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Like A Beautiful Breeze

By: wiseriser
Written on September 22nd, 2011
By: wiseriser
Age: 51-55 , Male
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    angelinafreckle

    Gorgeous , what beautiful memories ...... Thanks for sharing :-)

    Mar 26
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    wiseriser

    thank most sincerely for your kind comments, likemyfire and michaelraybaker...im both humbled and grateful..best wishs to you both...wiseriser

    Mar 8
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    michaelraybaker

    nice poem, well written.... If I were to write a poem right now, I would title it "A Twist Of Fate". We have been having so many tornadoes in Kentucky last couple days, 21 people have died, it's just been crazy!!! Just wanted to say riser, I looked your poem over for mistakes and couldn't really find any. So I'm impressed with your writing skills. It's easy to throw sentences together and make them ryme, but for them to make sense and ryme and to tell a story is very well done, it must have came from your heart. I give you two thumbs up! :-}

    Mar 4, 2012
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    luckylassie

    sweet and sad. (hugs)

    Mar 2, 2012
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      wiseriser

      thank you for your comments

      Mar 5, 2012
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    MrsHoover

    Lovely poem wiser x

    Dec 17, 2011
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      wiseriser

      t y mrs hoover appreciate your comment x

      Dec 18, 2011
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    yinyang35

    nice one! I was totally moved by this poem.

    Nov 18, 2011
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      wiseriser

      thank you YingYang, glad u liked it--appreciate your comment.

      Nov 18, 2011
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    annie1953

    Beautiful poem

    Nov 11, 2011
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      wiseriser

      thanks Annie

      Nov 11, 2011
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    dare2love

    I loved your poem, but so sad. It flowed beautifully. Glad you shared

    Oct 21, 2011
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      wiseriser

      thank for commenting on it'' glad u liked it

      Oct 22, 2011
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    gr8jesus

    Nicely penned....:)

    Oct 13, 2011
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    annie1953

    THANK YOU FOR SHARING THAT WITH US VERY NICE

    Sep 30, 2011
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      wiseriser

      sometimes annie we forget the treasures we have until they are taken from us. thank you for your kind comment--appreciated

      Oct 1, 2011
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    B3lla01

    Very nice and so sad.

    Sep 26, 2011
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      wiseriser

      thank you B3lla01, i appreciate your comment

      Sep 26, 2011
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    ZzztinkZzz

    Wow Wiser .. what a touching poem !!

    Sep 22, 2011
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      wiseriser

      thank you for your comment zzz. been a while deciding if i should share it..then decided why not..?

      Sep 22, 2011
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