My poem/My truth... EP friends this is a poem about my thoughts about life... what do you think?
I don't want anyone to feel outcast.
I don't want anyone to feel bad if they finish last.
I don't want anyone to be blamed.
Just because they are someone who can't be tamed.
I don't want anyone to suffer pain or be punished.
Or end up in jail forever banished.
I don't want people to feel like their actions determine their worth.
Because then relationships feel fake since depending on our actions people switch on us back and forth.
Everyone wants to feel like others couldn't go on without them.
Like they are the only precious and valuable gem.
But disagreements and desires of opposing sides cause people to depart.
When once they couldn't stand being apart.
I don't want people to feel trapped in a mind, body, and world they did not choose.
To the point that they feel that if they stopped living they'd have nothing to lose.
I don't want anyone to suffer because their desires aren't met.
Or to feel like they owe someone a debt.
I don't want anyone to feel physical pain or e
3 Answers to "My poem/My truth... EP friends this is a poem about my thoughts about life... what do you think?"
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Real...Awesome
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Thank you so much Vont! :)
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Welcome...
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It's good..... sounds like a break up story.... a recent breakup for ya?
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Thank you.... no, not a recent break up, but just me talking about me wishing everyone felt loved and like they belonged somewhere without our selfish desires getting in the way :)
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Posted by JessicaBradx Mar 9th, 2013 at 3:07AM
Very nice poetry
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Reply by superficialife Mar 9th, 2013 at 3:07AM
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