Days have gone and so have nights
I can't find you, you are my light
Why did you go leaving this way
Breaking my heart and making me cry
Why couldn't you just give it another try
My heart you hurt and no one to comfort

Yesterday I met you in my dreams
Told you what my heart it feels
You still ignored it and walked away
Saying that finally it’s the day
You love me no more it’s just gone
You can’t do much you are just not drawn

Now you belong to someone else
Still when I see you my heart just melts
Tell me where did we go wrong
Tell me why our love's not lifelong
I know I’m not really that strong
I know I just can't go on

Letting you go is hard to do
You really don't have a clue
What my broken heart has to go through
Sometimes I think if only you knew
How my love for you is still true
carmadonna23 carmadonna23
36-40, F
2 Responses Feb 19, 2014

Beautiful poem and one that touched me very deeply. This is exactly how I feel right now, it is very painful to have someone you truly love walk away from you and break your heart. It's been 4 months and I still cry everyday. Your poem really says it all, so thank you and know you are not alone.

I agree with cjepp. I'm recovering from a badly broken heart when a woman I cared deeply about turned out not to care so much about me. Long story, of course ( aren't they always!), but it has been so hard to get back in the everyday track and let life flow naturally. I want so desperately what I can't , and will never have. I keep waiting for the fog to left and it doesn't. Some days are better than others, but finding closure has been so hard.

So touching what you've said. I'm going through this at the moment. It's horrible and I'll never see or speak to her again. It's her birthday today too and I wish that I was with her. I feel like a big baby but I can't help my feelings. Thanks.

Thanks dps23 and no you are not a baby!! You just a strong man who has the guts to talk about his feelings and are not afraid to express them either!! Wish you all the best!! God Bless!! :)

Thank you so much for your kind words. God bless you.