What is one good sentence that would make you want to read a college accpetance essay about fishing and schoo?

First of all I would definitely put an "l" at the end of Schoo.... I would be impressed witha a sentence that said ... "I am an excellent Master baiter" !

"i went online and got other people to come up with this because going to your school doesn't motivate me enough to have done it myself."

ugh... again with this question? Go research it... google it.. go to the library... Or use LP77 and see where that gets ya :)

"When you go fishing, you have to use the right bait for the fish you are trying to catch, and be prepared with everything you need to catch the fish. When you go to college, you must be similarly prepared. Only by researching all you can on the subject, and knowing what sort of 'fish' you want to catch(what subject you want to excel in) can you truly catch the 'fish' you are going for. I have prepared thoroughly for your college and for the major I plan to take by ____. I am passionate about___ and I want to become the best___that I can be. I practice___regularly and I always have__on my mind, and I use the patience and perseverance I do in fishing in advancing toward my goal--not being hasty, not giving up, and knowing what I need to do to get there...." etc, stuff like that.
I was a fine art major and I got accepted easily to many art schools using a portfolio and recommendations from art teachers and the dean of a prominent art college, since I had always been involved in and talented in art. however, you may not have a portfolio. In my college letter, personally, I wrote what i planned to do with art.
You have a goal in mind, a purpose for going to college don't you? Write about that. That's what I did.

well, first of all I would say, use spell check, but that aside, fishing? In a college application essay? Really? Are you going to fishing school? Try something relevant to your major or something relevant to anything

Haven't you already asked this, because I'm sure I answererd it !