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my poetry can be found here or there http://poetrypoem.com/cgi-bin/index.pl?&sitename=virginpoet&item=home or http://allpoetry.com/VirginPoet or you can find it on my melo in folder titled my poetry or the profile page http://melodramatic.com/users/virginpoet

It looks interesting. Oh ya. Well you're very home and crafts as it looks on the front page as you mention your family and as you mention a heart in the welcome... in a context that is quite down homey.
I cannot read the poetry without wanting to critique it so I will go through something and say something it may not be true but it is how I see it.
Here I go:
I like the rhythm. I usually do not like rhythms but you have variety:like there is depth. I didn't read much. I got my impression.
It's painful to read sometimes when it's personal.
Thanks!