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SubPrincess4Life SubPrincess4Life 26-30, F 4 Answers Jan 7, 2013 in Intimacy

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OK so I read 'Just Another Day in the Office'. There's not much I can really critique here as you have an excellent writing style IMHO. The only thing that I could see in the story itself was any reference to time of day or the 'thrill' of getting caught.......Other than that - great story! Keep up the great work!

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Thank you very much!

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yes i will read it an get back to u.don't listen to these doushes k.to each his own.they don't like it they should leave an keep their mouths shut.

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Lol they're welcome to their opinion just like the rest of us. I don't think they got very rude or insulting so I'm open to hearing what they had to say.

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constructive critism is what u asked 4,not whats in it 4 me,an no way in hell.he didn't like it he should just left then.thats all i'm saying

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I do agree with you there!!

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No way in hell!!! I don't really want to know about you sex life!! Why do people post things like that on here anyway???

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Its not our personal sex lives. They're just stories. Its easy for people of the same interests to relate to each other through fantasies etc

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Still, I personally don't care for that kind of thing!

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Lol then you don't read it hun. Nobody is there to force you to but just because it isn't your type of thing doesn't mean its not exactly what a lot of other people want.

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I never said it wasn't! I just stated my opinion! I'm sure it's quite good if you like that kind of thing.....

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Lol well I hope they are. I just started writing them. Its only my second one. I'm trying to become a better writer, that's why I ask for people to read them and leave comments. Its just easier doing it that way. It was nice talking to you. Good luck on your music :-)

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Thanks:-)

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