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I Deeply Believe In Female Submission As A Gift

After

By: awhitedot
Written on February 4th, 2013
By: awhitedot
Age: 36-40 , Male
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31 responses
  • affinityterra

    Well written. Such a lucky lady to receive such admiration.

    Feb 19
    1 like
  • Kathryn1985

    I don't think of it as sad at all just the end of one of the chapters . . . two satisfied with each other with the distinct promise of more.

    More for each of them

    Well done Dotness. Few things are lip-licking sexier than anticipation.

    Feb 12
    3 likes
  • Babydoll42

    Oh....that makes me sad....I want him to come back.

    Good writing :)

    Feb 8
    2 likes
    • awhitedot

      No worries. He always does!

      Feb 8
      1 like
  • RKHunter

    Very nice, very nice indeed. A perfect teaser, allows the imagination run wild both into the future as well as the past. One the best posts I've read in some time.

    Feb 8
    3 likes
  • LelainaTroy

    Well then.....where is the rest?....this is like the blurb on the back of the book that makes you crave the whole damn story NOW...a good measure of writing capability is the reader wanting more....even at the end of the book...still wanting more..and you have left me hanging here...lol....moreeeeeee ..this was excellent!

    Feb 7
    3 likes
    • awhitedot

      Wow! Thank you. This certainly encourages me to keep going.

      Feb 7
      1 like
  • Bedlamborne

    Wow.. that's the most erotically depressing thing I've ever read. Loved it.

    Feb 7
    2 likes
    • awhitedot

      Sounds like the result I was looking for.......extreme highs and lows!

      Feb 7
      1 like
  • goodlittlegirl

    Yes I agree with the cherry below me>>>>More Please

    Loved it Wdot, well written and captivating. Also made me a lil wet =)

    Feb 5
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    • awhitedot

      That most certainly is the goal!

      Feb 5
      1 like
  • Mmmcherries

    more ..pls

    Feb 5
    2 likes
  • KountryKutie2011

    thats such a sweet story. i love it

    Feb 5
    2 likes
  • LaSonnambula1

    A beautiful description of a moment captured in time. Bravo!

    Feb 4
    2 likes
  • CharlieUniform

    Mmmmmm..... Every time dottie.... every time.... but you know that right?

    Feb 4
    2 likes
    • CharlieUniform

      My finger may have stuck to the rate up button... O.O

      Feb 4
      1 like
    • awhitedot

      Sticky fingers???? How does that happen?

      Feb 4
      1 like
    • CharlieUniform

      *blushes* Seems to happen a lot around you. Please notice the space between A and Lot... as requested,,,,

      Feb 5
      1 like
  • CharlieUniform

    Im writing this before Ive read the story. I saw the title and my ladyparts did a kind of internal happysigh... *happysigh*
    I may be touching myself while reading, imagining and wishing that I was the female and you, of course, my Sir,,,,,

    Feb 4
    2 likes
  • Michelle0001

    Wow, seriously wow. Your words paint an amazingly clear picture and invoke incredible emotion. Thanks for sharing this, I really enjoyed it!

    Feb 4
    2 likes
    • awhitedot

      Thank you! I am glad you liked it.

      Feb 4
      1 like
  • YB01

    Melancholy

    Feb 4
    2 likes
  • JenniferSometimes

    Good work, dot. I remember a few encounters like that...

    Feb 4
    2 likes
    • awhitedot

      Thank you sir! Glad to spur the memories.

      Feb 4
      1 like
    • JenniferSometimes

      And you kind of know, even then, that it will never be any better than that moment.

      Feb 4
      1 like