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I Have a Poem to Share

My Attempt, As A Remarkable Poetic Mind... Who I Feel Is Not So Remarkable On Paper.

By: LeeDude
Written on November 29th, 2010
By: LeeDude
Age: 22-25
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  • raedeejay

    I think you have something going for you ... the first verse is (in my opinion) the best, because it's the least 'poetic' ... suggest you just use your own voice & not worry about the 'poetic' language & poses...

    Dec 15, 2012
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  • YaziiJ

    :') that was short and sweet. I'd love to see more of ur work if u dnt mind writing more for me. Please?? :)

    Nov 30, 2010
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  • WiltingBlossom

    Lol, well it worked out for you! It's okay, beginnings and endings are the hardest part. Speaking from my own personal experience when I get towards the end I suck so bad it takes me forever to fit the right words in the end, and in the beginning staring at an empty page... ugh. But during the middle? The ink is flowing!!

    Well thanks for the play by play on your poem writing, it all makes perfect sense :]

    Nov 29, 2010
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  • LeeDude

    Wow thanks. Like aforementioned though... There's is no real feeling involved.

    It's kinda like method acting... Its rough to begin I guess for my method was poor.

    But towards the end, I started trying feeling like an 18th century hopeless romantic... Because that is what poetry means to me pretty much.



    Looking at many other poems, lost love, forbidden love, unrequited love ... Love is a common reoccuring theme. So it was an obvious choice.

    Not wanting to go by anything personal to me is where the fantasy/dream references come to play.

    Nov 29, 2010
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  • WiltingBlossom

    The beginning is a little rough, but still good. The ending is fantastic!! :] I agree with Mystik, believe it'll come. It'll come. Keep hope alive, let the fantasy be a dream!

    Nov 29, 2010
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