One Day, Someday...

Dec. 25, 2010

One day, I will look into your eyes; like dark liquid chocolate; or like deep clear water; or like gentle grey-green leaves...the color does not matter, only that those eyes will look right through me, into my soul. 

One day, I will touch your hand; rough and work-worn; or soft and pale; or strong and tanned...such things do not matter, only that your touch will zing through me like a delicious frisson of electric shock. 

One day, I will hear your voice; sweet and mannerly; or harsh and uncultured; or average and simplistic...tone does not matter, as long as I know your ever word carries your love to me.

One day, I will speak my every thought and feeling without fear, and you will be free to do the same.

One day, I will see my every longing reflected in you...and you will find your every wish within me.

One day, I will find you, or you will find me.

FeatherInTheWind FeatherInTheWind 22-25, F 8 Responses Dec 25, 2010

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Usually I'm the one writing poetry, whether it's good or not, though people say they like it.

Enough about me, though, this touched me. It described my feelings in a way I couldn't word until this point. I thank you deeply.

Hopefully your endeavors in finding such a soulmate don't make you weary and hopefully you'll find that soulmate as soon as possible so that you can spend as much time as possible with them.

Either way, enjoy the journey and eventually living the dream.

Thank you! :D

Amazing, just amazing. :)

Thanks, and best wishes to you too.


beautiful ..think u wrote what i best wishes....

Thanks. :)

You too!

Beautiful. Well said!

Best of luck for you. ;)

Thanks. :D

Best of luck to you as well, with whatever you may be longing for. :)