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    The Secret Of Eli: Chapter 2

    "Happy Birthday Eli!" I hear someone say as soon as I shut my locker. I turn around and someone practically tackle hugs me, the smell of cinnamon filling my nostrils. I instantly know who it is. I hug her back, then pull away to look at her. "Thanks Rachelle." I say and smile at...
    Ice95 Ice95 18-21, F Apr 14, 2013

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    The Secret Of Eli: Chapter 4

    "Hey Eli!" Max said, coming off the bus. "Hey Max!" I say, still smiling, "you wanna race?" He smiles big, "Yeah!" We get into our racing stance, "Ready... One! Two! Three! Go!" I say quickly and start running. As I run, I get this weird tingling feeling in the pit of my stomach...
    Ice95 Ice95 18-21, F Apr 14, 2013

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    Me And A Vampire Explanatory Commentary-Parts 1-5

    Part 1: A hot girl met a vamp, he sucked her blood In part 1 Rosaleen and Tristan meet, and start going out. After a while Rosaleen finds out that her boyfriend is a vampire, he thought she would dump him, but she doesn’t because she likes the fact that he is a vampire. One day...
    ForeverOnABoat ForeverOnABoat 18-21, F 11 Responses Jun 7, 2011

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    The Secret Of Eli: Chapter 3

    "Uh...." is all I could say at first, "Uh good. That's good." I smiles at her. She is beautiful! I thought. She has long brown hair with red streaks in it, emerald green eyes, and a face of a goddess! I snap out of my trance, pick up her back pack, and give it to her, "Here you...
    Ice95 Ice95 18-21, F Apr 14, 2013

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    The Old Lonely Man

    By John Feltes So dark in the house, Riddled with objects of Antiquity. A life time of collecting memories but no one left to share with. The stacks of old newspapers lining the room like giant monoliths. In the dark one can only imagine all the years of collecting. Not one...
    jfeltes jfeltes 26-30, M Mar 27, 2010

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    Killer Next Door: Chapter 6

    As I try to catch my breath, I grab the phone and call 911. I put the phone next to my ear and hear it ring. I peek through the window and see Drake walking to my house, holding a club! Frightened, I run up the stairs and hide in my parents closet. "911 what is your emergency...
    Ice95 Ice95 18-21, F Apr 4, 2013

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    Hopeful Faith chapter 2 (Check my profile to

    start reading from the epilogue) Michael took a long deep breath before pushing the glass door into Luna's room. She has been in this room for the last 3 months. The wires around her body has lessen since when she first came. There were flowers, balloons and cards scattered...
    butterfliesndut butterfliesndut 18-21, F Mar 27

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    Next Door Killer: Chapter 7 (The Finale! :D)

    I watch the cop put Drake in the cop car. Then another cop comes up to me and asks me questions. I told him everything that happened and handed him the video camera. Once he seemed satisfied, he headed to the car and drove off with his partner and Drake. Once they left I saw my...
    Ice95 Ice95 18-21, F Apr 4, 2013

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    Next Door Killer: Chapter 1

    I looked out my window at the house next to mine. It was a beautiful house. It was two stories, like mine, the front door was white and made out of wood, and the roof came to a point. The house was a dark brown and had white wooden framed windows on both sides of the door. By the...
    Ice95 Ice95 18-21, F 1 Response Apr 4, 2013

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    Young Warriors (Chapter2)

    "Time to fly." Sam grinned. "Can I come? Oh pleaaaaassssseeeeee, can I come?" pestered Darren. "Nope. Definitely, not. You will get yourself killed, and I wouldn't be able to live with that." replied Sam, now slightly frowning. Before Darren could say another word, Sam controlled...
    AHappyDespair AHappyDespair 13-15, F 1 Response Jun 6, 2013

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    I saw a guy die in front of me.

    ..i was walking home and there was a group of guys talking **** about each other...all of a sudden a guy pulls out a gun and starts shooting and everybody else started shooting at the opposite guys...then some guy gets shot in the stomach and everybody starts running away...after...
    waithe336 waithe336 13-15, M 1 Response Apr 1

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    this taekd 2 daes for me

    and my cusin helpd me owt with speleen and evureethin but i thot it :).. so this is my storee cald Jesus loevs me a loving story One day Jesus and a little boy was playing and running around, laughing and having a great time, as Jesus picked the little boy up they continued to...
    dragin2000 dragin2000 13-15, M 2 Responses Mar 25

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    It's a 5SOS fan fic on wattpad Please read ,

    comment and share it The title is wherever you are by oliviaaaferina
    oliviaferina oliviaferina 13-15, F 2 Responses Feb 9

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    The Secret Of Eli (Coming Soon)

    Eli Night has a secret. A secret that he doesn't even know about. His family refuses to tell him and keeps piling lie after lie. Once he turns 17 he has had enough of the lies and demands the truth... Once he discovers the truth, he life will be changed forever. -Coming Soon-
    Ice95 Ice95 18-21, F Apr 5, 2013

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    Young Warriors-chapter 1

    "Hey Crystal! Hurry up! I'm going to be late for target practice. Ugh! I'm tired of this, and tired of you ruining my life." That's Sierra Grace. She's fairy royalty, and also a goddess but she's not really fair or royal or anything. She's a sarcastic girl with jet black hair...
    AHappyDespair AHappyDespair 13-15, F May 2, 2013

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    The Message In A Bottle

    They were a message in a bottle. At some instance in the past, someone had rolled a paper, put it in a bottle, corked it and set it afloat in the vast, blue ocean. And now they were together. Drifting wherever the ocean took them. Time kept passing and the only...
    FreeFallWall FreeFallWall 22-25, M 19 Responses Apr 15, 2010

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    Next Door Killer: Chapter 4

    Hesitantly I take the pictures out of the box and I feel the hairs on the back of my neck stand straight up. One of the pictures was of a woman's body sprawled out on a bed, her hands and feet tied up. She had multiple stab wounds in her stomach and face, blood gushing out. I...
    Ice95 Ice95 18-21, F Apr 4, 2013

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    Am I A Bad Mother?

    Hi my name is Roula.I need some advice from all the mothers up there.I have 3 girls.The youngest one has a 4 year old daughter with her Bff leave together with my oldest one also.For more than 4 years my husband pays for their car insurances don't have a car do to an accident...
    sotiria sotiria 51-55 Nov 5, 2011

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    The Boat, The Island &Amp; The Iceberg

    There was a captain of a ship. He was sailing to an island for treasure & was nearly there when he saw an iceberg in his way. It spread from the boat to the island. Instantly, the captain climbs onto the iceberg, scaling to the top. He can see the island clearly now as he begins...
    baconrind baconrind 26-30, M Jul 1, 2013

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    Hopeful Faith Chapter 3 (check my profile to

    start reading from the epilogue) The past few weeks have been a crowded week. Luna's friends have come to visit her at the hospital, helping her with her motorical and logical training. More candies and chocolates scattered in her ward. Nurses came to her room almost every hour...
    butterfliesndut butterfliesndut 18-21, F Mar 27

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    I Love You

    It was very dark. I crossed the road without looking...I was thinking about something else. I did not see the car which was speeding towards me.. The driver could not stop...maybe he was drunk. I felt a sharp pain and then suddenly everything was gone. Darkness went over me.. I...
    ilian4eto ilian4eto 13-15, F 4 Responses Dec 13, 2012

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    Story Writing

    it  is a  great  fun  to write  something  creative  for that  creativeness  writer need  a  field  that  provides  space and story writing has  that  space    for every  one.
    shap36 shap36 41-45, M 1 Response Jan 7, 2011

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    Me And A Vampire Explanatory Commentary-parts 6-10

    Part 6: Vampire grabs human, drains his blood, takes girl, kids backThe Tristan and Rosaleen are talking when Darren walks in with the boys. Tristan isn’t happy that Rosaleen has been seeing someone. The boys run up to their dad and tell him how much they missed him; Tristan...
    ForeverOnABoat ForeverOnABoat 18-21, F 6 Responses Jun 8, 2011

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    Me And A Vampire-chapter One

    hello, im writing a book at the moment called Me and Vampire, below is the first chapter, i uploaded here to let here so that people could read it and give me feedback. Its the first time i've written anything like this, so dont be to harsh on comments.  Let me know what you...
    ForeverOnABoat ForeverOnABoat 18-21, F 4 Responses Jul 4, 2011

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    Next Door Killer: Chapter 2

    As we got outside we saw our new neighbor carrying a box. This time I got a good look at him. He had short blond buzzed hair and blue eyes. He looked like he was in his thirties. We walked up to him and my parents pasted warm welcoming smiles on their faces. "Hello" my mom said...
    Ice95 Ice95 18-21, F Apr 4, 2013

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    Hopeful Faith Chapter 1 (Check more

    for the epilogue) It has been 3 days since Luna woke up, yet michael's mind still hasn't been at ease. She hasn't talked much and the way her eyes looked at him were filled with hurt and indifferent. The doctor told him it maybe caused by the trauma which the accident had cause...
    butterfliesndut butterfliesndut 18-21, F Mar 27

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    Killer Next Door: Chapter 5

    He pastes a smile on his face and walks up to me. "Here you go." he hands me a glass of orange juice. I look down at it and see white fizzy stuff in it, like when you put medicine in liquid. I look up at him and hand it back. "Oh you know what? I just remembered I have chores to...
    Ice95 Ice95 18-21, F Apr 4, 2013

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    Sunset

    In the middle of a vast desert, a ruby lay glistening. She was crying. She had fallen from a princess's velvet jewelery pouch when the caravan was raided. Miraculously, no one had noticed her lying on the ground and now she was all alone in the burning desert. She could never...
    FreeFallWall FreeFallWall 22-25, M 17 Responses Aug 26, 2009

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    Hopeful Faith (Epilogue) "Luna?

    Please wake up. Please. I'm sorry. For everything." Luna could hear Michael's voice echoed in the captivating room where the smell of antiseptic were thick in the air, killing her sense of smell. She wanted to replied him, to wake up and hug him, but her body was inactive. She...
    butterfliesndut butterfliesndut 18-21, F 2 Responses Mar 14

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    Young Warriors (Coming To An Experience Near You!)

    Me and my friends, were once doing a role play and I thought the story was really good so now you get to read all about it :) Enjoy! Going to do Chapter 1 in a sec.
    AHappyDespair AHappyDespair 13-15, F May 2, 2013

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    An Untitled Story Of My Imagination: Part One

    This is my first, book sized story that I will be releasing in parts. Please tell me what you think of the story and if you find grammatical errors, tell me. I hope you enjoy. ~~~ Long ago, before...
    dinodude411 dinodude411 16-17, M Jun 6, 2013

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    Her Story

    There was once a beautiful girl who was deeply in love with her romeo. She was always there for him, he was always there for her, and their love seemed wonderful, something out of this world. One day, romeo decides to fly away to gain experience at another country. He spoke to...
    BellaFairy BellaFairy 22-25, F 1 Response Nov 5, 2011

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    Chapter 1:our Journey Begins! (fairy Tail/gray And Erza Fanfiction.)

    As the sun began to rise, just a bit of the sun's light peeking over the horizon. Erza sat by the Mangoolan rive side, looking out on the river, trying to clear her minds of past thoughts, though she was failing. Her lips parted, as she let a soft sign escape through her tender...
    LexieLavi LexieLavi 13-15, F Oct 23, 2012

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    Hey there everyone, my name is Thijn and I am a young writer/vlogger and i'm trying to help people less fortunate than me. So I was thinking what could I do? I decided i would...
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    I wrote about a short poem I found on a piece of paper among the pages of a French text book, both because I considered it nice and tender and because I felt there was a...
    SweetNancy SweetNancy 22-25, F 4 Responses Apr 4

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    It all started way back in Jr high 7th grade we're I met this little hyper Mexican girl lol, we shared the same bus and some class's together not knowing how much we we're gonna be...
    StevensTHEname StevensTHEname 26-30, M Apr 5

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    March 19th, 2014. Kevin, it is exactly a year since that day you first met and talked to me. That was when I started breaking down. We kinda met at the wrong time. It was hard to...
    llovelyfallenangell llovelyfallenangell 16-17, F 1 Response Mar 19

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    Today, I wrote a ten word story just for you.
    deleted deleted 26-30 1 Response Apr 7

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    Some of the stories I've come across on this site have really inspired me to share something about myself. Actually, other people's stories are why I'm writing this. I've added...
    moonchile moonchile 26-30, F Apr 10

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    Once upon a time I wrote a ten word sentence.
    ruanbe ruanbe 18-21 Mar 22

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    He was so fed up with his job that he wrote a letter of resignation.
    boxersoff4u boxersoff4u 51-55, M Mar 26

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    I knew I like the ladies at an early age. I hid it for 32 years. Through my catholic grade school years, public high school, and even through my college years. I wasn't questioned...
    TheCunylinguist TheCunylinguist 41-45, F 3 Responses Mar 26

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    I really didn't want to write ten words... so I wrote thirteen instead.
    Waywardsilence Waywardsilence 41-45, M Mar 31

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    Ever since this girl first walked into our school for the first time, I couldn't take my eyes off her, and I know I probably wasn't the only one gazing at her beauty. Through my...
    elugo123456789 elugo123456789 18-21, M 1 Response Apr 6

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    I wrote down some things that I like, and I eventually decided on "pink" and "chocolate". I was born in 2000.
    PinkChocolate00 PinkChocolate00 13-15, F 3 Responses Apr 8

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    What a busy week. Yesterday I had a doctor's appointment (the first I've had in a very long time). I told her my main concern was my anxiety and she asked what helps calm me down...
    CaptainHowdy21 CaptainHowdy21 18-21, F Mar 22

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    😍❤️Wrote this for MY LOVE❤️😍 Surrounded by shadows of darkness and doubt, My heart was collapsing as my lungs filled with clouds, My eyes swelling as my emotions...
    Islandkween Islandkween 18-21, F Mar 23

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    This is a poem I wrote after my mom died in February. I recited it at her service. And now every time I see the color yellow I see my mom and everything that could have been. In...
    TubaAtheist TubaAtheist 18-21, F 1 Response Mar 28

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    Oh man.So tired. I hung out with Mark a couple of days ago and it turns out he wanted to talk to me about some bucket list blog project he wanted to start. He just got back from...
    CaptainHowdy21 CaptainHowdy21 18-21, F Mar 28

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    Luner007- What is Competition , , for me competition doesn't exist / and any rapper to step up will get dissed then dismissed / im ashamed , iv been betrayed , burry me heart...
    LunarDream LunarDream 13-15, M Apr 4

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    when i was in school I wrote a love letter that was intended for my crush it was extremely deep and meaningful and my teacher intercepted it and read it to the class... shameful...
    nessa4ever nessa4ever 18-21, F Apr 8

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    Ever since this girl first walked into our school for the first time, I couldn't take my eyes off her, and I know I probably wasn't the only one gazing at her beauty. Through my...
    elugo123456789 elugo123456789 18-21, M Apr 8

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    I knew you'd never read it. That's why I could write it. I felt a strong need to talk to you, so I wrote it all down. Somehow, it ended up filling a notebook. So much of nothing to...
    TheBadgeringWitness TheBadgeringWitness 70+ Apr 10

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    This just something I found from when I was around 16; It's because you were never there. It's because when you hugged and praised my sister, all I could do was stare and wonder...
    LostEmeraldEyes LostEmeraldEyes 18-21, F 6 days ago

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