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I Am a Writer of Poetry, Short Stories and Novels

Someone Please Read This And Tell Me What You Think!!

By: thequeenofeverything
Written on January 16th, 2013
Age: 18-21 , Female
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14 responses
  • themanoflegends

    I'd go with the third one as the best. It just feels right, like it has the most heart in it.

    Feb 28
    1 like
  • Unquestioned

    Hmmm sounds like righteouschica is nice and cuddly. (HUGS)

    Jan 17
    2 likes
  • YBlah

    Well I'd just say start at 1.

    Jan 17
    1 like
  • mtiff

    1 was good :)

    Jan 16
    1 like
  • Rivfader

    Stories 1, and 2, are what interested me the most. Number 1 I'd like to see more of, and it was written the best, I thought. (Meaning the words used, and they setting.) 2 sounds creepy, like a bunch of crazy archaeologist cannibals, lol!

    Jan 16
    3 likes
    • thequeenofeverything

      I spent the most amount of time on number 1 XD and the least on stories 2 and 3

      Jan 16
      1 like
    • Rivfader

      I could tell, lol! Like I said, I though 1 was the best, but 2 also caught my interest 'cause of the whole "FEAST" then they run out to the highway thing, lol!

      Jan 16
      1 like
  • Soloviento

    I like most stories 2 and 4. Story 4 is based on real facts,isn't it? :)

    Jan 16
    1 like
    • thequeenofeverything

      I am actually underweight and I've never been fat my entire life so not really :P I just thought righteouschica would be a good name to use since Ashley, Jennifer, Rebecca etc. seemed too boring.

      Jan 16
      1 like
    • Soloviento

      ok, now seriosly. Story 1 gives me the feeling that I have read it thousands of times and is boring. Story 2 got my attention, found it funny and left me wanting for more. Story 3 does not tell me much, story 4 I found very interesting.

      Jan 16
      1 like
    • thequeenofeverything

      thank you! :P now I am writing story 4 and I will definitely share it with you XD

      Jan 16
      1 like
  • 5thApprentice

    Story one took my fancy the most. Hope you get over the writers block, good luck :D

    Jan 16
    1 like