The Search.

I love the way you have shifted the points of views throughout this :)
the language you have used too, really captures what you seem to be explaining.
Really well done :D
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Thanks for your comment. I like writing "poems", but haven't written in so long. I wondered if it made sense to anyone else and now I know.
Thanks again
oz

This poem is really deep.I think everyone has a part in them that feels like this.I used to write poems but lately I just can't seem to put my feelings into words anymore.So thats a great gift you have there.

I can really appreciate where you're coming from in your poem. I also write poems or fragments occasionally and wonder about similar themes to those you express so well.

Beautiful i loved it.. i understand it, i feel, i just don't know how to say it.. explain it. You explained it all for us =)

nice poem :)

Thank you all for your wonderful comments. I really can't find the words to express my appreciation for what you have said. All I can say once again is thankyou.
oz

Thank you for the nice poem, it is very touching.

1. From the replies, I would have to say that you have come across some kindred souls here, who share similar feelings. I guess the digital communications does has it's advantages.

2. I often think many of us would do much better in life if we would be guided from childhood do be more prepared for a path "from the alone to the alone". since this is the reality many come to live, and not just the "happily ever after" which is being fed again and again as an only option.
maybe this way people will learn to be more kind to their fellow man and a bit more prepared for their own path.

In any case,
Lovely poem,
thank you,

From across the other side of the globe,
A thousand blessings and a million hugs,

Green Samurai !

Great poem.

You have given the real worth of LIFE .. well said .. cheers.:)

I have Joined in this community to know the facts


but
lots of horrible things had happened and some of which I had been through.....

now am in a situation where I could see the only .. The Way towards my Loving Soul which is not with me now.. in this world..

However Have A Great Life and Enjoy the Every Moment as it comes to you....