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lullaby27 lullaby27 26-30, F 6 Answers Nov 23, 2012 in Poetry

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The rhyming scheme could use a lot more depth.

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Is it very long??

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love poetry and how emotions can be hidden in words yet expressed. urs is good.

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It was good but needs more salt.

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Explain me, what do you mean by more salt??

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