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Your words cut deeper than the blade I can hear you, You do know that right? When you yell and scream Those nasty words, I am just on the other side These walls are not thick The words you speak They pierce the skin Deeper than you think Deeper than any blade I feel my heartstrings tug My world has fallen I can see the abyss below Just take it back An I will not have to go ******, just something I wrote on the spot.....
undeadfish undeadfish 18-21, M 4 Answers Feb 7, 2013 in Poetry

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Well there's nothing wrong with it just lacks originality alot of poetry these days sounds like this

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was more or less just trying to get my thoughts out, thank you for the comment

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You're welcome I was merely saying to stand out you need to do what others aren't

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Very emotional.

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