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Mourning Pain

MOURNING PAIN

Oh gentle moon in the darkest skies,
Can you not hear my heartfelt cries?

Beneath a million brightly twinkling stars,
Do not you feel you have left me with scars? 

Do not you sense my fear, mourning and doubt?
Leaving my soul wandering aimlessly about,

Awakening for a moment to the morning’s dew,
Can you not see my life is askew?

My heart is scattered across the moonlit skies,
Accompanied by a breeze of my heartfelt sighs.

My tears are falling like a gentle rain,
All are symbols of my silent pain.

 

infiniteheart infiniteheart 31-35, F 14 Responses Jan 26, 2010

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Very well expressed. You've touched me at my core...

That is amazing. Wow!

I know you wrote this a while a go now, but have not long joined and just found this...this is absolutely beautiful - heartfelt, painful, yet beautiful - the imagery is wonderful..... have i used enough adjective yet? Thank you for sharing, sincerely.... love and hugs....x

touched my heart!

That was beautiful, thanks for that. It is exactly how i m feeling now.

Big hugs to you

Thanks y'all!

It is a lovely yet painful poem. I'm sorry you hurt so... It will pass.



You will find love again.



*hugs*

I am so sorry that you are feeling such sadness...It's a beautiful poem



*hugs*

I can feel the pain in this post ((hug)) 4ever! I know you don't know me but I understand how you are feeling because I have been there. Feel free to contact me on PM if you need to talk.

Awesome and very true.

Thank you for your kind words.

Forevereheart, this is both beautiful and sincere. I love the simplicity and depth of your expression. I am so sorry that you feel that way. I believe your life will not always be askew. Jimmy

Thank you for your comments. That poem just poured from my heart and soul tonight.

Beautiful! Your words have so much meaning!



Eric