Die By The Sword By Andrew Moor Croft

Hi I would like opinions on my writing
Here is a song off mine i have written

Die by the sword

Treat me good
Now read my palm
Is this the life
That we're both on
Futures mapped out
In my head
Fortune teller saying
Something else
Keep my cool
Hold my head up strong
Not a thing can go wrong
No the words,
Sing along.

Walking down a one way road
Nowhere to go
Searching for parts off my soul
in this cold In this cold
Please ohhh help me lord
Open my eyes
I don't want to die by the sword

Die by sword
our win your game
If I disappear
only got yourself To blame
Andrewslyrics Andrewslyrics
22-25, M
Jan 8, 2013