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I Am a Dreamer and a Thinker

Five Days Later.

By: 2011A
Written on September 18th, 2012
By: 2011A
Age: 51-55 , Female
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  • littleonejade

    i saved this to my desk top, again wow
    It made me think of all the different ways i have change throught this journey

    Dec 16, 2012
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    • 2011A

      You honour me, Jade. kissesssssssssssssssssssss....I need to update this...xoxo

      Dec 16, 2012
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  • littleonejade

    WOW, you can write, what an amazing visualization!
    i can relate, ! ! !

    Dec 16, 2012
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    • 2011A

      I wish to write full-time soon. And it is an option. I have journalism background. And I do love words and creating...Thank you. xoxo

      Dec 16, 2012
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    • littleonejade

      you should! !! GOOD FOR YOU

      Dec 16, 2012
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  • Lushiro

    Beautiful.

    Oct 24, 2012
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    • 2011A

      Thank you, love. I have to post an update. The future spins...And things change...And the stone angel awakens...Love you. xoxo

      Oct 24, 2012
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  • sinathamby

    The sculptor has seen the angel in the stone hence he made her alive and still he there to cherish her,only she has to come out being a stone and still imagines so.Beautiful expression.

    Oct 23, 2012
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    • 2011A

      Your words honour me, sinathamby. And I thank you for seeing this. Kissessssssssssssssss....And smiles!

      Oct 23, 2012
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    • sinathamby

      you are welcome dear

      Oct 23, 2012
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  • Cachinga

    Poignant, powerful, complex, riveting. I thouroughly enjoyed it...

    Oct 18, 2012
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    • 2011A

      Thank you, woman with the jingling name! Your words are honouring me. kissessssssssssssss....xoxxox

      Oct 18, 2012
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  • maltesemermaid

    a thoughtful piece of writing that was a pleasure to easily imagine . . . from all three perspectives . . . thank you for sharing this cynthia . . . 8D

    Oct 13, 2012
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    • 2011A

      Sister of mine: I thank you so much....You are most welcome. Blessings upon you. Love you, too. xox

      Oct 13, 2012
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  • franklyspeaking

    "'Tis a gift to be simple / 'Tis a gift to be free...."

    Sep 28, 2012
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    • 2011A

      I like those words. Who wrote them and what is it called, please?

      Sep 28, 2012
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  • mrmoose1947

    I love the way you use words, thank you

    Sep 23, 2012
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    • 2011A

      You are welcome. I have journalism skills. I love the power of words. Starting reading at age 4 and never stopped. Kisssesssssssss.....

      Sep 23, 2012
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  • Jackinsd

    So many unanswered questions....but is the door shut forever?

    Sep 22, 2012
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    • 2011A

      I would say not. Just temporarily....And when it is opened again and willingly, watch out! *smiles softly*

      Sep 22, 2012
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    • Jackinsd

      Glad there is still hope...

      Sep 22, 2012
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    • 2011A

      Don't they say there is always hope? I still believe in a Forever man for me....Just wince a bit when I say it still....

      Sep 22, 2012
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  • peterpan36

    Why the title is Five Days Later? Not Two Days or Three Days Later? Sometimes, five days are too long when we are not patient any more. We hope everything returns to normal ASAP.

    Sep 20, 2012
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    • 2011A

      Because that is how many days later it was...Normal? Nothing in my life is normal, Peterpan. Surely you know that by now...

      Sep 20, 2012
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    • peterpan36

      Everybody love and adore you for you being not normal. For those great writers, or artists, in the world, their lives were or are never normal.

      Sep 21, 2012
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    • peterpan36

      We also love you for what you are and who you are. In general, we are proud of you.

      Sep 21, 2012
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    • 2011A

      Thank you.

      Sep 21, 2012
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  • cpgnatly

    The music box dancer and the stone angel must know each other or even be the same spirit. There is plenty to discover. I think the story is ominous. I think something bad happened and I think it is difficult to witness.

    Sep 19, 2012
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    • 2011A

      You are perceptive, my new friend. Very....How did the story make you feel? I love your comments. Refreshing...Honest...Intelligent. Quite a man you are...Thank you.

      Sep 19, 2012
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    • cpgnatly

      Ominous. Afraid of the terror of the transition.

      Sep 19, 2012
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    • 2011A

      Explain, please. Which transition? Stone angel to what? Music box dancer to what? Unclear. You would have to read Music Box Dancer-the first poem-please first to understand why she is important to this posting just as the stone angel is...There is a previous stone angel too. Thank you for your comments. Readers usually just praise. That is nice. But I appreciate more..
      Is it terror? Or something else?

      Sep 19, 2012
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  • silentwriter180

    *sigh*

    Sep 18, 2012
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  • Lushiro

    This makes me sad... :(

    Sep 18, 2012
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    • 2011A

      do you feel it?

      Sep 18, 2012
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    • Lushiro

      Every word, empathy was strong in this one.

      Sep 18, 2012
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    • 2011A

      how did you leave feeling? words....

      Sep 18, 2012
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