I Wrote a Story

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    An Untitled Story Of My Imagination: Part One

    This is my first, book sized story that I will be releasing in parts. Please tell me what you think of the story and if you find grammatical errors, tell me. I hope you enjoy. ~~~ Long ago, before...
    dinodude411 dinodude411
    16-17, M
    Jun 6, 2013

    Young Warriors-chapter 1

    "Hey Crystal! Hurry up! I'm going to be late for target practice. Ugh! I'm tired of this, and tired of you ruining my life." That's Sierra Grace. She's fairy royalty, and also a goddess but she's not really fair or royal or anything. She's a sarcastic girl with jet black hair...
    AHappyDespair AHappyDespair
    13-15, F
    May 2, 2013

    I saw a guy die in front of me.

    ..i was walking home and there was a group of guys talking **** about each other...all of a sudden a guy pulls out a gun and starts shooting and everybody else started shooting at the opposite guys...then some guy gets shot in the stomach and everybody starts running away...after...
    waithe336 waithe336
    16-17, M
    1 Response Apr 1, 2014

    This story is partly true well here you go.

    T's view I started cutting my wrist again. Im giving up my dream of doing art. Imma just not make it till the end of the year. I have no point in staying. Right now I'm trying to stay away from those pills on the side of my bed. At this point I'm giving up. If someone beats...
    100BlackRoses 100BlackRoses
    16-17, F
    Sep 22, 2015

    The Secret Of Eli: Chapter 4

    "Hey Eli!" Max said, coming off the bus. "Hey Max!" I say, still smiling, "you wanna race?" He smiles big, "Yeah!" We get into our racing stance, "Ready... One! Two! Three! Go!" I say quickly and start running. As I run, I get this weird tingling feeling in the pit of my stomach...
    Ice95 Ice95
    18-21, F
    Apr 14, 2013

    Create by Anthony A. And creators of marvel.

    It's a fan fiction story Tron Chapter one In a world where a super hero creates a robot to help the Avengers and he helps hack in to villains’ software, taking down any robbers and thugs; One day when all of the avengers went down to the subway station to capture a pack...
    Custos1 Custos1
    18-21, M
    Apr 29, 2014

    Sunset

    In the middle of a vast desert, a ruby lay glistening. She was crying. She had fallen from a princess's velvet jewelery pouch when the caravan was raided. Miraculously, no one had noticed her lying on the ground and now she was all alone in the burning desert. She could never...
    FreeFallWall FreeFallWall
    22-25, M
    13 Responses Aug 26, 2009

    Next Door Killer: Chapter 2

    As we got outside we saw our new neighbor carrying a box. This time I got a good look at him. He had short blond buzzed hair and blue eyes. He looked like he was in his thirties. We walked up to him and my parents pasted warm welcoming smiles on their faces. "Hello" my mom said...
    Ice95 Ice95
    18-21, F
    Apr 4, 2013

    I'm a freshman in high school

    and I wrote this a year and a half ago. Please comment your opinions underneath this post. Thanks, BlueGirl666 “Death, my child, is straightforward. It is not a gate to immortality but simply, a departure from life. It has no pattern in which those of from the Great Beyond...
    izzybear001 izzybear001
    16-17, F
    1 Response Mar 29, 2015

    Do you think it's appropriate to use a murder

    plot as a short story in creative writing class?
    NameIsMailbox NameIsMailbox
    16-17, M
    1 Response Oct 15, 2015

    The Boat, The Island &Amp; The Iceberg

    There was a captain of a ship. He was sailing to an island for treasure & was nearly there when he saw an iceberg in his way. It spread from the boat to the island. Instantly, the captain climbs onto the iceberg, scaling to the top. He can see the island clearly now as he begins...
    baconrind baconrind
    26-30, M
    1 Response Jul 1, 2013

    These two people are texting each other.

    Short Story #2 James and Sarah Sarah: hey james. Whats up James: oh hey sarah. just laying in bed stairing at my ceiling. hbu? Sarah: yea same. I think that there might be a raccoon or something outside. i keep hearing some noises haha James: oh its probs nothing. if its...
    burnzzz burnzzz
    22-25
    Jan 23, 2015

    Me And A Vampire-chapter One

    hello, im writing a book at the moment called Me and Vampire, below is the first chapter, i uploaded here to let here so that people could read it and give me feedback. Its the first time i've written anything like this, so dont be to harsh on comments.  Let me know what you...
    ForeverOnABoat ForeverOnABoat
    18-21, F
    4 Responses Jul 4, 2011

    The Old Lonely Man

    By John Feltes So dark in the house, Riddled with objects of Antiquity. A life time of collecting memories but no one left to share with. The stacks of old newspapers lining the room like giant monoliths. In the dark one can only imagine all the years of collecting. Not one...
    jfeltes jfeltes
    26-30, M
    Mar 27, 2010

    He fell onto to his bed.

    He could not feel anything, total emptiness. He cried silently even though no one was in the house to hear him. He was done but he did not want to be. He wanted more then anything for this feeling to be temporary. Some how he just knew that it was not. He just sat there wishing...
    zombiflowers zombiflowers
    18-21, F
    Nov 11, 2014

    Give it a read if you're interested!

    http://www.wattpad.com/97509060-isolation-intro?utm_source=web&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&ref_id=47131731
    bubbscoug bubbscoug
    18-21, M
    Jan 21, 2015

    Am I A Bad Mother?

    Hi my name is Roula.I need some advice from all the mothers up there.I have 3 girls.The youngest one has a 4 year old daughter with her Bff leave together with my oldest one also.For more than 4 years my husband pays for their car insurances don't have a car do to an accident...
    sotiria sotiria
    51-55
    Nov 5, 2011

    The Secret Of Eli: Chapter 3

    "Uh...." is all I could say at first, "Uh good. That's good." I smiles at her. She is beautiful! I thought. She has long brown hair with red streaks in it, emerald green eyes, and a face of a goddess! I snap out of my trance, pick up her back pack, and give it to her, "Here you...
    Ice95 Ice95
    18-21, F
    Apr 14, 2013

    Correction - I wrote SEVERAL stories!

    Better yet, I'm WRITING stories! B O O M ! You're welcome!
    LoveOverHatred LoveOverHatred
    22-25, F
    Jan 27, 2015

    not the usual princess (sorry

    for all the geek references) Just one too many drinks, not only ruined the drunkards life, but mine too. We were just having an innocent dinner while I was visiting home from boarding school. Then it happened, in a matter of minutes, everything changed. As we drove along, he...
    chocolatelover987 chocolatelover987
    16-17, F
    Apr 29, 2014

    Young Warriors (Coming To An Experience Near You!)

    Me and my friends, were once doing a role play and I thought the story was really good so now you get to read all about it :) Enjoy! Going to do Chapter 1 in a sec.
    AHappyDespair AHappyDespair
    13-15, F
    May 2, 2013

    I wrote a whole trilogy.

    .. Well I'm on my third right now, ehh but mines probably sucks co pared to yalls I'd love to read any
    avo3 avo3
    18-21, M
    Jan 15, 2015

    The Secret Of Eli: Chapter 2

    "Happy Birthday Eli!" I hear someone say as soon as I shut my locker. I turn around and someone practically tackle hugs me, the smell of cinnamon filling my nostrils. I instantly know who it is. I hug her back, then pull away to look at her. "Thanks Rachelle." I say and smile at...
    Ice95 Ice95
    18-21, F
    Apr 14, 2013

    Me And A Vampire Explanatory Commentary-Parts 1-5

    Part 1: A hot girl met a vamp, he sucked her blood In part 1 Rosaleen and Tristan meet, and start going out. After a while Rosaleen finds out that her boyfriend is a vampire, he thought she would dump him, but she doesn’t because she likes the fact that he is a vampire. One day...
    ForeverOnABoat ForeverOnABoat
    18-21, F
    11 Responses Jun 7, 2011

    I wrote 3 stories. Well my first one is a

    fantasy story. It's about a fairy that balances her life as the protector of the world as well as being a high school student. And then there came a circumstance when she'll have to find the identity of her father. My second one is about a dying girl wishing to see her lover one...
    deleted deleted
    26-30
    Mar 5

    Chapter 1:our Journey Begins! (fairy Tail/gray And Erza Fanfiction.)

    As the sun began to rise, just a bit of the sun's light peeking over the horizon. Erza sat by the Mangoolan rive side, looking out on the river, trying to clear her minds of past thoughts, though she was failing. Her lips parted, as she let a soft sign escape through her tender...
    LexieLavi LexieLavi
    13-15, F
    Oct 23, 2012

    I love writing stories.

    Although I hate being detailed. I more enjoy explaining a sequence of events than describing an environment or character. Too bad that's kind of essential to a story though. It kind of makes my stories look nonprofessional which is really too bad because I can rattle off story...
    NameIsMailbox NameIsMailbox
    16-17, M
    Mar 13

    Right now, I am writing an inspirational story

    about my life. I will share it more in a few days.
    pearls37 pearls37
    22-25, F
    1 Response Jan 26

    Next Door Killer: Chapter 1

    I looked out my window at the house next to mine. It was a beautiful house. It was two stories, like mine, the front door was white and made out of wood, and the roof came to a point. The house was a dark brown and had white wooden framed windows on both sides of the door. By the...
    Ice95 Ice95
    18-21, F
    1 Response Apr 4, 2013

    Ok the last marvel story I did had some grammar

    errors so I fix them Tron Chapter one In a world where a super hero creates a robot to help the Avengers and helps hack into villains’ software, taking down any robbers and thugs. One day, all of the avengers went down to the subway station to capture a pack of sinister...
    Custos1 Custos1
    18-21, M
    May 1, 2014

    The Message In A Bottle

    They were a message in a bottle. At some instance in the past, someone had rolled a paper, put it in a bottle, corked it and set it afloat in the vast, blue ocean. And now they were together. Drifting wherever the ocean took them. Time kept passing and the only...
    FreeFallWall FreeFallWall
    22-25, M
    15 Responses Apr 15, 2010

    (None of this is true I made it up.

    I hope you enjoy it.) In the beginning, my little brother and I were safe. We had food, shelter, fresh water, supplies, and a family. Then he did the stupid Klondike challenge. You know the jingle, " What would you do for a Klondike bar?" Well they made a challenge for it...
    Rosieann98 Rosieann98
    22-25, F
    Dec 29, 2015

    Hug me. Just hug me.

    No need words. Please don't say anything PROMISE Untill we hold each other tightly and sleep in your arms...and Wake up morning we open our eyes and we both look into our eyes like this is the best feeling ever..... And finally say....'Hi...
    deleted deleted
    26-30
    Apr 13, 2015

    Protagonist last thoughts: Mother,

    father... I am sorry I have failed you both, I made a promise to protect our people! I thought... I thought if I could stop the Templars if I could keep the revolution free from their influence that those I supported would do what was right. They did, I suppose... do what was...
    GinoTyler91 GinoTyler91
    16-17, M
    Jul 2, 2015

    I wrote my first short story "Baleful

    Temptations" on wattpad. It is genre is adventure/thriller. I would like if you check it out!! ~Mirnaxx
    mirnahazem mirnahazem
    13-15, F
    Oct 23, 2015

    Killer Next Door: Chapter 5

    He pastes a smile on his face and walks up to me. "Here you go." he hands me a glass of orange juice. I look down at it and see white fizzy stuff in it, like when you put medicine in liquid. I look up at him and hand it back. "Oh you know what? I just remembered I have chores to...
    Ice95 Ice95
    18-21, F
    Apr 4, 2013

    Young Warriors (Chapter2)

    "Time to fly." Sam grinned. "Can I come? Oh pleaaaaassssseeeeee, can I come?" pestered Darren. "Nope. Definitely, not. You will get yourself killed, and I wouldn't be able to live with that." replied Sam, now slightly frowning. Before Darren could say another word, Sam controlled...
    AHappyDespair AHappyDespair
    13-15, F
    1 Response Jun 6, 2013

    I Love You

    It was very dark. I crossed the road without looking...I was thinking about something else. I did not see the car which was speeding towards me.. The driver could not stop...maybe he was drunk. I felt a sharp pain and then suddenly everything was gone. Darkness went over me.. I...
    ilian4eto ilian4eto
    16-17, F
    3 Responses Dec 13, 2012

    Killer Next Door: Chapter 6

    As I try to catch my breath, I grab the phone and call 911. I put the phone next to my ear and hear it ring. I peek through the window and see Drake walking to my house, holding a club! Frightened, I run up the stairs and hide in my parents closet. "911 what is your emergency...
    Ice95 Ice95
    18-21, F
    Apr 4, 2013

    Okay so tell me if you think anything strange

    about this story. .. I was always a good scientist but recently I had been having problems with it. It appears I was getting significantly more stupid by the second! I decided the best thing to do was to come in before school to see my beloved chemistry teacher. I asked a few...
    NameIsMailbox NameIsMailbox
    16-17, M
    1 Response Jan 26

    Her Story

    There was once a beautiful girl who was deeply in love with her romeo. She was always there for him, he was always there for her, and their love seemed wonderful, something out of this world. One day, romeo decides to fly away to gain experience at another country. He spoke to...
    BellaFairy BellaFairy
    26-30, F
    1 Response Nov 5, 2011

    Next Door Killer: Chapter 7 (The Finale! :D)

    I watch the cop put Drake in the cop car. Then another cop comes up to me and asks me questions. I told him everything that happened and handed him the video camera. Once he seemed satisfied, he headed to the car and drove off with his partner and Drake. Once they left I saw my...
    Ice95 Ice95
    18-21, F
    Apr 4, 2013

    It's on my Quotev account.

    And I wrote a sequel as well.
    NyanCat73 NyanCat73
    13-15, M
    2 Responses Jul 31, 2014

    Ever hear the story of the Immortal

    and his Room? Of course not. I just made it up. Lets say that for as long as I can remember this guy has been locked up in a room with nothing but inanimate objects. There was nothing to do but sit in only the chair and look at the varying items laid out around him. Anything...
    NHighway NHighway
    18-21, M
    2 Responses Jun 28, 2014

    Next Door Killer: Chapter 4

    Hesitantly I take the pictures out of the box and I feel the hairs on the back of my neck stand straight up. One of the pictures was of a woman's body sprawled out on a bed, her hands and feet tied up. She had multiple stab wounds in her stomach and face, blood gushing out. I...
    Ice95 Ice95
    18-21, F
    Apr 4, 2013
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