Will you read my erotic story Just Anothe Day in the Office? Constructive critism is welcome!! :-D
4 Answers to "Will you read my erotic story Just Anothe Day in the Office? Constructive critism is welcome!! :-D"
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yes i will read it an get back to u.don't listen to these doushes k.to each his own.they don't like it they should leave an keep their mouths shut.
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Lol they're welcome to their opinion just like the rest of us. I don't think they got very rude or insulting so I'm open to hearing what they had to say.
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constructive critism is what u asked 4,not whats in it 4 me,an no way in hell.he didn't like it he should just left then.thats all i'm saying
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No way in hell!!! I don't really want to know about you sex life!! Why do people post things like that on here anyway???
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Its not our personal sex lives. They're just stories. Its easy for people of the same interests to relate to each other through fantasies etc
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Whats in it for me?
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You get to judge someone else's sex life?
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Posted by mrj2c Jan 26th, 2013 at 1:51PM
OK so I read 'Just Another Day in the Office'. There's not much I can really critique here as you have an excellent writing style IMHO. The only thing that I could see in the story itself was any reference to time of day or the 'thrill' of getting caught.......Other than that - great story! Keep up the great work!
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Reply by SubPrincess4Life Jan 28th, 2013 at 12:01AM
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