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    The sky is dark, and stars are bright,

    All is quiet and no one is around.It's almost silent, there is no one to talk to in the Night.I breath slowly and deeply, and enjoy the fresh air,I walk and observe nature and become aware.Aware that there is more to nature than what meets the Eye.As I take another deep breath...
    tt00t tt00t 22-25, M May 26

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    Can anyone tell me if this poems okay?

    And if not can you tell me what I can do to change it? (P.S. It's supposed to have so many 'downs') The open door Deep down Falling down The dark above Tumbling down Deep below I've fallen down Light around I've tumbled down A white door Beckons me A soothing voice Welcomes...
    AReadingWriter AReadingWriter 13-15, F May 25

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    True friends #2 Some friends come Some friends

    go Some friends remain Some were meant to be We can always sit under a tree Talk about our long history The good, the bad, the ugly While some will make you mad Others will make you very sad The majority of these memories Will fill you with so much happiness Because when push...
    Time4kush Time4kush 26-30, M Nov 20, 2014

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    I Hate You Depression

    Dear depression please stop making me feel like numb you make me feel and act like dumb stop treating me as if i'm a piece of gum that you keep chewing it whenever you need then you just throw it on the ground then you step on it with your feet and then you are gone you just...
    AYearWithoutRain AYearWithoutRain 18-21, M 6 Responses Apr 19, 2011

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    Dark one, you better get out of my face!

    I'm going to put on a straight face.... I'll knock your teeth out, & throw it into out of space... I'll pull your guts out, reshape you into another race... This is a message to you from outer space.... I'm coming down from the heavens your face will be my landing space... Full...
    LeahLovee LeahLovee 13-15, F Jun 20

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    the lights so blinding as i move out of my

    room i see only one finding my world is in for a doom there is no real love in this world all are busy in their hole finally they will leave you in cold.. i am just a dark mole who will be crushed under the feet never to walk again oh how i wish to get crushed under the feet...
    brilliantdisguise82 brilliantdisguise82 31-35, M May 25

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    Who Is This Girl?

    When you see this girl what do you see? you see a girl who has been labeled as GOTH!! when you see this girl who do you see? you see a girl who wants to DIE!!!   why you ask because of this label she hates who she is she hates that you label her now who is...
    peteysux peteysux 16-17, F 1 Response May 24, 2007

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    Someone on here was talking to me about poetry,

    as how to write it. So I gave it a go. It is my first ever poem, so don't judge xD Fading. Clutching the bottle, Her grasp grows weary Her heart races, But is dead inside A long drag, A swig from the can Takes all her pain away Her worries fading with the smoke She lies in...
    betruetoyourself14 betruetoyourself14 13-15, F 1 Response Jun 4

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    I Am

    I am a fierce wind and a gentle breeze,A roaring of thunder, a whisper in the trees.Cold as ice, and a red, fiery flame,A drought, a desert, and a torrent of rain.A calm, quiet lake, with water serene,Violent ocean waves crashing, a nightmare, a sweet dream.I am a fighter...
    someday2012 someday2012 41-45, F 4 Responses May 5, 2013

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    Lupus I am not asking to be saved I gave up on

    that crap Im not asking you to care I dont trust anyone anymore People are nothing but liars And hide this fact under layers I am done trying to be heard When no one is ever around to hear I don't want you to save me I don't want to be saved I just let this lupus to kill...
    Time4kush Time4kush 26-30, M 3 Responses Nov 19, 2014

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    Darling, there will be those

    who will try to calm your thunder-heart. I say give 'em a taste of a storm and see who stays. The ones who have seen the rainbow between your raindrops are the keepers. They're the ones who aren't afraid to get paralyzed by lightening because they already know the painstaking...
    auraboreale auraboreale 18-21, F 2 Responses 3 days ago

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    Only if I feared death.

    . Time is running out so why do tomorrow what I can do now I'll confess I'm holding on to you by a thin threaded I'm holding on to you when I could have already fled The words I needed to hear so bad Is exactly the words you told me I'm hurting because I never gave you...
    LeahLovee LeahLovee 13-15, F Jun 14

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    I miss you yes I do Not the broken down you

    The old you. The I love you When you use to respect me Love me Protect and made me feel secure We ended off good and I regret nothing Now I'm here missing you Wishing that you could be replaced Short poem
    LeahLovee LeahLovee 13-15, F Jun 14

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    The Secret Place

    I want to got to the Secret Place Where the Dreamers roam And pride is shown No worries No pain No rules No reigns I want to go to the Secret Place Where love is deep And Passion is a race Where preciousness is kept All while we sleep No monsters roam No evil to creep I want to...
    BENDrowned BENDrowned 18-21, F 6 Responses Jun 17, 2013

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    No birds where we fly Only rain,

    together we die... Coming down so cold Coming down the clouds we hold... We flying higher than ever We fly forever Freedom we love baby we cry So much clouds we fly full of love for this rainy day LeahLovee & Baby, Mr.&Mrs.Shine Together, rainy days & sunshines we climb
    LeahLovee LeahLovee 13-15, F Jun 14

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    Let my wings fly above the hills new sight,

    new adventure and the thrill be it smooth or rough, let the journey be joy let me embrace every moment with a happy heart and rejoice with a smiling face life is a mystery which will never be solved stay on the road and keep the courage of quest don't hurry, don't turn...
    crazihilary crazihilary 26-30, M 1 Response Jun 10

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    True friends #1 You're my true friends I hope

    you know its true Know matter what happens I will always be here for you You can call me when you're in need I'll be right there to help you off your knees I'll be there even after the world ends You can never understand how much i love you true friends Knowing they are right...
    Time4kush Time4kush 26-30, M 9 Responses Nov 20, 2014

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    Spoken Death

    if some of you recognize who i am after reading this- keep your big mouth shut. i enjoy being "anonymous"... once again i hang myself with my words, every sentence another knot on the noose, every feeling an inch closer towards the edge of the chair. i throw all i...
    lostcancerian lostcancerian 31-35, F 2 Responses May 21, 2007

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    This is for the dreamers,

    my dear friends, In love with the ideas they alone can comprehend For your mind will never leave you And your thoughts are precious gems Your consciousness can't catch up with your racing, flying pen For the dreamers and the do-ers For the lonely, for the users Find solice...
    theartisttt theartisttt 18-21, F 3 Responses Jun 12

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    The Imprint

    A paw fits into another like a jigsaw fits together. Bonded with the force of love, It's unbreakable, invincible and unconditional. They join at the heart, In a world of insanity, Where the only thing that exsists is the love between them. A full moon glows and the stars twinkle...
    deleted deleted 26-30 3 Responses May 13, 2013

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    There is a place for us only we can enter A

    place where our bodies can be one forever This place is where we alone can be together One love, one body, one soul & one heart altogether This place is where we choose to go Because we are one, it's only for us to know It's where our souls drift in times of trouble It's...
    LeahLovee LeahLovee 13-15, F Jun 21

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    "Just Like You"

    We have our differences And that is true But in many ways We are the same “I’m just like you”   You have stories to share and I have mine You have experiences to share and so do I I have confession to make and maybe you have too We are in the...
    pritzy pritzy 18-21, F 3 Responses Jun 5, 2007

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    True art is twisted It is perfection without

    any meaning nor an end, It holds you to your own personal standard and sets the bar in no particular place, leaps and bounds can be made to beat out your opponent but there will always be a successor. art has no real beginning and an undefined ending, it can never be...
    tsumakov tsumakov 26-30, F Jun 19

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    Daniel's Child

    Daniel came a-running We were meeting in the sun Daniel was a dead man When the night had just begun   Red sweater and red shoes On a tree branch, then a call Bloodred sweater, bloodred shoes And blood in the waterfall   The seas changed their direction...
    GothGrrrl GothGrrrl 18-21, F 5 Responses Apr 13, 2007

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    Porcelain Moon Smooth my scabbed back,

    And peel my pale shoulder blades. My tongue is a field filled with lies, Waiting to split me open and rot my beating heart, Shelter me in the velvet of your palms,cooling my wretched scars. Every time we ****** nothing would heal and nothing would grow, lost in forest of dead...
    TwistedArtist TwistedArtist 22-25, M Jun 1

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    You can keep your flowers Your rings made out

    of gold Your pretty diamond necklaces And, your silk and satin robes. Please don't tell me your " I'm sorry's" They don't mean much to me!! They are just empty words said after what you really spoke to me.
    Beautifulnlost22 Beautifulnlost22 31-35, F 2 Responses Apr 26, 2014

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    Why cant i wear a dress?

    its just a way to relieve stress inside im just like a girl as sweet as an ice cream swirl although i am a boy dresses bring me such joy does it really make you gay? or is it what idiots say? If a boy wears heels will it hurt your feels? If i wear pink what will you think? will...
    Stressed14 Stressed14 16-17, M 1 Response May 17

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    Born in form divided pure,

    Man shapes as one undone. From his truth we so lure, To sanity’s lies, her son. What agony must endure, He that purpose does shun. In vanity thus conjure, A pretension to be won.
    Redivivus Redivivus 26-30, M 2 days ago

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    Sometimes.....we used to believe Sometimes.

    ...we used to see.... Would you hold on....to the fading memories..... Do you remember when......tomorrow was the end... This hunger.....striving for peace.... All around me....are ashes floating through me.... Cries echoes ohh my love... Cries fading ohh my love... Do you see...
    deleted deleted 26-30 1 Response Jun 14

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    Mr. Right

    Once upon a starry night I met a love I thought was right I settled down to live a life & thought one day I'd be your wife  Times were hard, but we pulled through Laughs and smiles were but a few Life was sorted and then times were good Nothing could break the...
    Elvira1969 Elvira1969 36-40, F 7 Responses Apr 6, 2007

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    Just hug me I just want to feel

    and know i'm matter Just hug me I don't want you to touch me Just hug me I don't want to know you might be the same Just hold me and...make me feel i'm important
    deleted deleted 26-30 3 Responses Mar 30

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    Romance In a Hopeless World

    And with the world outside So black and lifeless. We do nothing but watch As life passes us by. Content in each others arms, We lie. Not a word is whispered, As your lips meet mine.
    denialsworld denialsworld 18-21, F 3 Responses May 17, 2007

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    For My Girlfriend

    Sometimes I focus on everything bad, Everything that's got me thinking of throwing the towel in, Makes me want to jump off a platform of any kind. Sometimes we meet somebody that takes away the will to jump, And I guess I'm just that lucky, 'Cause I met you. So now I'm...
    mjme26 mjme26 18-21, F 1 Response Nov 9, 2012

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    Pin me down Come on let's play Not just

    any playing around We had a rough day Willing to play all night Tomorrow morning we'll call it a day Lead or I just might Willing to play at your pace Take me where you choose to go We had a rough day But I refuse to take it slow Pin me down Come on let's play...
    LeahLovee LeahLovee 13-15, F Jun 21

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    Soft porcelain skin I run my slender fingers

    against your soft lips I dream of kissing them You are my muse My beautiful muse I would paint a thousand night skies Hoping they would reflect you But they can't Oh no, they can't What could ever grasp the intangible beauty that is you Caress my face Wipe my tears Cheers...
    deleted deleted 26-30 Jun 15

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    please tell me what you think-- I am the night,

    I am the Day, You hear my call from far away, When I speak it reaches and touches your soul, When I gaze into your eyes, My wolf eyes can see through you, Your secrets, deep, dark, so full of life, Yet they can calm any painful pain of mine or yours, The spirit o? the...
    Dragonslayer16 Dragonslayer16 16-17, M 1 day ago

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    Blur In Her Fathers Eyes

    Memories dim in, Flashes of another steps forward, No image of daughter, A image of horror, Her mother. Anger so vile, Fill with the poison, Dark hate like the demon fills those one happy eyes, Now each mark of blue, Now each mark of black. No daughter is there, No smiles...
    thisaccountisgone thisaccountisgone 18-21, F 6 Responses Jan 23, 2013

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    I know how the world works,

    I’ve known it for years, Without all the heartbreak, Or shedding of tears, The world is cruel, And it never let’s you up, After you’ve been knocked down, And you’re ready to give in, It’ll leave you to drown, The world is like a child, It uses and discards, You are a...
    ForeverOnMyGuard ForeverOnMyGuard 16-17, F 2 Responses Apr 25

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    Time4kush Time4kush 26-30, M 2 Responses Nov 20, 2014

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    I have been dealing with depression

    and social anxiety. . . so I decided to write about it. . . 14 Day writing Challenge Day 7 Poem Not Myself By Rebekah Wolveire © 2015 I used to be loud, Out-going and mentally strong I used to be active I wanted to do something I loved to sing I loved to write I loved to...
    RebekahWriter13 RebekahWriter13 31-35, F Jun 13

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    I love how you're moving at the right pace

    Your lips pressed against mines with infectious taste My pours shivering as your fingers pass above my waist The slower you go The more sensual the more I embrace Your lips so soft & so passionate My beating heart racing as anticipation increases For every touch there is a...
    LeahLovee LeahLovee 13-15, F Jun 21

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    I woke up this morning preparing

    for school Wishing everyone of them that I knew Would look at me thinking that She is cool But maybe school and cool don't go together Because when you're a nerd you're labelled outcast forever Maybe that's why they ignored when I needed to feel better Maybe it's my eyes...
    LeahLovee LeahLovee 13-15, F 2 Responses Jun 11

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    "WHAT a Life"

      A year ago I dare to go To a foreign land I barely know I need to leave the life I live Those people who love those persons who care   Once I’m alone can’t talk to anyone I can’t help myself to remember someone My thought will surely travel...
    pritzy pritzy 18-21, F 1 Response May 27, 2007

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    Actually, I copied it off an email.

    I met a girl in the park the other evening. There was an instant spark between us and she fell at my feet. As we laid there making love, I thought---- "These tasers are well worth the money."
    talltexan11 talltexan11 26-30, M May 27

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    Rejected

    You'll never know the affect of your disappearing act, What you did was wrong and that's a fact. You left me barren and confused, Feeling like I messed up instead of you. This seems to be typical with guys of your kind, To use a girl and **** with her mind.
    tmarker86 tmarker86 26-30, F 2 Responses Dec 24, 2012

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    Sometimes I wish I could admit things Even

    if it's all just a lie Sometimes I wish I could forget things But memories never die I let myself drown in insanity I can't find my personality A demon has taken over It's like I'm drunk but sober The world around me twists and turns My heart inside me bleeds and burns The...
    Psych0Bitch Psych0Bitch 13-15, F 1 Response Jan 23, 2014

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