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There is a place that I call my home,
  There is a place that time passes by...

Where the floors carry our souls,
  Where the windows beckon the light,

This is a place where I don't feel alone...

Where the walls echo our song,
  Where pictures of you still fill my mind,

This is a place that I call my own...

Where doors creek and moan all day long,
  Where rooms have collected our lives,

This is a place where you and I, stopped time...

Where two hearts beat freely as one,
  Where our souls truly come to reside,

This is the place that I call my home,
  This is the place where I don't feel all alone...

  -Enaud

Written October 14th 2010
AnonymouslyWritten AnonymouslyWritten 41-45, M 8 Responses Oct 14, 2010

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This is beautiful and so true...

Thank you Ximena, I bet you have beautiful words when writing from the heart...

Yes, puzzles, I have been seeming to find a few of them here lately...<br />
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Sorry I missed this Marji and I am very glad you like this... and even more so with the insight...<br />
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I wish i was more of a write between the lines guy just for you :) I always tend to over analyze things myself, it cause me to read slower than most ...

Well thank you Marji, I am glad you like it, it is from the heart about someone that is on this very site that I have known in person for going on three years to my entire life if you get what I am saying, I'm sure you do. In fact she is a friend of yours and she has commented on a story of yours today and you on one of hers not very long ago at all. So if you read this again, there is a riddle you may try to put together, I will tell you she is not in my circle but she knows who I am and comments on things that I write and she knows they are about her and I...<br />
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If you like my poem here I hope you read some of my other writings and poems, I would love to have your opinion on them as well. I just took up writing within the last couple of years and she is the reason, because she writes so beautifully and brings words out from within my heart that I never thought possible, even though we cannot be together anymore... I can still hold on to hope for the future...

Thank you girlcapitol, I appreciate the encouragement but to me the question is not finding another,it is never finding another her...<br />
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If I found another, all I will be doing, is pretending... and that would not be fair, to the one I find ...<br />
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Thank you for the very sincere comment and I hope I have not belittled it in any way with my reply, it was not intended that way at all, if your read more of my stories and poems you may see why I fill the way I do...

So many lovely words... you will have no trouble finding a new lover, Enaud. Everyone loves you and you will not be lonely for long.

I would have read more, we share much...<br />
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May I thank you again...

that's why there's no place like home...!<br />
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there's a place I can call a home<br />
enveloping arms saying am not alone<br />
in each grasp and touch<br />
I feel everything becomes too much!<br />
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I love the feel of silent breathing<br />
the heaving of chests with quiet moaning<br />
the endless time spent in one moment<br />
sent shiver and unexplained torment.<br />
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ohh...too much space, sorry the words just flowed through my mind!