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Noon 0:1

At Noon:01 this Blammed my mind,
This thought out of somewhere Whacked me:
I just wanted to be with you!
No rhyme. No reason, No warning.

So know you have me right where you want me
Perchance and now just What
Cause this Whalloped me
And Smacked me,
Tip-toed behind me, and
Blindfolded - Whispered
Guess Who?
And Spun me around!


( Written yesterday May 21, 2012 at noon :01.
This surprised me too!)





And Smacked me,

Tip-toed behind me
And blindfolded
Whispered Guess Who?
And Spun me around!
PoetryNEmotion PoetryNEmotion 51-55, F 5 Responses May 22, 2012

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The title of this poem is very high-tech. This poem is beautifully written with flavour of 21 century.

It is very modern in style and in form. I am experimenting. I enjoy new things. Thank you, honey!

I like it...we've all been hit like that from time to time....but you found all the right words...nicely done!!

Thank you! I am glad I could communicate this! You are welcome.

sometimes we surprise our self with are writings

It wasn't the writing, but the thought that surprised me! I am always writing day and night.

Thought can also surprise us the most

Indeed.

With a voice <br />
like creaking oak<br />
He comes behind <br />
and whispers...<br />
<br />
[yes]

You are so sweet!

Damnit girl, that is good!

I just went with the flow. It hit me at noon:01!
So I went with it! New styles are enjoyable! I am honoured by your praise!

And I am laughing too because he will not believe it either! *singing now*