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I Am Writing A Story

Preview To "risen" (chapter One)

By: Snow1353
Written on February 18th, 2013
By: Snow1353
Age: 13-15 , Female
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  • AlmostAristotle

    Well I just had to follow datura I guess, and i'd like to follow her comments too, great dialogue, and a superb talent for leaving your readers right on the edge of their seats.
    I'd love to read your other stories, im a sucker for good writing, but for that I really do need the 'friend' thing.

    Feb 21
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  • datura

    I enjoyed this very much, Snow. You've got me hooked with the opening! And you've got a real flair for writing dialog, keeping it both realistic and interesting. Well done!

    Feb 20
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    • Snow1353

      Thanks, datura. I enjoy your feedback. :)

      Feb 21
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    • datura

      :-) My pleasure!

      Feb 21
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  • climber1

    OK That was an excellent start for anyone any age.
    You are very talented.
    You caught my interest.

    Feb 18
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    • Snow1353

      Thank you. :)

      Feb 18
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    • climber1

      You are very welcome.
      Now get to work. I am eagerly awaiting the next installment. : )

      Feb 18
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    • Snow1353

      :) Don't worry. There shall be more fairly soon. Probably by the end of the week.

      Feb 18
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    • climber1

      I will be looking forward to it. I understand there is life outside of here though; if you can not make it this week.
      Just don't forget us. : )

      Feb 18
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    • Snow1353

      How could I ever forget? :)

      Feb 19
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