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I Am Writing A Story

Chapter Three Of "Risen"

By: Snow1353
Written on February 19th, 2013
By: Snow1353
Age: 13-15 , Female
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  • AlmostAristotle

    Hi Snow.

    I followed my friend datura here, I read the story and enjoyed it very much.

    Being an old Brit, I have a question, what is a 'Shelk'?

    That apart I have to say that you write brilliantly, perfect grammar and correct spelling, but even more importantly you are an excellent story teller.

    I am intrigued to know what happens with Ender. Also i'd love to read parts 1 and 2. Alas I have to be a 'friend' to have access to them.

    Any chance of that?

    Whatever great story, beautifully written.

    Ari.

    Feb 21
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    • Snow1353

      A Shelk is partially explained earlier in the story, and I explain different attributes farther into the book. I do quite thank you for your feedback, and yes, I'll go ahead and add you so you can access the rest of it.

      Feb 21
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  • datura

    I've always loved a good flashback. And this is a good one!

    Feb 20
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  • climber1

    Like your use of adjectives. It would be very easy to hasten into the plot without giving us a clear picture of the characters. I am a little curious of their size though. : )
    Once again you left us at a really interesting spot and I certainly want to know how Ender is going to work himself into this.
    Your talent continues to shine.

    Feb 19
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    • Snow1353

      Thank you once again. And yeah, I forgot to put that in there, but all these are only rough drafts. Once I have the full thing, I plan to re-write it, being conscious of details and the like.

      Feb 20
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