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I Am a Complicated Person

Complicated, Yes..

By: AdonisDone
Written on April 28th, 2011

I am cut into a puzzle,

with a picture that's black.

My multi-paneled face

is where I shelve a horde of masks.

I quip and gibe,

for I am a toddler.

I have wisdom

but only because of you, father.

I bend and fold my heart

to match any sword.

Which results in rocky coldness,

where love strikes not a chord.

I constantly seek,

to no avail.

And when it comes to life,

I seem to always fail.

 

I try speaking,

to send a message.

"--"

Fill my pause with your own adage.

 

But be Truthful

and make me see,

through this complication,

Oh! For you to speak

would break me free…

By: AdonisDone
Age: 26-30 , Male
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16 responses
  • Twilightangel29
    Twilightangel29

    Beautiful...

    Oct 12, 2012
    1 like
  • phatnhapi
    phatnhapi

    Love this too! I wonder if the person happened along to give you some insight into the complication :)

    Oct 12, 2012
    1 like
  • fmlegc91
    fmlegc91

    beautiful!

    Apr 16, 2012
    1 like
  • AdonisDone
    AdonisDone

    i made one last edit: "but only because of you, father."

    May 2, 2011
    2 likes
  • AdonisDone
    AdonisDone

    haha very good proverb Venus :))

    Apr 29, 2011
    1 like
  • AdonisDone
    AdonisDone

    thanks whitedot :))

    Apr 29, 2011
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  • AdonisDone
    AdonisDone

    thanks Luna

    Apr 29, 2011
    1 like
  • OoLunaoO
    OoLunaoO

    is a nice way to describe it

    Apr 29, 2011
    1 like
  • lipbloss
    lipbloss

    Complicated, but only because you have so many facets and strive to use them all wisely :)

    Apr 28, 2011
    1 like
  • AdonisDone
    AdonisDone

    thanks bluie (:

    Apr 28, 2011
    1 like
  • AdonisDone
    AdonisDone

    thanks bluie (:

    Apr 28, 2011
    1 like
  • bluie19
    bluie19

    AWESOME!! Loved it..

    Apr 28, 2011
    1 like
  • AdonisDone
    AdonisDone

    thanks snowberry :)

    Apr 28, 2011
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  • snowberry75
    snowberry75

    Very nicely done, yes one person does have the ability to break through barriers that noone has ever done so before. We all look for that person. Hope you find yours.

    Apr 28, 2011
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  • AdonisDone
    AdonisDone

    thanks haha :)

    Apr 28, 2011
    1 like
  • Intelligently
    Intelligently

    "I am cut into a puzzle,

    with a picture that's black.

    My multi-paneled face

    is where I shelve a horde of masks."



    Oh man.. I like that.

    Apr 28, 2011
    3 likes