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I Believe In Ghosts

My Eyes Won't Stop Shutting!

By: teenager2011
Written on June 23rd, 2009
Age: 18-21 , Female
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  • dreamcatcher31

    woah. Talk about creepy! Chinese twins.. ping pong balls. How weird. You could write a story about that! Somehow connect all of what you've seen into one big plot- that would be really awesome.



    Careful though! ;)

    Jun 26, 2009
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  • koyptakh

    Hi teenager2011

    I like your story. It pulled me into it. I wanted to know what happened. Were there any ping pong balls in the cellar? Why Chinese ghosts? Do you think people like to get scared so they have an excuse to get close to friends? Best explanation of ghosts I have ever read! Also are scary places good for curing writer's block?

    :)

    ps not being funny - I am not hung up on spelling - I believe the English Language is constantly evolving and should do. Your word "encluding ' is a new word as far as I know. It is very interesting as in the context it starts to read as excluding but then morphs into including. You are left not knowing what you think of the house. It is spooky! just sayin'. Clever if consciously meant by you or not. Some good things just appear to happen but wouldn't happen if the person had not actually done it.

    :)

    Jun 23, 2009
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