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Another Poem About My Rape:(

i took the shaky weapon
and i shot me in the head
it musta took some courage
to wind up somewhat dead

you see events transpired
that i took very badly
didnt take too long to sadly
wildly shag me

you saw french-kissing *****
wanting to lick your wanton stick
you felt my tightness glisten
and you thrust it in so thick

and as it slurped and kissed you
you thought, "this is the ****"
what you forgot was, Satan,
that i told you to quit

and i said no
and i said stop
and i said please
and you said ROT

i obeyed
because
in your vigor
i went rigor

i had already died

you raped, pillaged me
and opened me up wide
i bled and bled
while you pushed inside

my body was a temple
where you used to pray
now i see it simple,
as plain as it were day

there are those with clumsy *****
who seem to hungrily
want to bite every apple
from every forbidden tree

i told you i was off-limits
but at my temple you stayed
as i went cold,
you mutteringly preyed

you necrophiliac.
you murderer.
you rapist.
you killer of me.

you chopped down
my only lovely tree

foldedunfolding foldedunfolding 31-35, F 5 Responses Dec 8, 2012

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This is heartwrenching.

thank you for reading :( love you bunches.

OMG...Wonderfully written, yet a very sad event. No one should ever have to endure that. Unfortunately there are many wild animals out there looking for prey.


May you, nor others, ever encounter such a predator ever again.


All the best to you, Ms. foldedunfolding!

you are a very kind man. thank you so much for taking the time.

My pleasure, my friend. Your story definitely warranted my comments.


Nothing but the best for you in the future!

I sense a lot of pain...pain I understand as a result of my own depression for different reasons and it's enough to make me wish I could hug you to nullify the pain (for mutual relief)

thank you yes...a lot of pain

I'm so sorry this happened to you :( I know in a situation like this, words don't matter much but I'm really sorry that you had to go through this and I hope that the man who did this to you rots in hell.

you are such a sweetheart for saying what you said. words matter a LOT to me, in fact. thank you very much.

oh hun beautifully written i understand every word as its happened to me :) xxx

aww thanks. im sorry it happened to you as well:(