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She Is...

She is,
the morning glory
of,
my heart,
my soul,
my mind,

She is,
the pixie dust
of,
my night,
my dreams,
my imagination.

She is,
the irreverent sound
of,
my future,
my life,
my heart.

She is,
my smile.

She is,
my light.

She is,
my stones
on a creek bed.

She is,
the water
that surrounds
and
smooths them.

And she is,
so much more,
She is...



       -Enaud
AnonymouslyWritten AnonymouslyWritten 41-45, M 35 Responses Dec 18, 2010

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hmmmm, there's that word lucky again, words I felt needed to be written...<br />
Thank you for the beautiful and I am glad you liked it Sunshine...

foreverjustme, I believe, She Is, adored and loved by many...<br />
Thank you very much for saying so...

Thank you so very much Roxanne, simple and meaningful, yes, I like that...

Beautiful AW. Such simple words but so meaningful.

jessbox it is very nice that you think so, Thank you...

Thank you so much Mahal for stopping by, I am very glad you enjoyed and think it's beautiful...

:) @ blackforest4u

Very beautiful!!!

I just wanted to stop by and say I too enjoyed your beautifully written poem.

I know She is your life.....no one can't take away those thoughts about her, I guess...She is what she is and you love her the way she is...lol

And they do and they still find themselves indecisive...<br />
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I hate this saying for this but it was the first to come to mind, you can lead a horse to water, well you know the rest.

Frustration is common to us all though. We can only attempt to share, with our words or with our actions. In my experience it's rare to find another person who sees things our way. How can we be sure though? I don't think we ever can be, not entirely. All we can do is paint our pictures, write our words, sing our songs and hope someone will recognise themselves in what we produce.

I break a lot, I see things and know they are right but what I don't know is how to show another, so I run... I break and run... I am just tired of the let down, the frustration that comes from within me to not have that ability to show someone what I see...

How can you not trust your own heart? With hindsight we might think we made a right or a wrong decision ... perhaps got it wrong or went the wrong way ... but isn't that part of being human after all? we have the right to make mistakes ... to be hurt ... and we learn and move on. Or maybe not. Nothing is set in stone, we are not perfect beings, we get things wrong. Life is chaotic. We can all be self-destructive ... forgive yourself ... we're not able to control the feelings of others ... all you can do is love ... no regrets.

Hope and Optimism, I wish I knew how to cushion myself with that. I always turn in and become self destructive when I hope...<br />
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When I know something is right yet the other is unsure with a divided heart, I tend to run and turn against my own surety and feelings...

But this is what we all seek AW ... all of us. A future with unbridled passion and filled with love. It's a dream I try to follow within the confines of the life I'm living ... we have to make a space of comfort for ourselves, even if the space is surrounded by brambles. But we can cushion ourselves to a large extent. Hope and optimism can sustain us. Much love to you too.

WiB I am glad I have friends that know where I am coming from at times. I wish I had a few that could tell me where I'm going, I think we all need one or two of those. Give me a future I can live with unbridled passion, love and have it be shared equally between the two, an equal sharing of give and take of bending to each others weakness's and each others strengths. That is what I am looking for, passion and deep felt emotion are a part of it all. When I break I am looking for hands on my face to calm and steady me with her gaze, her love, moving me through and forward with confidence as i would do the same with her...<br />
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Rambling a bit, sorry<br />
I so enjoy your comments to me, thank you my friend, much love<br />
Duane

You can feel the yearning...and the angst in this. It pulls at that place, deep inside, where we confront some of the most beautiful...and painful...feelings, in their most raw and naked form.<br />
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A wonderful poem AW, thank you for sharing it.

Your writing is always so full of longing, hope and regret. It's both heartbreaking and heartening and speaks so eloquently on my behalf. Always a pleasure to read, knowing it comes from such passion and such deep felt emotion.

Writing with heart, I wonder, does it do it good. If so I wish I could find mine again. Moods of torment and heartache do no one any good, writing them, sharing them does bring some peace. And friends reading, commenting and encouraging, there is good in that. I'm chasing my tail.<br />
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I love that you read this, Mydarkbrowneyes and thank you, your comment means a great deal to me no matter what I've said above, Thank you...

My Oz that is Dorothy, thank you for this it means a lot...<br />
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Does there come a point when CPR brings life back for good? let me know k...

This is just so beautiful and SHE IS very blessed to have someone that sees all of that in her! My heart aches for you... for her... you seem to capture that emotion and so many others in your writing!<br />
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You deserve beautiful things (not material things!) and beautiful happenings in your life - and you can't buy those with money...<br />
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And I think it is a testament to your authenticity that you can only be honest when asked how you are doing! I am that way and wish all people were. Keep hope alive - I do! (Sometimes I have to give it a little CPR - but I revive it each and every time!)

Thank you Queenofargyl but funny you should mention my heart, I just wrote of it... In a not so beautiful way...

Thank you very much QueenofArgyl, I just like saying and spelling your name hehe<br />
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I should have left it up the first time. It seems I am always a day late and a dollar short in everything I do in life :(

Why thank you MissM-D <br />
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and I will have to say, She Is Gorgeous

Thank you very much Girl-C... I'm not sure about the well part, I'll get back to you on that :-/<br />
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I really do appreciate you asking, I just have to be honest about things like that. I hope everything is good with you and your holidays are shaping up into good ones...

Another enrapturing piece...your sentiments are very beautiful, Duane. Hope all is well with you, Friend.

See, I knew it, how many accounts do you have Des? hehe

OK, that just might not have sounded right...<br />
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For the record before the EP pervs attack i am talking about her stocking kitty... in the picture

Oh you want a gesture comment war huh?<br />
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*Big Hugged You While Sneaking Catnip to Kitty*