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thesweetpast thesweetpast 26-30, M 3 Answers Mar 2 in Community

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LIFE is SWEET if you can SWEAT<br />
LIFE is HOT if you can TREAT<br />
LIFE is FIGHT if you rn't RIGHT<br />
LIFE is a LOVE LIVE IT...LIVE IT.

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She moves like a dancer<br />
Like a swan gliding over the lake<br />
Entanced, I gaze upon her fragility,<br />
Her humanity.<br />
She knows how I see her, yet<br />
Still she glides, unswrving from her pursuit of grace<br />
My lover,<br />
My wife,<br />
My friend<br />
I will never avert my gaze<br />
<br />
Hearsvoices

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Thanks Ep for not allowing me to edit the typos from my spontaneous poem. Dognammit, grrr....

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*entranced *unswerving etc

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lol

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nice, thanks for sharing

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Kinda detracts from my spontaneous outpouring of love for my wife when EP has removed the 'edit you answer' function... bunch of tosswads! Still, I'm pleased with my effort... I truly love MrsVoices :o)

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God is love <br />
A gift from above.

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nice, thanks for sharing

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