Do you like my lyrics?

Asked By: Navystud19 18-21, M 2 years ago

ill always love you/
but dont be insulted if someone ends up above you/
i want this relationship but i just cant trust you/
you could end up a nun and id still be left wondering who ***** you/
Jesus Christ/
Sorry for the pun lets get back to the lines/
might get another girl but never a wife/
cause girl i had that parking spot reserved for you/
Already gave YOU my heart and i dont got two/
And dont take this as get out of my life/
All im saying is that our intentions were goor but our actions werent right/
Things turned out wrong/
we had our chance but now that chance is gone/
that ship has sailed/
i still think about you everyday that never fails/
but the titanic is sinking baby and its time to bail/
hopefully fate will bring us together again through the carnage but only time will tell/
and untill that time upon thoughts of you ill dwell/
so after all that ill end on this note/ turned love to war so will see whats left after the settlin of the smoke.

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Posted by SaintMaj Apr 1st, 2011 at 12:55AM

Wonderful !!!

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Posted by HAJARsaurus Mar 29th, 2011 at 1:59PM

Yeah, it's simple! Do you have a camera, webcam, or a phone that records?

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Reply by Navystud19 Mar 28th, 2011 at 6:55PM

Ive been trying !! i just dont know how lol..,. do you??
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Posted by blessingl Mar 28th, 2011 at 3:38PM

I think it is probably great set to the music in your head! ( the nun/Jesus part struck me as strange! ahha

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Reply by Navystud19 Mar 28th, 2011 at 6:54PM

lol ya it was just a lil pun hah i know ima goof but words are fun
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Posted by Ions Mar 28th, 2011 at 2:50PM

Like it, written from the heart

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Posted by OoLunaoO Mar 28th, 2011 at 2:09PM

????????

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Reply by Navystud19 Mar 28th, 2011 at 2:13PM

there up now lol sorry it takes a minute to write them
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Posted by SmilyFace1990 Mar 28th, 2011 at 2:07PM

I didn't read it yet but yeah ! i like it even before reading it since i like you ! =)

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Reply by Navystud19 Mar 28th, 2011 at 2:13PM

haaha well thats very nice of you.
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