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I Am Writing a Book

Excerpt From My Book.

By: urbrandofheroin
Written on August 2nd, 2009
Age: 22-25 , Female
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  • amysangels

    is very good..n i like ur comment above,i want to b more descriptive too..im still tryin to write something but i don think is ever so good.u r writing very well though

    Feb 2, 2011
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  • urbrandofheroin

    you will do great! There is no age limit to writing. The thing to do to prepare yourself for using descriptions as I have, is to mentally describe scenes in your life.



    The next time you're outside, think about the scenery, then, in your mind, describe it as if you were writing a book. I got the scene above after sitting on my front porch in the middle of a thunderstorm. I just made it fit my book.



    Always ask yourself, could I have been more descriptive?? Instead of, "She watched the stars", use, "She sat alone, in the still of the night, gazing at twinkling diamonds that floated in an endless sea of black"... Something like that!

    Aug 24, 2009
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  • twilightfan123

    i love it! i'm only 14 and trying to write a book (kinda crazy huh?).. i wish i could describe things the way you did there.. anyways good luck!

    Aug 24, 2009
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  • lesshissMORECAT

    Yes... hers was very descriptive...

    Aug 3, 2009
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  • boredathome

    its tough to write a book. I have been writing one for the past 8 years! :) One problem that I have is the use of imagry.... you have given that in your sample above. (Caroline opened her eyes to see leaves riding on the angry breeze. Sprays of mist spritzed her, dampening her shirt, and her hair. )



    Good Luck!

    Aug 3, 2009
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