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    Your Broken Heart I had this "thing" with a

    co-worker of mine for four months. It started back on March 1st, 2014. He got my number through a mutual friend of ours and we started talking. I fell for him really fast and he sensed it. He claimed that he felt the same, but then later admitted that he was only considering...
    AllAmericanGurl AllAmericanGurl 16-17, F Jun 30

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    Candy'S Song

    She stands on the corner of third and Maintrying to figure out how to stop the painthe pills and the booze never did no goodand she didn't make the pictures like she thought she couldbut up and down the ***** she made her waylosing her pride more and more everydaybut underneath...
    puck61 puck61 51-55, M 3 Responses Mar 26, 2013

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    Through My Eyes

    VERSE 1I take a step left,I take a step right,trying to find the will to fight.trying to fill the wounds of my broken soul,but i just cannot let it go.VERSE 2Deep in my thoughts i am trying to find an answer,fighting this war with myself,the blood that is pumping in my veins,is...
    thisaccountisgone thisaccountisgone 18-21, F 3 Responses Nov 4, 2012

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    Make things right (Verse 1) Who am I play to

    the joker All did was play the fool You bet your heart as if it were a game of poker You lost it all dont ya know the rules (Verse 2) I was blind by your second chances I couldn't see for the life of me You drew me in and played the Romance Now u roam for eternity (Pre...
    Tyler1995 Tyler1995 18-21, M Jan 21

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    L.o.v.e. Y.o.u. E.d.i.t.h!! <3

    L.O.V.E. Y.O.U. E.D.I.T.H!! <3 Every time i lie awake, after all this s**t i take, i'll talk to you..yet... My heart beats but i feel deceased, i love you baby, your mine and im yours I feel torn inside, i feel like i wannabe gone but.. God i love you, you own my heart and...
    KaisonWolf KaisonWolf 18-21, M 4 Responses Dec 28, 2012

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    Can you hold your heart in your hands,

    Or is it just a saying that you have bent? Hope is a damed, But without it's pump, There's no grasping reality from where you have been. Close your eyes now and imagine this, a painting of a sun that you still can't see, It's far to bright to grasp. Far to hard to feel How...
    ApocTheComet ApocTheComet 18-21, M Jan 15

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    This is a story of just a story Abt kid like

    you and me He was happy and healthy And lived in harmony Until one day Halloween night There was the phone call changed his life They said I'm sorry I don't know what to say But your son has cancer in his brain He didn't think much of it at the time Till his mom went to...
    Tyler1995 Tyler1995 18-21, M 1 Response Dec 27, 2013

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    In My Stars

    Verse1 History repeats itself and I fall in love again A new day a new breath, so let’s begin Pre Hook You’re not free But you’re right for me And I’m willing, so willing To see, how far we, can go Hook Days and nights and moments in time Something sweet, something...
    Bothor Bothor 31-35, M 1 Response Oct 3, 2013

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    this is a song I wrote about 3 friends of mine,

    they were great people that were misunderstood by everyone who chose not to know them. 3 hot messians My 3 hot messians people not of the norm ladies of the fast lane misunderstood by the world My friends of the rebel held by no bound the ones people envy for their freedom...
    Airman2300 Airman2300 22-25, M 1 Response Feb 11

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    Alone

    I just wrote this so I know it probably needs work, but I figured I'd get some constructive criticism from other song writers. Tell me what you think, and be honest. If you don't like it though, please don't be rude about it and at least give me help on how to make it better. I...
    ad1411 ad1411 18-21, F 4 Responses Aug 28, 2013

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    Just Dance

    You dance in the music ........................... You dance in the music And lose yourself in the crowd ......................... You dance to the music And let it all out Yeah Let it all ouuuuuuuuuuuuuut ............................. Dance to the music x5 Let it all out yeah...
    NightwolfBlackheart NightwolfBlackheart 26-30, M 2 Responses Nov 29, 2013

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    For You

    Verse 1: you may be gone, been gone a long time since before I started writing this song, through it all when you were here you told me stay strong. Everything I do the thoughts on my mind all of it is for you, just know your not here but your never gone, I wish you could hear...
    deleted deleted 26-30 19 Responses Mar 24, 2013

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    Name: 01 The Bank Title: The Bank Artist:

    Beyond Raymond Year: 2014 Rick Raymond Studios {Verse 1} Here we go again, it's the bank. If you need money, you go to the bank. I needed money, so I gone to the bank. Everybody was there. I couldn't get that. I needed money, I was mad, I was sad. I got my money, right after the...
    BeyondRaymond BeyondRaymond 16-17 1 Response Jan 7

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    Missed Call

    By my bedside I lay staring out the window feeling that noise , hearing it loud in my head All day ringing , a melody on replay listening to my heart beating , ( Oh oh ) Tears just roll off my cheeks remembering you . Cuz everytime I say your name , I'm getting ur missed...
    JacobSky JacobSky 18-21, T 3 Responses Nov 11, 2012

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    chorus of a song I wrote: > Nothing can save

    my burning heart from the pain that you have caused and the flame that you have start nothing can save me from this burning heart <
    MissMilan MissMilan 13-15, F Dec 28, 2013

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    I Am A Songwriter And Lyricist.

    I think that I realized that I was a songwriter when the chorus to a christian song became a "sing-a-long". We were performing MY SONG live. What a joy to hear others lifting their voices to the words and melody that sprung forth out of me. I birthed that song into existence...
    Missalaineyeus Missalaineyeus 46-50, F 3 Responses Apr 5, 2012

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    Bloody Wrists

    Verse1: she got them bloody wrists bloody wrists, full of scars and pain She wants that blood right out of those veins Verse2: she can't see what she is doing, and I just wanna help She says no, she pushes me away but I dunno where to go Chorus: All this blood and agony, we...
    KaisonWolf KaisonWolf 18-21, M 1 Response Jan 17, 2013

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    ^-^

    The darkness of your light.. the sound of cries, you know it all leads back to you. Your angel face is running, from the light... it's running from the truth. It's running from me. Oh, you'll regret it.. not taking me. But by the cries and the pieces of my heart in this darkness...
    ThisGirlisCuttingEdge ThisGirlisCuttingEdge 13-15, F 2 Responses Jun 30, 2012

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    I put all my songs in Notes,

    and today I lost all of my new ones I didn't write down yet. Darn
    youtubeninja youtubeninja 18-21, F Aug 4

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    I've been writing songs

    for about 2 years but mainly as a hobbie I find it a good way to let out your emotions I mainly write love songs most of the time but I've never had the chance to get the right tune to go with them maybe one day I will be able to.
    pmarsh92 pmarsh92 18-21, M May 16

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    Sweet Anna A Song From A Dream

    A few years ago I had a dream about being a civil war soldier.  I woke up and wrote this song about it. Sweet Anna O h my sweet Anna pray for me Don't want to kill my brother There's smoke and mud and rage and blood One cannot see the other Oh my sweet Anna pray for me I cannot...
    puck61 puck61 51-55, M 2 Responses Feb 10, 2011

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    It has happened, Nothing will ever be the same

    again. But we can take it! We'll be stronger, We'll stand up taller, We'll show the world who we are. We can lead the world Together To a better place Where such things never happen Where all rejoice! We'll be stronger We'll stand up taller, We'll show the world who we are. So...
    kennedy10505 kennedy10505 13-15, F 1 Response Jun 17

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    Rule number one, trust no one Living in this

    world you sleep with both eyes open You can't even trust none of the friends you've chosen Cause they quick to turn they back when you give them an open Exposing all yo secrets with promises that they'd keep it Then you find out and truthfully you can't believe it You try to...
    killuminatipharaoh killuminatipharaoh 18-21, M May 13

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    As I Fall

    As I Fall By Lucifer     Little boy runs and hides While daddy screams and shouts Holding back his tears As dad and mom have a fallout Oh no, there goes daddy hitting mommy yet again The things he has to fear! As silently he cries! And often...
    JollyDevittaRoger JollyDevittaRoger 22-25, M 2 Responses Oct 9, 2008

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    "Away with you" Sanity is overrated I live

    for that look you give me, for your touch, your smell.. your heart. I live for the softest, honey combed whispers that touch my soul The kindness that wraps me away with you. Take me into your arms again and again and again I won't leave you, I will never leave you Hold me...
    deleted deleted 26-30 2 Responses Feb 9

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    My Guitar Still Sleeps

    When I was a child, I was influenced by a number of Hawaiian musicians. One of my neighbors knew Cecilo & Kapono, and they encouraged me to learn the guitar and play. The guitar and ukulele were a big part of my life. We'd sit around the weekend fires, playing, singing, watching...
    silentwriter180 silentwriter180 41-45, F 4 Responses Jan 27, 2012

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    Ghost [Rap verse] I can't take no

    more Curled up in a ball In a dark call It's all I can call home Ever since I lost you my life has been a misery [Verse 1] I see you here Sitting over there...I don't blame you and all that hatred that runs throw your veins I know it's caused by me And them days we had, they...
    DDRaps DDRaps 16-17, M Jul 24

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    I just want you to see How effective honesty

    can be No room for your bullsh-t and lies I refuse to sympathize Pure trash F-cking scum Lying through your teeth Nothing left to say All "I love yous" Whispered with your fingers crossed If you really meant it you wouldn't have let me go If you really meant it you wouldn't...
    KristinaBeena KristinaBeena 18-21, F Jun 2

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    Haven'T Met You Yet

    I. I’ve never really been in love Or I never really want to be in love I’ve learned a lot from what I see When hearts are broken, and friends are crying I call myself wise for knowing when it’s not the time But I guess not wise enough to say if it’s real or not Refrain...
    starskies starskies 18-21, F 2 Responses Jun 24, 2013

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    This is the first time i ever shared a song

    with anyone... Wich makes me quite nervous since I don't know if people like it, or if it's just a hobby I should keep to myself.. Here it is, anyway... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RYuB2lhKK48
    ImMira ImMira 16-17, F 4 Responses Jan 19

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    It's a little hard to explain the tune- sort of

    like the slow parts of 'I Have Confidence'. When you close your eyes you look happy, Like you're smiling and could even rejoice, Then you open them and I See the pain inside And I know, Its because of me. Its because of me. Oh how I wish that things could be different, And...
    coreycake22 coreycake22 16-17, F 1 Response Jun 25

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    Her Name Was Tragedy...

    She's sinking down... A little angel, victim of knowing too much. The words leave her numb. She finds a glimpse of clarity in the form of a bottle. It pulls her in. Her hope is just an illusion. These thoughts are polluting her mind. More problems suffocate her, no escape this...
    ShadowFallx ShadowFallx 13-15, M 1 Response May 29, 2013

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    "i Miss You" Original Song By: Szoeg

    Here is my very first song that i wrote, its about my best friend, whom i fell in love with, only to tell him, and find out he was in love with someone else. "I miss you"  I miss you, i miss your smile, i even shed a tear every once in awhile, We used to be best friends, and i...
    szoeg szoeg 13-15, F 1 Response Mar 13, 2012

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    Together We Stand- Original Song

    On December 6, 2011, a tragedy had struck my school. A senior guy named Kyle had commited suicide due to bullying. He was bi-sexual and a couple of guys wouldn't get off his back about it. It got to him and he took his life. The next day at school, you could feel the tension...
    AllAmericanGurl AllAmericanGurl 16-17, F 1 Response Jul 24, 2012

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    You know life is like loaded gun One slip up

    is like a trigger Fck up and your done Bang! That's how we all wanna go out But nobody even cares to hear our shouts People push and nudge for what they love But how will the act When push comes to shove It's help what they are thinking of So we are stuck with nowhere to...
    Tyler1995 Tyler1995 18-21, M 1 Response Jan 16

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    Raindrops

    Is this cold air from inside or outside All I feel is cold tide after tide My soul is nothing but a great divide And the water seeping in cannot be denied  .  . It snakes and crawls all over my body This water is taking over everything that is me Washing away my...
    AwkwardMoment AwkwardMoment 31-35 2 Responses Jun 23, 2008

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    An old one, from December 2008.

    "Satin and Seashells" My baby sleeps on the front porch Her name is Glory Divine She's dressed in satin and seashells, lips a shade of wine She's got a voice like a spring storm Her words are beacons of light She guides me home in the evening time My baby sleeps...
    traurigerpanda traurigerpanda 26-30, M 1 Response Aug 8

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    I lost myself in the chaos

    that is my life I'm forever drowning inside Gasping for air Wishing I could make things right Demons have resided in my mind Playing tricks on the human deep inside Go away, just go away Why don't you let go of your lies That remains tangled up in your pride My memories and...
    xchelseydawnx xchelseydawnx 22-25, F 1 Response Jul 29

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    You could have said that you were listening,

    but I know you're not I know you're not You could've said you'd never let me down, but i know it happened anyway You could've told me everything To make me feel okay, but you threw me away You could've told me the truth Cause now all I believe are the lies you put me through
    Thefraygirl Thefraygirl 13-15, F Jan 12

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    Summon The Black Rose

    i am not a enemy nor am i a friend, shadows of the darkness are voices in my head... wings pale of black..... fire that will come when she sets the moon alight... she is the black rose... thorns bleeding blood... she is the snowflake.... that will never melt away..... She...
    CrimsonSnow CrimsonSnow 16-17, F Mar 4, 2013

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    Trying to make a song

    but I can't write lyrics
    yelleks0523 yelleks0523 22-25, M 1 Response Dec 30, 2013

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    Awake For The First Time

    Verse 1I open my eyes to a painful dream,Nothing is good just black burdens,I am falling down a endless hole,No light will shine on me again.Verse 2Nightmares linger in my mind even when I wake,Too many tears have fell from these eyes,Too many scars on my wrists,Where is the...
    CrimsonSnow CrimsonSnow 16-17, F Mar 5, 2013

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    Actually, I mainly write parodies.

    Any popular songs that would make good parodies?
    HeartOfNature HeartOfNature 13-15, F Aug 2

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    The Eyes

    I've been looking deep into your eyes, everyday now It comes to me as some surprise what they say now Stone palaces all turn to grey The empty feelings, they won't get away from me now       Some brag of sin, some try to change the world around You...
    IamIam IamIam 46-50, M 10 Responses Dec 13, 2007

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    Wait

    i said i cant do it anymore what are we still fighting for? if not for love , what is left? youve taken your toll on me and i got nothing left to figure out ive faced it everyday and everyday its never been so clear you were never here i cant wait no more for things to fall...
    IOpenedMyEyeSs IOpenedMyEyeSs 18-21, F 1 Response Jan 23, 2012

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    I've written songs ever

    since I was 12. It was a way as a kid that I could figure myself out and make sense of all my crazy thoughts. It was also one of the few things that really got me noticed when I was younger too which at the time was a big plus
    mattywheels25 mattywheels25 26-30, M Jul 19

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    There are people who negatively criticize dance

    music for not having any meaning, well as a writer of dance music I find this somewhat offensive, not all dance music is meaningless (though I have written some meaningless songs),there is some songs I write that either make me cry, tear up, get angry, or just be really happy...
    PopTownRuler08 PopTownRuler08 18-21, M Jun 7

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    There is no other feeling

    that is better than singing a song you wrote. Whether it's acoustic music (like some people write) or dance music (what I write), that is the greatest connection you have to anything on Earth, it expresses you in a way that nothing else can.
    PopTownRuler08 PopTownRuler08 18-21, M May 23

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    Untitiled Song

    He wakes up in there room, hoping her face is the first thing he see's, But instead he wakes up to find her eyes : cold, dead, and lifeless He body chalk white and breathless as she lay so still. Why, how could you leave us this way oh why, did you seek out that knife oh why...
    Jwolf1342 Jwolf1342 18-21, M 1 Response Jan 31, 2013

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    Jumpers mentality Dont look at me

    that way I dont care what you say You ******* pissed me off You ******* lit this bomb you pushed me to my ledge But it was what you said: {Chorus} Its your fault you ****** up big So dont wave when we meet again I wish we never met that day Death iught be better anyway...
    MaddieJayJay MaddieJayJay 13-15, F 6 days ago

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    I made a remix of a song

    and it stuck in my head. Girls put your panties on, no one wants to see your thong. Go ahead and put your skirt down. Sapphire, faded jeans Your virginity better stay clean Or you might turn into a hoe. I said that to my sister and she started laughing.
    KianHayesThot KianHayesThot 13-15, F Jun 18

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    "Waiting"

    Here's a song I wrote recently about my lack of boyfriend troubles. I haven't written one in quite some time, hope you like it! "Waiting" Somebody to hold you Somebody to share your secrets with Someone that will love you for all that you are Someone who came for...
    Silencio Silencio 18-21, F 3 Responses Aug 8, 2008

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