JollyDevittaRoger 22-25, M 2 Responses Oct 9, 2008

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    Stay Behind

    When I think I am alone I come into my own The pain you left me with Still leaves its mark It’s never black and white But it’s always dark And I would never have to grieve If you would never leave Chorus In the darkness Memories of us taunt me Don’t leave me alone Stay...
    Catcher94 Catcher94 18-21, M 1 Response Sep 9, 2013

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    Blurred Dreams

    Founded by oppression Taken from depression Trying to forgive and forget All those that hurt me Who do I need? Other than God I look to the sides, there's nothing but walls, I face in, looking closer, and closer, Things fit starting to look a bit clearer. All those that I once...
    deleted deleted 26-30 1 Response Jul 31, 2013

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    Her Name Was Tragedy...

    She's sinking down... A little angel, victim of knowing too much. The words leave her numb. She finds a glimpse of clarity in the form of a bottle. It pulls her in. Her hope is just an illusion. These thoughts are polluting her mind. More problems suffocate her, no escape this...
    ShadowFallx ShadowFallx 13-15, M 1 Response May 29, 2013

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    Raindrops

    Is this cold air from inside or outside All I feel is cold tide after tide My soul is nothing but a great divide And the water seeping in cannot be denied  .  . It snakes and crawls all over my body This water is taking over everything that is me Washing away my...
    AwkwardMoment AwkwardMoment 31-35 2 Responses Jun 23, 2008

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    Candy'S Song

    She stands on the corner of third and Maintrying to figure out how to stop the painthe pills and the booze never did no goodand she didn't make the pictures like she thought she couldbut up and down the ***** she made her waylosing her pride more and more everydaybut underneath...
    puck61 puck61 51-55, M 5 Responses Mar 26, 2013

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    Broken Little Girl

    VERSE 1 Here she lays in the dusty snow hiding a story no one will ever know, Little by little she has to let go, The wind trying to block out those shouts, But no one can save her from all those horrid doubts, All she has is tears in her eyes and blood from her veins. VERSE 2...
    CrimsonSnow CrimsonSnow 16-17, F 1 Response Mar 14, 2013

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    Plenty For Two- A song I wrote for my friend. We have been through hate, depression, the unknown and pure bliss. I love her to death. She's had it hard. Survived battles I can't...
    TimelyLow412 TimelyLow412 13-15, F 1 Response Mar 28

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    Remember to smile A cold wind rushes over me, my winter has begun My wet cheeks frozen by the breeze, lonely is but one Then I felt your hand touch my cheek Wiped my tears and...
    baconrind baconrind 26-30, M Apr 5

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    I used to try and get song ideas on the spot, which didn't work well, so I then tried to let ideas come to me, but they wouldn't. I don't think I'll ever make it!
    loopylucy9 loopylucy9 13-15, F