Can someone go read my play?

Asked By: ItsJustComplicated95 18-21, F 5 months ago

It's under my stories on my profile but im presenting it in class today and im terrified that its terrible. Please? Its nothing scary or dirty, just simply reading. And it's short.

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Posted by will4all2be1 Dec 6th, 2012 at 3:16PM

apart from your few spelling mistakes and where "she" should be "he" it is not too bad.
the only few words that i would change are ghetto sounding "suck" and "shittiest" and "****" they are not words such a lady in that situation would use ,in front of another man ,if it were another woman she was talking to the conversation might even become vicious.
critics are the burden and friend of the playwrite

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Reply by ItsJustComplicated95 Dec 6th, 2012 at 3:19PM

i understand that but what does her talking to a man have to do with anything? Why can't a man and woman friendship be the same as two women?
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Reply by will4all2be1 Dec 6th, 2012 at 3:26PM

they can ,you are sure right about that ,and i have that very experience all the time ,but the first approach towards each other might be a little rough ,but if you want to go with it ,go with it ,after all seeing is believing ,i had the idea that they were both meant to be soft towards each other and those words kind of create a bit of a coarse edge. but like i said ,it does happen and if that is your intention then it is right. good luck with it ,i could visualize it so you did good.
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Posted by living4now Dec 6th, 2012 at 2:47PM

Is it a horror?

I likes a good fright !!!!!!

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