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It's about a guy that lives in a crappy world full of gangsters. And everybody hates him. On a day he meets some new people that help him. And he's happy again they go on all kinds of adventures. From videogame worlds to catacombs everywhere.
anon13434 anon13434 18-21, M 4 Answers Jul 8 in Hobbies

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It'd be better if they went on all sorts of drive-bys and then got ice cream.

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ah okay thanks. i'm not J.K rowling or something + my english grammar sucks XD but still thanks for your opinion.

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It has potential.

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really? well thanks :)

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i feel like your story came from a gaming experience of Sims 3

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lel

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hey but it ain't bad, that short story is great.

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ah, thanks. I'm glad you like it. Can you rate it for me out of 10?

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to be fair i'd give 8/10. hey 80% is after all the passing grade in school

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Not a very interesting plot. Seems rather elementary.

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