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Broken

i was walking home
it was dark
i couldn't see anything
 it felt like i was being watched
i looked around and saw nothing
all of a sudden 
he is pushing me down
down to the ground
he is scratching
and tearing
I'm frozen in shock
my laying there
with my eyes wide
and my mouth open
then after a few second
i struggle and try to break free
but I'm pin down
i push and push
trying to break free
after that day
when was alone
he would tear
beat
and scratch at me
one day i was tired of it
i stood up to him
started to throw punches
i hit him
i clawed at him
i shredded him
i did what he did to me
i took him by surprise
i broke him like he broke me
i never him again
i was on my way to being repaired
invisiblegirl904 invisiblegirl904 18-21, F 2 Responses Aug 30, 2011

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I WAS RELIEVED WHEN I READ IT WASN'T REAL. MY HEART HAD SUNK. ... GLAD TO KNOW YOU'RE OKAY & IT NEVER HAPPENED. THANK GOD!!

makes the reader push and you can begin to feel the antisipationa, the adrenaline focusing on you pushing and shoving him off. Good Good I like It