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Loving Again

i fled the scene
i lay down low
and hiding there
the tears did flow

i sat so still
 here on my hill
and saw the wreckage
and the spill

it seemed to me
a sorry sight
 so i retreated
into night

but day came swiftly
from that night
horizons broader
into sight

i leave the night
i seek the day
it's golden sunlight
i will play














shenightowl shenightowl 51-55, F 5 Responses Apr 3, 2012

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Nice one! Thanks for sharing.

I like it, that is very good. It has a nice flow..

Aww i love this .. it says so much about leaving the darkness and entering new brighter and sunnier days .. don't ever doubt your writing its awesome enough to be published in a book of poems you know .. ;)

you are toooooo kind!! thank you hunxx

Wow....you did it again. It's amazing what you give me when I Read your amazing words! thank you thank you...it's so true!

i feel the same when i read your words my dear friend!

Lovely and touching. well done...shenightowl.<br />
I'm a fan :)

cheers for that kevin.. i am still not very confident with what I write, so i do appreciate your encouragement!