OK so I read 'Just Another Day in the Office'. There's not much I can really critique here as you have an excellent writing style IMHO. The only thing that I could see in the story itself was any reference to time of day or the 'thrill' of getting caught.......Other than that - great story! Keep up the great work!
yes i will read it an get back to u.don't listen to these doushes k.to each his own.they don't like it they should leave an keep their mouths shut.
constructive critism is what u asked 4,not whats in it 4 me,an no way in hell.he didn't like it he should just left then.thats all i'm saying
No way in hell!!! I don't really want to know about you sex life!! Why do people post things like that on here anyway???
Still, I personally don't care for that kind of thing!
I never said it wasn't! I just stated my opinion! I'm sure it's quite good if you like that kind of thing.....