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I Am Very Passionate and Intense When I Make Love

Pulling Us In

By: wildf1ower
Written on October 15th, 2011
Age: 22-25
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16 responses
  • uneedapankin

    Well done!

    Oct 22, 2012
    1 like
  • massagethelady

    You sure pulled me into the intensity. Nicely done. Thanks for those images.

    Oct 16, 2012
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  • massagethelady

    You sure pulled me into the intensity. Nicely done. Thanks for those images.

    Oct 16, 2012
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  • lileddie3

    Awesome!!!! Paints a wonderful picture

    Sep 20, 2012
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  • outdoorfire

    Daisy - great stuff. I enjoy it. Makes me desire more!

    Jan 17, 2012
    2 likes
  • ABforever

    very good descriptions!

    Jan 17, 2012
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  • dirk42

    Beautiful!

    Jan 15, 2012
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  • wildf1ower

    thank you all for the kind comments...they mean so much to me!

    Jan 14, 2012
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  • aurorashower

    Such a beautiful fury of what real passionate expression is in a deep bond built between two. So intense and immense. Bravo. what have you for an Encore?

    Nov 21, 2011
    2 likes
  • mgarhy

    thats the dream i wish to have every day when i find the woman of my dream that if i am going to find her .its so good

    Nov 19, 2011
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  • 2kool69

    OMG! I just came! Very nicely done sweetie! now Im hard again! Boing!

    Nov 14, 2011
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  • qbranchxvi

    I am left speechless. That's the kind of passionate love I would want during sex. Well done on your poem.

    Nov 9, 2011
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  • wildf1ower

    'boiling breath' was referring to the heat during sex essentially, and when i wrote 'drip' it wasn't a literal meaning, but rather painting a figurative image of drips of water due to heat, somewhat like boiling water

    Nov 8, 2011
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  • moonshine101

    i like the emotion but am not sure about the "boiling breath"

    Nov 8, 2011
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  • ncbaseball4321

    Wow...you express your passion so vividly!!!

    Nov 4, 2011
    2 likes
  • IrwinFletcher

    Fantastic job!

    Oct 20, 2011
    2 likes