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I Believe In Love, Even If Love Does Not Believe In Me

Mourning Pain

By: infiniteheart
Written on January 26th, 2010

MOURNING PAIN

Oh gentle moon in the darkest skies,
Can you not hear my heartfelt cries?

Beneath a million brightly twinkling stars,
Do not you feel you have left me with scars? 

Do not you sense my fear, mourning and doubt?
Leaving my soul wandering aimlessly about,

Awakening for a moment to the morning’s dew,
Can you not see my life is askew?

My heart is scattered across the moonlit skies,
Accompanied by a breeze of my heartfelt sighs.

My tears are falling like a gentle rain,
All are symbols of my silent pain.

 

By: infiniteheart
Age: 31-35 , Female
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13 responses
  • JustBeIt
    JustBeIt

    That is amazing. Wow!

    Nov 21, 2012
    1 like
  • lostlittlefirefly
    lostlittlefirefly

    I know you wrote this a while a go now, but have not long joined and just found this...this is absolutely beautiful - heartfelt, painful, yet beautiful - the imagery is wonderful..... have i used enough adjective yet? Thank you for sharing, sincerely.... love and hugs....x

    Nov 1, 2011
    1 like
  • BarryOne
    BarryOne

    touched my heart!

    Oct 31, 2011
    1 like
  • Kitty444
    Kitty444

    That was beautiful, thanks for that. It is exactly how i m feeling now.

    Big hugs to you

    Feb 24, 2010
    3 likes
  • infiniteheart
    infiniteheart

    Thanks y'all!

    Jan 30, 2010
    2 likes
  • shoreguyct
    shoreguyct

    It is a lovely yet painful poem. I'm sorry you hurt so... It will pass.



    You will find love again.



    *hugs*

    Jan 29, 2010
    1 like
  • bellas31
    bellas31

    I am so sorry that you are feeling such sadness...It's a beautiful poem



    *hugs*

    Jan 28, 2010
    3 likes
  • fungirlmmm
    fungirlmmm

    I can feel the pain in this post ((hug)) 4ever! I know you don't know me but I understand how you are feeling because I have been there. Feel free to contact me on PM if you need to talk.

    Jan 28, 2010
    3 likes
  • BellaFairy
    BellaFairy

    Awesome and very true.

    Jan 27, 2010
    3 likes
  • infiniteheart
    infiniteheart

    Thank you for your kind words.

    Jan 26, 2010
    4 likes
  • jimmyblue
    jimmyblue

    Forevereheart, this is both beautiful and sincere. I love the simplicity and depth of your expression. I am so sorry that you feel that way. I believe your life will not always be askew. Jimmy

    Jan 26, 2010
    3 likes
  • infiniteheart
    infiniteheart

    Thank you for your comments. That poem just poured from my heart and soul tonight.

    Jan 26, 2010
    4 likes
  • usaone
    usaone

    Beautiful! Your words have so much meaning!



    Eric

    Jan 26, 2010
    4 likes