I Wrote This Poem

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    I wrote this poem and want to see what you

    guys think though it might not be that great Why Daddy Daddy why do you hurt mommy? She's beautiful, charming, and sweet She would never hurt anyone nor you nor me Daddy why do you hit mommy? Hearing her screaming yelling for help You pushing, punching, and kicking...
    Mysteriouswolfgirl Mysteriouswolfgirl
    18-21, F
    Apr 6, 2015

    her mind conjures and conjures

    until its last breath It feeds off of visuals playing in her head One minute, two hours, three days, four Who is the fallen angel knocking on her door? Like Tom, oblivious, greedy and scared she takes the pen and resigns her despair Life has done her, good and bad it's such a...
    izzyyxo izzyyxo
    18-21, F
    1 Response Nov 21, 2014

    I worked on it for about 10-15 minutes.

    . What do you think? A cut on my thigh deep breath in all the anger and frustration deep breath out all the pain people cause you I watch the puddle of blood on my thigh get bigger and bigger Why is it cold? As I Touch the puddle and write what I am .. F-A-T
    poetry123 poetry123
    13-15, F
    Aug 4, 2015

    Love Undiscovered I know I might not know you

    yet but I want you to know I love you You are my world you are my everything you are really special to me you mean a lot to me You make me happy like you make me feel all fuzzy inside We fit together like a puzzle I feel safe when I'm with you I only feel like that when I'm...
    Gabbytheartist Gabbytheartist
    18-21, F
    1 Response Apr 10, 2014

    I Wrote This Poem Its Short But Whatever

    All this Pain inside my head, Lying here left for dead. No one cares cos no ones there, As the smell of blood pollutes the air.
    placebomcr placebomcr
    13-15, F
    Oct 25, 2009

    Ode.

    When you hold me in your embrace, my mind is blown, my words are caught, in my throat, dried from your spirit, your beautiful spirit, that I can see right in you.When you speak to me in your words, I feel like heaven is just a blink away, that I can easily get there, just by...
    WiltingBlossom WiltingBlossom
    18-21, F
    8 Responses Dec 30, 2010

    I am alone. Amongst my friends I am

    alone Within a crowd Still alone. Nobody's joined me in my heart I am alone.
    coreycake22 coreycake22
    18-21, F
    Jun 2, 2014

    ... to my wife: We hurtle toward The end of

    our life At what often seems Like the speed of light Your arms wrapped 'Round your head so tight To shelter your eyes From what may come Which frightens we two So tight it's too dark For you to see 'Til in the end we meet That I'm in love with you.
    johnstlouis johnstlouis
    61-65, M
    2 Responses Feb 17, 2015

    I wrote this for my cousin :) curious,

    bold, afraid of affection praying every Sunday to project her redemption defensive, accepted and a wallower of despair oh pretty lady, let down you hair moved to the side, you see the the gleam in her eyes as she whisks away the sorrow of the night her mind at work when in the...
    izzyyxo izzyyxo
    18-21, F
    1 Response Nov 30, 2014

    When the night falls My soul falls As the

    crickets call My heart calls As the stars stall My body stalls As if the wondrous world revolves around my emotions Reflecting the dark sky and deep dark seas As if your empty soul was drowning me Though, it could not be Your all i need Or all i adapted to breath I was better...
    deleted deleted
    26-30
    Feb 7, 2014

    Truth You have hurt me Wounded my pride You

    stood there without pity Watched me as I wept You did not care About the pain No comfort for a weary soul Stark and ugly Your voice demanded to be heard There were no pleasantries I couldn’t hide Still a light shined A door was left opened An exchange that could be made One...
    deleted deleted
    26-30
    Jan 11, 2016
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