I Grow Helpless When My Neck Is Bitten

Surrender

By: softkitti

Written on April 14th, 2010

ITS ALL I CAN DO TO SAY NO TO YOU

WHEN YOU LOOK AT ME THAT WAY EYES DELVING INTO MINE STRAIGHT INTO MY SOUL

I LOOK AWAY BUT FEEL YOUR STARE LIKE A CARRESS

I TURN MY BACK TOWARDS YOU , BUT YOUR HEAT WARMS MY SKIN

MAKING ME HOT AND BOTHERED

I WONT SURRENDER I TELL MYSELF , I WONT GIVE IN

THOUGH THE HEAT OF YOU SCORCHES ME , IT WILL NOT MELT MY RESOLVE

I HAVE GIVEN YOU ENOUGH CHANCES

I HAVE GIVEN YOU ENOUGH TIME

I WILL NOT ACCEPT JUST YOUR BODY , I WANT YOUR HEART AND MIND I WANT THEM ALL

WITH THAT IN MIND , I START TO TURN TO SAY GOODBYE

BUT YOUR QUICKER THAN EVER

I FEEL YOUR BREATHE ON THE SKIN OF MY NECK AND MY EYES CLOSE WITHOUT PERMISSION

I FEEL YOUR STRONG HANDS ON MY SHOULDERS AND MY BONES MELT

I FEEL YOUR LIPS LIGHTLY SKIM THE CONNECTION FROM SHOULDER TO NECK

AND MY NECK FALLS TO THE SIDE ON ITS OWN

YOUR WET MOUTH OPENS ON ME AND YOUR TEETH TAKES WHAT IS THEIRS TO TAKE

MY MOANS MINGLE WITH YOUR DEEP GROAN OF APPROVAL

AND DESPITE MYSELF , I AM HELPLESS TO YOU ONCE AGAIN

By: softkitti

Age: 22-25 , Female

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16 responses

softkitti

No I dont think that would be weird at all .. in fact I bet it was fun no?=-D thanks for your comment kzk

Mar 30, 2011
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Kzinlove

Would it be weird if i said ive been in this situtition and instead of him just biting me i was biting him...?

Mar 30, 2011
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drmanuelrj331

SOFTKITTI......ARE YOU STILL HOT???......SHOULD I CALL THE FIRE DEPARTMENT????.......OR DO YOU WANT ME TO FAN THE FLAMES UNTIL YOU BURST INTO FLAMES???.....WHAT DO YOU WANT ME TO DO????..........LET ME KNOW.......I HAVE THE FIREHOSE HERE IF YOU NEED IT.....

Mar 30, 2011
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softkitti

wow =-O that was hot !!

Mar 30, 2011
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drmanuelrj331

MY HEART IS BEATING FASTER.........IM BREATHING HARDER.........HARDER.......MY HANDS ARE GETTING MOIST........MOIST........WET........IF FEEL WET.........LIKE A TEENAGER HAVING HIS FIRST SLOW DANCE WITH A MORE EXPERIENCED WOMAN.......TOUCHING OUR THIGHS TOGETHER........MOVING IN CLOSER......FEELING THAT TINGLE DOWN THERE......WISHING IT WOULD NOT STOP...........DR J

Mar 30, 2011
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Cici88

Oh dear *fans self* *puts on scarf* Yup I know what you mean Kitti, but couldn't have said it better myself :P

Aug 10, 2010
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SickDreams

WOW ! you drained me with your words

*bites Softy's neck*

Jun 3, 2010
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Sylphy

Oh yes... let me do the hula hoop, too... and just... arrr... take away this whooo... *fans herself*... escalating heat... *winks*...

May 31, 2010
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softkitti

ah la amore '... friggin lust can melt resolve all the time no?...*runs and hula hoops with Sylph* =-)

May 31, 2010
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Sylphy

Love the words, Kitti... and the way she retreats but falls trap nonetheless... *giggles*... sweet and fiery, no?... love it... *giggles with Kitti even more*...

May 31, 2010
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softkitti

thank you gentleman1 .....I am glad yoiu liked it =-D

May 30, 2010
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redtailfree48

The funny part is, I don't so much I sting ;O) thats what scorpios do from time to time, could be just as interesting lol

Apr 16, 2010
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softkitti

thank you redtailfree ....hmm yes ... that bite can push some buttons I must say *giggles* thanks for your comments

Apr 15, 2010
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redtailfree48

If i knew how woman reacted to the subtle bite on the neck I would have been more aggressive to take that first nibble or bite ;O) quite a passionate peom Smiles, it was well written by the heart and soul

Apr 15, 2010
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softkitti

*kitti runs and does sexy .shimmy shimmy co co pop dance * ..thank you darling scribs ...yes .....if only fantasy meets reality no?...=-)

Apr 15, 2010
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scribbles7

smiles...nicely written,Sweetie.....you got a way with words..

Apr 14, 2010
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