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    Killer Next Door: Chapter 6

    As I try to catch my breath, I grab the phone and call 911. I put the phone next to my ear and hear it ring. I peek through the window and see Drake walking to my house, holding a club! Frightened, I run up the stairs and hide in my parents closet. "911 what is your emergency...
    Ice95 Ice95 18-21, F Apr 4, 2013

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    Me And A Vampire Explanatory Commentary-Parts 1-5

    Part 1: A hot girl met a vamp, he sucked her blood In part 1 Rosaleen and Tristan meet, and start going out. After a while Rosaleen finds out that her boyfriend is a vampire, he thought she would dump him, but she doesn’t because she likes the fact that he is a vampire. One day...
    ForeverOnABoat ForeverOnABoat 18-21, F 11 Responses Jun 7, 2011

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    Me And A Vampire-chapter One

    hello, im writing a book at the moment called Me and Vampire, below is the first chapter, i uploaded here to let here so that people could read it and give me feedback. Its the first time i've written anything like this, so dont be to harsh on comments.  Let me know what you...
    ForeverOnABoat ForeverOnABoat 18-21, F 4 Responses Jul 4, 2011

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    Me And A Vampire Explanatory Commentary-parts 6-10

    Part 6: Vampire grabs human, drains his blood, takes girl, kids backThe Tristan and Rosaleen are talking when Darren walks in with the boys. Tristan isn’t happy that Rosaleen has been seeing someone. The boys run up to their dad and tell him how much they missed him; Tristan...
    ForeverOnABoat ForeverOnABoat 18-21, F 6 Responses Jun 8, 2011

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    The Secret Of Eli: Chapter 3

    "Uh...." is all I could say at first, "Uh good. That's good." I smiles at her. She is beautiful! I thought. She has long brown hair with red streaks in it, emerald green eyes, and a face of a goddess! I snap out of my trance, pick up her back pack, and give it to her, "Here you...
    Ice95 Ice95 18-21, F Apr 14, 2013

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    Next Door Killer: Chapter 4

    Hesitantly I take the pictures out of the box and I feel the hairs on the back of my neck stand straight up. One of the pictures was of a woman's body sprawled out on a bed, her hands and feet tied up. She had multiple stab wounds in her stomach and face, blood gushing out. I...
    Ice95 Ice95 18-21, F Apr 4, 2013

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    The Secret Of Eli: Chapter 2

    "Happy Birthday Eli!" I hear someone say as soon as I shut my locker. I turn around and someone practically tackle hugs me, the smell of cinnamon filling my nostrils. I instantly know who it is. I hug her back, then pull away to look at her. "Thanks Rachelle." I say and smile at...
    Ice95 Ice95 18-21, F Apr 14, 2013

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    The Boat, The Island &Amp; The Iceberg

    There was a captain of a ship. He was sailing to an island for treasure & was nearly there when he saw an iceberg in his way. It spread from the boat to the island. Instantly, the captain climbs onto the iceberg, scaling to the top. He can see the island clearly now as he begins...
    baconrind baconrind 26-30, M 1 Response Jul 1, 2013

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    The Secret Of Eli: Chapter 4

    "Hey Eli!" Max said, coming off the bus. "Hey Max!" I say, still smiling, "you wanna race?" He smiles big, "Yeah!" We get into our racing stance, "Ready... One! Two! Three! Go!" I say quickly and start running. As I run, I get this weird tingling feeling in the pit of my stomach...
    Ice95 Ice95 18-21, F Apr 14, 2013

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    It's on my Quotev account.

    And I wrote a sequel as well.
    NyanCat73 NyanCat73 13-15, M 1 Response Jul 31

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    I Love You

    It was very dark. I crossed the road without looking...I was thinking about something else. I did not see the car which was speeding towards me.. The driver could not stop...maybe he was drunk. I felt a sharp pain and then suddenly everything was gone. Darkness went over me.. I...
    ilian4eto ilian4eto 13-15, F 4 Responses Dec 13, 2012

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    Ok the last marvel story I did had some grammar

    errors so I fix them Tron Chapter one In a world where a super hero creates a robot to help the Avengers and helps hack into villains’ software, taking down any robbers and thugs. One day, all of the avengers went down to the subway station to capture a pack of sinister...
    Custos1 Custos1 18-21, M May 1

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    Story Writing

    it  is a  great  fun  to write  something  creative  for that  creativeness  writer need  a  field  that  provides  space and story writing has  that  space    for every  one.
    shap36 shap36 41-45, M 1 Response Jan 7, 2011

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    Killer Next Door: Chapter 5

    He pastes a smile on his face and walks up to me. "Here you go." he hands me a glass of orange juice. I look down at it and see white fizzy stuff in it, like when you put medicine in liquid. I look up at him and hand it back. "Oh you know what? I just remembered I have chores to...
    Ice95 Ice95 18-21, F Apr 4, 2013

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    The Message In A Bottle

    They were a message in a bottle. At some instance in the past, someone had rolled a paper, put it in a bottle, corked it and set it afloat in the vast, blue ocean. And now they were together. Drifting wherever the ocean took them. Time kept passing and the only...
    FreeFallWall FreeFallWall 22-25, M 18 Responses Apr 15, 2010

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    Her Story

    There was once a beautiful girl who was deeply in love with her romeo. She was always there for him, he was always there for her, and their love seemed wonderful, something out of this world. One day, romeo decides to fly away to gain experience at another country. He spoke to...
    BellaFairy BellaFairy 22-25, F 1 Response Nov 5, 2011

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    Young Warriors-chapter 1

    "Hey Crystal! Hurry up! I'm going to be late for target practice. Ugh! I'm tired of this, and tired of you ruining my life." That's Sierra Grace. She's fairy royalty, and also a goddess but she's not really fair or royal or anything. She's a sarcastic girl with jet black hair...
    AHappyDespair AHappyDespair 13-15, F May 2, 2013

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    I saw a guy die in front of me.

    ..i was walking home and there was a group of guys talking **** about each other...all of a sudden a guy pulls out a gun and starts shooting and everybody else started shooting at the opposite guys...then some guy gets shot in the stomach and everybody starts running away...after...
    waithe336 waithe336 13-15, M 1 Response Apr 1

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    not the usual princess (sorry

    for all the geek references) Just one too many drinks, not only ruined the drunkards life, but mine too. We were just having an innocent dinner while I was visiting home from boarding school. Then it happened, in a matter of minutes, everything changed. As we drove along, he...
    chocolatelover987 chocolatelover987 13-15, F Apr 29

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    Sunset

    In the middle of a vast desert, a ruby lay glistening. She was crying. She had fallen from a princess's velvet jewelery pouch when the caravan was raided. Miraculously, no one had noticed her lying on the ground and now she was all alone in the burning desert. She could never...
    FreeFallWall FreeFallWall 22-25, M 17 Responses Aug 26, 2009

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    Young Warriors (Chapter2)

    "Time to fly." Sam grinned. "Can I come? Oh pleaaaaassssseeeeee, can I come?" pestered Darren. "Nope. Definitely, not. You will get yourself killed, and I wouldn't be able to live with that." replied Sam, now slightly frowning. Before Darren could say another word, Sam controlled...
    AHappyDespair AHappyDespair 13-15, F 1 Response Jun 6, 2013

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    An Untitled Story Of My Imagination: Part One

    This is my first, book sized story that I will be releasing in parts. Please tell me what you think of the story and if you find grammatical errors, tell me. I hope you enjoy. ~~~ Long ago, before...
    dinodude411 dinodude411 16-17, M Jun 6, 2013

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    Young Warriors (Coming To An Experience Near You!)

    Me and my friends, were once doing a role play and I thought the story was really good so now you get to read all about it :) Enjoy! Going to do Chapter 1 in a sec.
    AHappyDespair AHappyDespair 13-15, F May 2, 2013

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    Next Door Killer: Chapter 2

    As we got outside we saw our new neighbor carrying a box. This time I got a good look at him. He had short blond buzzed hair and blue eyes. He looked like he was in his thirties. We walked up to him and my parents pasted warm welcoming smiles on their faces. "Hello" my mom said...
    Ice95 Ice95 18-21, F Apr 4, 2013

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    The Secret Of Eli (Coming Soon)

    Eli Night has a secret. A secret that he doesn't even know about. His family refuses to tell him and keeps piling lie after lie. Once he turns 17 he has had enough of the lies and demands the truth... Once he discovers the truth, he life will be changed forever. -Coming Soon-
    Ice95 Ice95 18-21, F Apr 5, 2013

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    Chapter 1:our Journey Begins! (fairy Tail/gray And Erza Fanfiction.)

    As the sun began to rise, just a bit of the sun's light peeking over the horizon. Erza sat by the Mangoolan rive side, looking out on the river, trying to clear her minds of past thoughts, though she was failing. Her lips parted, as she let a soft sign escape through her tender...
    LexieLavi LexieLavi 13-15, F Oct 23, 2012

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    Next Door Killer: Chapter 7 (The Finale! :D)

    I watch the cop put Drake in the cop car. Then another cop comes up to me and asks me questions. I told him everything that happened and handed him the video camera. Once he seemed satisfied, he headed to the car and drove off with his partner and Drake. Once they left I saw my...
    Ice95 Ice95 18-21, F Apr 4, 2013

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    Ever hear the story of the Immortal

    and his Room? Of course not. I just made it up. Lets say that for as long as I can remember this guy has been locked up in a room with nothing but inanimate objects. There was nothing to do but sit in only the chair and look at the varying items laid out around him. Anything...
    NHighway NHighway 18-21, M 1 Response Jun 28

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    The Old Lonely Man

    By John Feltes So dark in the house, Riddled with objects of Antiquity. A life time of collecting memories but no one left to share with. The stacks of old newspapers lining the room like giant monoliths. In the dark one can only imagine all the years of collecting. Not one...
    jfeltes jfeltes 26-30, M Mar 27, 2010

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    Create by Anthony A. And creators of marvel.

    It's a fan fiction story Tron Chapter one In a world where a super hero creates a robot to help the Avengers and he helps hack in to villains’ software, taking down any robbers and thugs; One day when all of the avengers went down to the subway station to capture a pack...
    Custos1 Custos1 18-21, M Apr 29

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    Next Door Killer: Chapter 1

    I looked out my window at the house next to mine. It was a beautiful house. It was two stories, like mine, the front door was white and made out of wood, and the roof came to a point. The house was a dark brown and had white wooden framed windows on both sides of the door. By the...
    Ice95 Ice95 18-21, F 1 Response Apr 4, 2013

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    Am I A Bad Mother?

    Hi my name is Roula.I need some advice from all the mothers up there.I have 3 girls.The youngest one has a 4 year old daughter with her Bff leave together with my oldest one also.For more than 4 years my husband pays for their car insurances don't have a car do to an accident...
    sotiria sotiria 51-55 Nov 5, 2011

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    Writing his life story in exile, he had new insights.
    flipper1966 flipper1966 56-60, M 1 hr ago

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    "Your Eyes Betray Me" Your eyes betray me They speak what you try to keep silent, While you falsely comfort my worries With that cookie-cut-out smiling, Your eyes avoid my stare...
    5thApprentice 5thApprentice 18-21, M Sep 4

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    The Story of BeingScreaming souls trapped and calling out. This is the Lower Level Dimension. There are many levels of dimension, with Beings protecting the cross roads from one to...
    gemmaspurgeon gemmaspurgeon 26-30, F Sep 12

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    So I was at a bonfire in the middle of the woods. There were a lot of people there. I met this guy whose name will remain anonymous. I spent the whole night with him, talking and...
    taylor7922 taylor7922 18-21, F 1 Response Aug 27

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    I think it is time I wrote confessing my failure.
    JohnnySpot JohnnySpot 46-50, M 1 Response Aug 29

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    dear ep friends, well my girlfriend is off at appalachian state university. it was me driving, her mom Sarah, her dad Mitch, we pulled up and i carried her bags up to her dorm...
    1994trip 1994trip 18-21, M Sep 8

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    Some days ago I read "We should have a secret relationship" besides our marriage. I wish I could slap that writer for not writing something useful that many youth read and follow...
    dotan dotan 22-25, F Sep 11

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    I sent the letter I never wrote. It was returned.
    manofsolitude manofsolitude 46-50, M Sep 11

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    You have.. a warm heart, a gentle soul and a smile that lightens up the world. You are.. a kind person, a good listener and just your presence made the world a better place to be...
    onebeatleft onebeatleft 18-21 Aug 25

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    This is a Poem that i wrote, I never write or do anything like that. I've been feeling depressed so i wrote down what i was thinking. This is a Personal Poem about how I feel...
    Nick54 Nick54 18-21, M 1 Response Sep 3

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    Ok, so I just wanted to say this is the first song I ever wrote, I don't know anything about writing a song. "The Truth Unfolded" Verse 1- Why does my heart beat day by day...
    WhySufferxx WhySufferxx 13-15, M 1 Response Aug 20

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    But not this piece of code, luckily! This piece of code wrote itself -- well sorta, with the aid of a toy genetic algorithm optimizer. I just find it funny the result in this case...
    Faust76 Faust76 36-40, M Sep 2

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    I wrote a poem but I think it's far to extreme and morbid for EP.
    WintersSoldier2 WintersSoldier2 18-21, F 2 Responses a week ago

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    Today I wrote a note to stranger in hopes to just brighten their day. I feel like it doesn't happen enough and that makes me worry that she may misinterpret it as me being a creep...
    Dakavu Dakavu 18-21, M 3 days ago

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    So I decided to right about a major story of my life. One of those where when your friends are talking about relationships and you say “story of my life” and everyone laughs...
    TreyMax TreyMax 16-17, M Sep 4

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    I'd share my story with you guys. In the collage I've attached is a photo of me on blackwhitepassion.com(an interracial dating site) and Tiffany (my fiancée now) skyping...
    keent keent 31-35, F Sep 10

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    I do. If you really want to tell your story then I would like to hear it, but that is not why I'm writing this. And I'm not even writing this to tell my story. I have one but it's...
    KenzieluvsRupert KenzieluvsRupert 16-17, F 2 Responses 3 days ago

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    I was rejected. This is hard for me to accept, let alone write a story about. But I guess awareness and acceptance are both ingredients to overcome this, to which I have vowed to...
    adjustedfocus adjustedfocus 31-35 1 Response Aug 27

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    We all have a story some tragic some even fairy tale and some just heart wrenching. My story at this point of my life is not the best many tears have been shed. I've suffered many...
    whisperingcampaign whisperingcampaign 26-30, F 1 Response Aug 21