Your grammar is fine, but I don't believe that God's purpose is to grant wishes. If He answered every prayer the way we wanted, we would be very weak indeed. His foresight and love for us is evident in those prayers that we may feel are unanswered. Luke 22:42, Matthew 27:46, Mosiah 4:9, Moses 1:39
What is your primary language? Just curious.
Looks fine to me by then I'm just an amateur :)
fine but as far as I'm concerned god don't exist
Yep, perfect grammar (except the two periods at the end). Good job.
Other than the acronym "u", it's fine.
What acronym "u"? What is everyone talking about?
Well, I'm not sure about the grammar, but the spelling needs some work. It's "you" not "u".